Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 9

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

OMG Shruti! This felt like a best suited piece of writing meant for me to read. I've been craving to watch the whole thing you have going on in the TS on the show, especially an agonized Sanskaar and Swara's growing feelings for him, while most people are dreading it. 😆

Kya karun, i'm a sucker for agonized heroes!

The Part 1 was so blissful and romantic. I wasn't expecting when RagLak were acting so vague and mysterious, but then Sanky came in like a hero and swept Swara off her feet 😆 The whole candy floss and stuffed animal thing was so cute ❤️ and how can I forget Swara blushing in the car due to inappropriate thghts abt Sanky 😆 That was the best part!

Now coming to Part 2, what you called heavy was actually a full on paisa vasool entertainer for me😆

Swara really needs to start trusting her instincts when it comes to RagLak. Poor Sanky was so hurt wen a scheming Ragini brght him to Swa---Lak 🥺

Their tension in the bedroom after that and Sanky's outburst was absolutely perfect and it couldnt be more true! Swara needs to stop getting manipulated by Ragini 👍🏼

The Laksh wrist cutting part and the way you described Swara's concern actually made me panic for a while until Swara's reasoning behind it was revealed later, toh bechara Sanky toh must have been heartbroken 💔

And lastly, my favorite bit...The AP and Sanskaar scene. I wish their equation and the punishment fr Sanskaar's jhooti promise is actually expressed on the show too! The scene was so intense. Imagining Sanky's hurt there was so painful. You wrote it really well. Loved the mytho references too especially the last one abt mothers 😆 AP totally deserved that!

Enjoyed Sanskaar's and Ragini's equation a lot too.

Can't wait for the next part! Update soon!

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I seriously feel connected with this part Shruti.😳 That Ram and Kaikai reference clicked with me immediately.❤️ I knew the moment AP was in the scene she was going to ask the impossible, the most painful task to be done.😡

So Ragini would pull strings as well...hmm...even Sanskar could fight with so much at a time.🤢

Lakshya...I seriously don't want to talk about him, but how can someone steep so low? 😡He has to dig earth to find his current stand at the moment. 😕

Swara...I wish she would open her heart soon, her impassiveness is eating their bond away.

Enjoyed this second part as much as the first Shruti dearest. Please update the rest soon.😊

Originally posted by: sana2c

It's amazing. .

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

😭 I had been preparing myself for these upcoming Maha Episodes where I knew I would cry seeing Sanskaar all heart broken. Now that has come a day earlier & I so wasnt prepared for it😭

This might sound sexist but girls attempting suicide to manipulate others is bad enough. When guys/ men do it, it becomes all the more disgusting.

The Swara in this TS is as dumb as the one in the show👏 That is no mean feat😆 Shabbash!👏😆 Stupid people are always the most difficult to write. You just dont understand how they can be that stupid even as you write them & you end up with a massive headache by the time you are finished😛

I liked the "Kaushalya ho ya Kaikeyi, ma to ma hoti hai na" dialogue though I do not see Sanskaar as Ram. He is actually giving Swara the freedom to choose. He has promised to talk to her. If she agrees, I think it does say a lot about her, her character, her tall claims of never taking Laksh back, her love for her sister, her constant jaap about the importance of marriages & friendships, etc. I see this as a test set by Sanskaar, so naturally as the test setter he is not going to participate. He will just observe. I am happy he made it clear that he wont force her & the last decision will always be hers. That is exactly how it should be.

Though I have one other doubt. Sanskaar is her friend & he loves her. Being the more sensible one he sees though Laksh's drama. Why would you convince your friend to give such a person a second chance? Wouldn't you be concerned about your friend's well being with such a man? But then he isnt her nanny either. Uff I am so confused

"Much later, back in their bedroom...to pull the other one across its yawning mouth"👏 Amazing! More often than not it is the distances between our hearts which separate us than actual physical distances

Please update the last part ASAP. I dont think the torture on the show will end anytime soon. At least yahi pe main Sanskaar ko khush dekh lungi

Originally posted by: a_uma

awesum.. and totally engrossing part 2... 👏

AP's intervention makes sense.. she is the only one who can ask Sanskar to do something he doesn't want to do..


.. and Ragini is manipulating everyone.. even AP.. she made AP bring the milk, just in time to overhear the confession about Laksh's mad love for swara.. 😲

.. and its downright irritating how swara rushes to do Rags bidding at any time of the day or night.. no wonder sanky was angry.. 😕

Originally posted by: swa291

Reading part 2 AP said the things am afraid she will ask sanskar i the show.Abd u never liked her. Dont know why.

How can she ask sanskar to do such a thing. Drama lux jarega aur sasa swasan ko.

Its foolishness of swara that always lands them in problems. She and love for her sister

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

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