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chemgirl

@chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

I am not an active member here...but awesm os...keep updating

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Read all the 3 parts in one go. You are doing a brilliant job here 👏
Love your writing style 😳
Update soon 😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: medhasankar
Hey Saku,(hope u don't mind me calling you that)
I found this part better than the previous ones. You paid good attention to Sharmishtha.
And how kavi had paved a way for him...to move on and help swara move on.

did someone spike her drink that day? and sanky saved her.

I loved the old feelings breaking through the resentment of the new ones.

keep writing.

Love--
medha.

Of cause call me that😃 All my friends do.

Thanks a lot.

Shomi is my favorite among the elder cast, I really like her character, but I want her to be a little more independent. This was my way of fulfilling that wish of mine😛

It's all his plan dear😉 You'll know more about it in the next chapters.

Thanks again😳

PS: I love reading your comments, they're lovely😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: harshsriti
what is the plan of sanskar? I want to know it.. did ragini give something to swara and that is why she fainted? excellent update yaar.. I'm curiously waiting for the next update. I want to know his plan.. continue as soon as possible. . thank u dear.. for this wonderful piece of work..

Ragini, Ragini sanskar's right arm😆

You're right about her. I can't reveal the ice king's plans he might harm me if I do so You'll know more about his plan in the next chapter. Also why he is targeting Swara. Thanks for the lovely words😃

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: chemgirl
I am not an active member here...but awesm os...keep updating

Thanks😃 I wasn't active her much earlier either😳 Now that you have broken your silence I hope to see you here more😊

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Read all the 3 parts in one go. You are doing a brilliant job here 👏
Love your writing style 😳
Update soon 😊

Ooo thanks😃

I'll update soon😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

just read all the 3 chapters in 1 go..

You have twinned the characters well...the best part is the comparison between the younger Sanskaar and the current hardened soul Sansksaar..your descriptions and portrayal were superb...

The 3rd chapter made lots of sense on the relationship between Sanskaar and Swara...the influence, dependency portion.

The way you brought out the motherly love of Sharmita, it was very realistic...Great read!

Ice King...a name well coined for the current ruthless Sanskaar, who is playing a dangerous game of chess..

Edited by JazzyM - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: JazzyM
just read all the 3 chapters in 1 go..
You have twinned the characters well...the best part is the comparison between the younger Sanskaar and the current hardened soul Sansksaar..your descriptions and portrayal were superb...

The 3rd chapter made lots of sense on the relationship between Sanskaar and Swara...the influence, dependency portion.

The way you brought out the motherly love of Sharmita, it was very realistic...Great read!

Ice King...a name well coined for the current ruthless Sanskaar, who is playing a dangerous game of chess..

Thanks dear😃

I'm glad you found it interesting. I thought a lot before choosing that name for the SS. I think it matches him too.

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Third chapter was just amazing dr👏👏👏

loved the way ,u have spinned the yarn,awesome story,loved it so much😃😃

pls continue soon😛😛

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Thanks for the PM, it was awesome . i liked everybit of it. eagerly waiting for the next chapter .Also the childhood friends connection between them makes it more intriguing.

Dont doubt about it , it was actually very good. Do write the next chapter soon and PM me if you can.

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