The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete - Page 11

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

ding!
ding!ding!

Finally i am here😆..
been meaning to comment for so long something or the other keeps coming up..

firstly..
you are an amazing write Sakura.

loved both the updates.
some words; some emotions stood out more for me..

how sharp the broken dreams are.. poor poor Ragini.
felt so sorry for her.

the strength of Sharmishtha.

and the darkness of Sanskaar. He is broken or what?😳.
i feel terrible for him one moment and scared of him the other; the way you wrote about him.

great work Sakura..
⭐️

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Dearest Nimmi (I can call you that right?)

Ahhh, here you come😳 I was sort of getting irritated, two PMs and the girl is totally avoiding my thread...(that was a joke) Welcome darling, I know you must have been busy, I know the feeling😛

I'm glad you liked the two updates, I was worried you did not. I'm not sure how long you're going to pity Ragini here, I have turned her 180 in the coming chapters😉

I intended sanskar to be a combo of both pitiable and intimidating. Thanks for finding him likable.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Sakura 😊

A very intriguing update. BTW, I am a MAJOR Animal planet/ Nat Geo/ Discovery freak, so that line about Elephants being a keynote species, that change the ecology around them, struck an immediate chord with me. 😉

Am not too sure about the validity of Sharmishta's request to Sanskaar, to be honest. Personal growth is composed of many things, not all relationships stifle. It seemed to me, that Sharmishta had made the mistake of evaluating her daughter's close relationship with Sanskaar, through the faulty prism of her own failed marriage. It even seemed a little---well, selfish---to me, trying to pull strings behind stage kind of thing. And Kavita's concurrence, in this chapter, also seemed---well, a little convenient. Was she already in love with Sanskaar, and saw this as a chance to get Swara out of the way? The only thing is, had Sharmishta not done this, would events have played out the way they have?

I found the last coupe of sentences quite chilling (really in an Ice King kind of way 😉): ""His lips curled at the irony of the situation. The worst nightmare she was ever going to have was wishing her sweet dreams, was that even possible?""

Really tantalized by the "Grey" Sansku you are fleshing out here.

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Ofcourse you can call me nimmi Sakura.
i do have a beautiful name😳😆..

and *hugs* for the dearest part!

and NAHIII!!
i wasn't ignoring you.
i protest mylord! naainsaafi!

i was worked up with my own chronicles. now i respect all the wonderful writers more. man! such a nerve wracking job.😳.

it takes lot for me to hate a character. i do give them lot of benefit of doubt.
so yeah bring it on Babes. lets see what you got for Ragini.

Sanskaar.. mysterious; layered and totally intriguing.
me lubs!

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Really interesting again! This "dark" Sanskaar is very intriguing and he has all the hallmarks of a typical M&B hero but in a nice way, if that makes sense? I.E. he is tortured already about whatever he is planning that will hurt Swara and this is only going to get worse for him as he carries on, just as it will for Swara? Shades of the IPK type thing that worked in the early days of that show before it got ruined by cheese and OTT "torture". I loved the elephants in the savannah reference- I was born and brought up in Africa so it called out to that side of me, as I feel most at home on safaris in the African game parks then anywhere else 😊. I find your Shomi interesting- there is something a little difficult to digest about her, she is strong yes but seems quite controlling too. Nice!