Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Jennie...😊 You changed your UN, huh? I was wondering where my friend 'rerose' had gone!
The chapter was nice---the deep concern shown by Swara for Sanskaar---when they are giving him an injection, it is she who is feeling the pain! If this isn't true love, what is? 😉 And the way she confessed that she had only make an excuse of Ragini's birthday so that Lakshya would not be a kabab mein haddi and insist on taking Sanskaar to the hospital! 😆
I liked the way you had brought in the story of "Hayavadana" and Shakespeare's sonnets, both to explain Sanskaar's slight doubts about whether he truly deserves Swara's love; and in turn, Swara indirectly explaining to him what the true meaning of love is, and how Sanskaar's emotion for her is really, the love she always wanted, full of trust, loyalty, permanence and faith.
Nicely done. Looking forward to more.