The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete - Page 13

Hey Saku,

Though this chapter was important in its own way... it rather dis come off as a filler... I am soo waiting for the next part because I feel that is where the drama actually begins like Sanskaar 's revenge drama!

Awesome update & thanks for the pm 😳

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow I just loved ur update ur 4th chapter was so nice👏👏👏

I really love the way you use ur words,ur writing is awesome yaar👏

It amazes me a lot being a Eng lit student,I normally don't get satisfied with works becz I always require substantial reference and references to add up to my thinking process from my authors, but u r stories filled all my expectations,loved it a lot dear😃😃

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Hey Saku,

read it before your PM.

I liked your DP spin off...and the angles you gave to it.

Swara obviously cares zero zilch about Laksh and 100 for sanky.

The self satisfied attitude of Sanky was brilliantly done. Now he's gonna cause hell huh?

Continue.

Love---

medha.

Originally posted by: manasie23

Though this chapter was important in its own way... it rather dis come off as a filler... I am soo waiting for the next part because I feel that is where the drama actually begins like Sanskaar 's revenge drama!

Awesome update & thanks for the pm 😳

Thanks for the PM. 😊

I am so glad they finally met. I am guessimg that Lakshya wont be happy that Swara forgot about their engagement and ran off to Sanskaar. I loved the bonding between DP and his soul daughter. Will he and Annapurna (she is Shomi's friend right?) support and trust Swara when s**t hits the fan and she marries Sanskaar? I hope they do. Swara won't forgive Sanskaar as easily as she did on the show right? But I do hope they patch up soonish and that this revenge driven Sanskaar won't last long infront of his Shona.

The 4th chapter, dazed me off...A chess game for sure, the way DP was thinking...king, knight, his fortress...now I wonder, who is the grand-master...DP or Sanskaar...

Hey sakura you really are a person worthy of appreciations dear !! The way you gave sanskar's character a modification and added things like told you she knows me and all that really made me think as if its happening in reality in the t.v and swara leaving her engagement behind was superb !!
Really awesome work, waiting for your next chapter my friend... 😛 😛

Ooh it gets better each time! You also find Swara DP's soul child and Sanskaar the son he wanted? *hi5*! I like the mystery you weave in. Sanskaar is here and he's going to cause mayhem- yayyy! So I take it Sanskaar will do to Swara here what he did to Ragz in the show in the sense of asking for his "dost" Swara to stay with him whilst playing mad?! Intriguing- waiting to read more!