SwaSan TS: 'Old Sins Cast Long Shadows' - Page 21

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Sure, Viji, I will try reading as many as possible...when time permits! 😊

Originally posted by: inlieu

You're welcome Vij! Your writing elicits praise without fail, every time! 😃

Originally posted by: arohijsp

I read all three at a one go.
I love how you started your story!
Murder, mystery and suspense. My favourite genre when growing up, Agatha Christies were my favorites.
In the beginning even I wanted to suspected Suju, but never thought Laksh to have such a criminal mind ..you know , after the way his character unfolds in Swaragini :) Love Swasan romancing parts too!
Thanks for the PM. Take a bow! You are a very talented writer!

Originally posted by: jasw

Whoa! This was such a cliffhanger! Thanks for the 'pillow wall' dedication, Viji!!😳

Absolutely loved this romantic thriller! Swara's admiration for Sanskar's love and her gradual falling for Sanskar .. to her first step of kissing him is all so sweet.. when will this phase come in the serial I wonder! Her anxiety reaching crescendo when she was not able to contact Sanskar(when he went for a long drive) was too good .. am hoping for such a scene in the serial... something of that sort(that darned to be/not to be bomb blast in car) is needed to shake her out of stupor and awaken feelings for Sanskar! The culmination of that feeling of course we can't see on television!😉

The last part was thrilling though in serial life would not want such black ending for Laksh. Hope he backs out and starts liking Ragini! Lets see what happens post kidnap scenario in the serial.

Once again ... an outstanding TS. 👏

Originally posted by: jasw

Whoa! This was such a cliffhanger! Thanks for the 'pillow wall' dedication, Viji!!😳

Absolutely loved this romantic thriller! Swara's admiration for Sanskar's love and her gradual falling for Sanskar .. to her first step of kissing him is all so sweet.. when will this phase come in the serial I wonder! Her anxiety reaching crescendo when she was not able to contact Sanskar(when he went for a long drive) was too good .. am hoping for such a scene in the serial... something of that sort(that darned to be/not to be bomb blast in car) is needed to shake her out of stupor and awaken feelings for Sanskar! The culmination of that feeling of course we can't see on television!😉

The last part was thrilling though in serial life would not want such black ending for Laksh. Hope he backs out and starts liking Ragini! Lets see what happens post kidnap scenario in the serial.

Once again ... an outstanding TS. 👏

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Awesome TS Viji, I loved it, the mystery aspect was really good and i can never complain about Swasan . you always make sure there story are perfect.

I absolutely loved everything in this TS. Swasan part was really beautiful . how i wish the cvs take a look at the OS in the forum and then write such scene in the show .

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nita ...🤗

Thanks so much. Receiving your comments over a few of my works, has been Santa Claus's gift for me over this Christmas weekend. 😊

Very happy to hear that you like the mystery aspect of the plot as well as the SwaSan love story part.

Cheers

Viji

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Well reading your works has been my stress buster when I see all awesome news regarding the future tracks. I was officially so angry at Kavitha reentry then I decided to read OS just like you said and voila I am somewhat happy.

So keep writing a lot more. Because I think I need all the OS I can get before Swasan mutual reunion that will happen next year.