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Hi guys a very good morning to you all people,after reading a lot of SS and FF's in this forum,I was super excited by the awesome works u people tend to characterize out through ur stories that turns out as a mere pleasure to read and get into the world of the lovely couple.
Hence now I am attempting to write an SS on them,if u people like it ,I will continue ,please do share ur comments on them.
SWASAN SS:WE ARE INCOMPLETE WITHOUT ONE ANOTHER.
PART I:
Swara was so tensed she could even breathe properly,her mind was so disturbed,her thoughts was pondering on to some other issue that made her mind think so drastically,she couldn't believe herself whether she had been married to Sanskaar after falling in a deep love with Laksh,she couldn't just digest the fact,that her reminisces itself would turn out to be her enemy because while recalling the incidents of the past,she fails to recognise the present life she is in,which thus serve as an end product which made made her life take a three sixty degree turn each and every thing changing the way,which she had never expected.
Her inner mind clearly knows that Laksh is too good and he has a wonderful heart,his love was so pure and his words served as a source of life giving bread for her in the past few months,his presence gave her a heavenly feeling but now the life which acts upon the game play of her fate,is something that stands out to be more pleasant and peaceful.The significant reason for that is her hubby Sanskaar,his voice doesn't even have to reach her but she could realise the fact that he is close to her,he is a fellow who entirely cares for others happiness,he longs for his ambience to smile at any cost because he is such a selfless one who can understand others feelings as his own burden.
Swara by now has become habitual to Sanskaar and his words turned out to be her magical verses,she follows whatever she says and believes that he will be a best companion to her,Sanskaar too whenever Swara feels a bit upset about her past consoles her and makes her laugh by employing simple sarcasm that turns out to be a biggest blowing the floor joke as according to Swara.
As days passed by Swara was getting better day by day,she was better now,she was sitting the garden and sighting all the wonderful flowers in the Garden,she was rejoicing the entire ambience that was sweet smelling as well the hightened are of pleasure's overflow.
Suddenly she heard a noise that shook her brain,it was a sudden huge decibel of noise that came from her room,she just rushed out to see what was it to her dismay she found Sanskaar's hands bleeding ,his hands was oozing out blood,it was so hilarious to take a view at that sight,Swara's heart beat just raised liked something and it pretended as if it beats for more than 100 times in a minute,she couldn't sustain his situation but he was just acting as if he is not suffering out of pain but Swara's heart could sense Sanskaar's pain and her mind was ready to accept Sanskaar's pain as her pain.
She rushes out to him and asks him ,What did he do ??Why did he hurt himself ?Is this good to hurt oneself?What was the importance doing such a thing that would hurt one??
Sanskaar's reply ached Swara's heart she couldn't even reply for few minutes ,she was awestruck by the reply Sanskaar provided to Swara.After regaining her senses Swara gave a huge as well warm hug that enlightened both Swara as well as Sanskaar's mind,their brains became active and fresh thoughts flashed in their hearts...
What would have the reply of Sanskaar which made Swara give a huge hug to him ?It was Swara's childhood pic lying on the wall which was about to fall,Swara considered that as the most special one because it was a picture taken when she was only five years and at that time she had participated in a dance competition and won the first prize hence that picture was a blessed one which carries a lot of memories.And Sanskaar who noticed while passing that way went and managed to catch it in his hands but Sanskaar's hands slipped and the picture feel down with a great intensity ,Sanskaar immediately managed to grasp the glass pieces but his hand turned out to be a prey for a very minute glass piece which penetrated his hand and heartily cracked and created bruises in his hand.
Sanskaar was feeling so upset ,the reason was he wasn't able to protect that picture he started pouring out words of apology to Swara but Swara's brain resisted to listen to all his apologies ,she placed her finger on his lips gently and said ,"That is enough no more apologies from your side,it is completely waste to blabber something without even committing any mistakes ,I am not worried about the picture at all,we can even replace the frame or make a new one but if something has happened to you ,then I can't even imagine such situations,don't ever try doing these,as your pain can make me so hurt and sensitive ".By saying these she came with a first aid kit and applied some cream and then did the proper first aid and insisted him to come to the hospital with her.
Sanskaar agreed to her words and they both were on the way to the hospital in the car they physically present and seated in the car but mentally both of their minds were revolving in some other thoughts.Sanskaar and Swara both of them were sitting on the back seat with a distance in between them.Swara was super amazed by Sanskaar's actions which made him hurt but it was done only for her ,she could realize that Sanskaar cares for her a lot but this was an extreme height of justification for his pure affection. While Sanskaar was smiling to himself that ,he is ready to get hurt for innumerable times in his life time in order to be showered upon the life giving hug which was like a blanket given to a person suffering in the Arctic ,in the event of saving his life ..
Precap:Swara and Sanskaar's car gets break down while returning back from the hospital during night and the driver leaves them inorder to find a mechanic out there,it is a lonely forest woods while Swara and Sanskaar and left all alone.
Guys ,Can,I continue this ,pls do post ur opinions...
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