SwaSan SS:We are incomplete without one another,up p2on pg 8 17/11.

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Jwala

@LoveSriNal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

beautiful piece of writing jenny.. I loved the way you are writing. . swara afraid of injections. . so cute.. her concern for sanskar. . sanskar's admiration for swara.. rain moment. . simply beautiful. . loved it a lot..you are an amazing writer.. love you. .

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Sakura24
This is cute. I really thirst for lighthearted stuff these days specially those where Swara hate Lakshya. Please continue soon!

thanks a lot Sakura dear😊😊

Ya will continue it soon😊

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Thanks a lot for pm dear...

It was a beautiful update...

Loved it so much. ...

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HARNEEN KAUR

@Har_cutedoll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Beautiful 😳 well done 👏
So sweet story 😳 keep it up jenni 😊 😳 waiting for update

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: harshsriti
beautiful piece of writing jenny.. I loved the way you are writing. . swara afraid of injections. . so cute.. her concern for sanskar. . sanskar's admiration for swara.. rain moment. . simply beautiful. . loved it a lot..you are an amazing writer.. love you. .

Wow my dear Jwala,ur so sweet in giving me comments😊

I am so glad that u liked my work🤗

Ya will continue soon,loved ur comments,it made my day😛😉

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Read both parts in one go. Really loved it. She s taking care of him n she s scared of injections. As she took his pain he didn't feel any pain. Continue soon and pls pm me also

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: anu91
Thanks a lot for pm dear...
It was a beautiful update...
Loved it so much. ...

thank u soo much Anu😊

I m glad u liked it😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Hi Jennie...😊 You changed your UN, huh? I was wondering where my friend 'rerose' had gone!

The chapter was nice---the deep concern shown by Swara for Sanskaar---when they are giving him an injection, it is she who is feeling the pain! If this isn't true love, what is? 😉 And the way she confessed that she had only make an excuse of Ragini's birthday so that Lakshya would not be a kabab mein haddi and insist on taking Sanskaar to the hospital! 😆

I liked the way you had brought in the story of "Hayavadana" and Shakespeare's sonnets, both to explain Sanskaar's slight doubts about whether he truly deserves Swara's love; and in turn, Swara indirectly explaining to him what the true meaning of love is, and how Sanskaar's emotion for her is really, the love she always wanted, full of trust, loyalty, permanence and faith.

Nicely done. Looking forward to more.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: cutyeeedoll
Beautiful 😳 well done 👏
So sweet story 😳 keep it up jenni 😊 😳 waiting for update

thanks a lot Harneen,I am so glad that u liked it re😊😊

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: gayu6
Read both parts in one go. Really loved it. She s taking care of him n she s scared of injections. As she took his pain he didn't feel any pain. Continue soon and pls pm me also

Thanks a lot Gayu,will Pm u while I update😊😊

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