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Hi saku
I had read all your wotks some three months ago but then I used to be a silent member. But today again accidentally came upon Ice King and I couldn't stop myself from reading it once again nor could restrain myself from posting a detailed comment on it . I really do want to read all the stories once again and post my views on them as your FAN and friend.
Saku the first chapter was totally intriguing and the second one gave many answers. I have read each comment on your chapters and your replies to them..the double faced ragini, stone hearted sanskar( though he cannot be where shona is concerned), impulsive lakshya and the universal prey SWARA. The one memory of possessiveness displayed by Sanskar, everything sheer brilliance.
Let me start detailed description from the third one...Felt so emotional reading the eighteen year sanskars feelings when Sharmishta was asking him to be away from.swara. But the logic Kavitha gave made me feel better. Maybe she shall turn into a more fascinating person, how true is that. If they were together since childhood nothing about the other would fascinate or intrigue them the way when they are separated and meet eventually later.The separation brought all the drama and intensity into the tale. That was a good line Saku, everything else is but the conversation made me see the whole plot in a different view. And the line in the end abt worst nightmare being the wish for sweet drea arems, so beautiful.
Fourth chapter...Do I sound insane? Commenting on an update wrote some eight months back? Btw I stopped reading the other comments cause some have depicted it the same way as I have and reading each I felt like erasing my lines. So it's better this way, I can write what I feel...
Will his feather hearted son contain swara flames?Laksh has never been a king but you have always been a queen.Lakshya will protect you as a knight. What prophetic lines from the Patriarch. And lakshya is too childish to act so silly. Again DP has added another feather for swara to be selected as the PREY, more people will be ready to chase her now being the selected princess of the Maheswari kingdom.
Fifth...Arjuna and drona!!!! What a virtual exchange through eyes .And the declaration"she has always been mine". And ragini sperpective ..No war is waged unless a king is there to command it. Saku hats off to you for your poetic lines .
I had started watching SR after swasan s fake marriage. The episodes previous to that I had read only through the forum stories. But recently I started watching from sanskars appearance. The first thought which came to my mind when he was playing Dost dost with ragini was..what.if he had chosen swara as his friend ,she would have been independent and would not have waited for anybody's permission to tend to him at his home as ragini had waited for dadis permission and all the drama by daadi . An surprisingly you have written the same plot here, swara taking care of a sick sanskar, love u lots for that.
Sixth and seventh.lakshya growing under the canopy of sanskar. My dear your standard is too high. I feel ashamed of even attempting to write something in the midst of talented people like you. Saku my purest swara ,I hate Sanskar for hurting her..She has a
Heart of gold ...trying to save a butterfly and how can someone try to harm her even in dreams??
Eighth... you think she is marvellous, ragini at her manipulative best yet the insecurity voiced. Yes she is, answers sanskar ,still ignorant of his hearts wish .He was supposed to drug her!!!! How can somebody be so pure that even demons watch them. The more I love swara greater is my hate for you sanskar. Whatever reasons you have , you can never be justified for wronging a pure soul .
Ninth..Saku I am conveniently ignoring the first part involving the two pathetic souls. But I feel you love ragini a little better than lakshya.. For me the next part is the most memorable one in the whole SS. It sent a chill down my spine ...Bengali bride on top of the cliff with moonlight over her. The visual is so clear saku ,i can't still get out of it. Give me a reason to forgive you ..Sanskar she may say so but may still forgive you but Saku I cannot forgive him, however hard I try. And what an irony that he feels like choking lakshya to death for hurting her.But the best line was saved for last.i din plan for the heart wrenching sobs...
Tenth...My poor swara .considered as the black shadow, ominous presence in the sick gadodia family, clinging to sanskar like a parasite for the protection...and how evil is ragini with her ethereal beauty and devil's mind.
Eleventh...Most painful part for me. A bride dressed up to welcome the groom's party only to know he had married somebody else. But swara was most hurt by the distrust of DP.It was a. Heart wrenching picture, Swara begging DP to believe her.
Finale... Butterfly and caterpillars!!!! Have anybody else written anything so beautifully about them .But dida stole the limelight in this chapter. To be a queen one should marry a king. I still cannot forgive sanskar, please pardon me for that .
Saku i felt I loved iceking the most from your works but after reading snow queen I changed my mind. But today after reading Elixir once again( and finally I have forgiven him) I am sure this is my favourite. Saku i hope you feel a little better reminiscing the moments you wrote the story. Hope my small token of adoration lift your spirits.
Love you, get well soon
Veena
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
