Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

superb updates and story

update next part soon


Thanks Javeria, will try to post 4 ASAP:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Thank you Suhasini, will hopefully manage by tonight here (UK time) 😃


part 2... very nicely written shruthi
y annapurna wanted swara to give a chance to lucky😡
loved how sanskaar z very firm that he l not force her and abides her decision
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Thank you Manu,</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Glad you are finding Swara coming along well. Ah yes, see she will never lose all of that naive trust- that's what makes her who she is. I will try and explain in Part 4 through Sanskaar:)</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Sanskaar is😎always.</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Yes!! He must doubt such a declaration given how she is so mahaan so now she has to prove it. Will try to post 4 today:)</font>



Yaay will be waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11


Hawww itni buri lagi yeh Swara?! See, as I am trying to re-tell an alternative version but of the same track we are getting, I couldn't make her sensible without first highlighting her stupidity 😆
Aww- I genuinely didn't think people were going to be that affected, really but as a writer, I think I need to see the compliment in that 😊. Part 3 is done, you should deffo not be crying by its end and despite writing all day literally I couldn't do Part 4- this will be done by end of tomorrow (or today for me now 😲). Thank you Leks for reading and commenting xoxo

I was awake whole night to read third part and the moment u updated I read😳 I read most stories here but most of the time I find my comment backwas so click Like button😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sanskaar understands Swara so beautifully,right?
Nice update,thanks for the pm
Falaq
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read the two parts.. Swara is much sensible here at least.. And finally Ragini jaap is over.. 😃 Laksh k baare jitna kam bole utna hi behtar 😡 Awww my poor Sanskaar.. With burnt hand and pain in heart.. 😭 and finally I love you by Swara.. 😳 pata nahi show me kab bolegi?? Meri kaan taras gaye hain.. 😆 You wrote it beautifully and thanks for PM..
UPDATE SOON , I'M WAITING EAGERLY..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

I was awake whole night to read third part and the moment u updated I read😳 I read most stories here but most of the time I find my comment backwas so click Like button😳


I love you meri jaan! But 😡😡 How dare you call your comments bakwaas?! If you have a comment, post it, I love reading what you say, here on the AT wherever 🤗

Challo, 4 posted, have a feeling you might like some parts 😉 xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: suhasini2727


part 2... very nicely written shruthi
y annapurna wanted swara to give a chance to lucky😡
loved how sanskaar z very firm that he l not force her and abides her decision


AP is so biased towards her son, who is a total waste of space 😡. Hope you will read the 3rd and final parts and feel relieved 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-

Sanskaar understands Swara so beautifully,right?

Nice update,thanks for the pm
Falaq


Thank you for reading Falaq and yes Sanskaar is so in tune with Swara, that girl is the luckiest one in the world!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Purbishona

I read the two parts.. Swara is much sensible here at least.. And finally Ragini jaap is over.. 😃 Laksh k baare jitna kam bole utna hi behtar 😡 Awww my poor Sanskaar.. With burnt hand and pain in heart.. 😭 and finally I love you by Swara.. 😳 pata nahi show me kab bolegi?? Meri kaan taras gaye hain.. 😆 You wrote it beautifully and thanks for PM..
UPDATE SOON , I'M WAITING EAGERLY..


Purbi 🤗

All parts now done so read 3 and 4 too 😃. Yes I have tried to dismantle the Ragini jaap! Sanskaar is always the one to suffer the most 😭 Thank you so much for liking it x

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