Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
The whole narration swings towards Sanskaar...all his emotions are there to be read, the layers of his personality is being laid bare, his intentions meticulously noted...really loved how you brought Sanskaar into the play...
The rest of the characters even Swara were sidekicks as far as I was concerned...Loved how you brought the hiccup scene ...Swara+Sanskaar...very cute.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Nice start, keep going.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Loved the comparison of Sanskaar's bid for revenge compared to the game of chess. Would be interesting to see Sanskaar's reaction as his pawn transforms his army from black to white and to top it off takes the Queen position next to him. Love Love Love it!!
Continue soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Its pretty awesome... loved it... waiting for next update... don't forget to pm me pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
WOW, Banjaran.⭐️ You have hit upon the 1 character who is a sure shot winner to get our fullest interest ! And you have done full justice to him !👏
Sanskaar, as you're showing him, is the exact formula of all that we would like him to be (oh well, in the past at least)...intelligent, canny, smart, determined, handsome, rich and more than all that, the true blue vengeful (rightly, at least in his mind) angry young man ! And that he has his conscience challenging his plans, right from the beginning, is so well portrayed...it shows us a glimpse of what he truly is..a humane, caring, honest human, who is blinded by revenge, but can keep his "goodness" from rearing its head..

Lakshya and Swara, so far, are running true to form..and I am eagerly waiting for your take on Sanskaar's perception of the others in his family..as well of course, of what we know evolved between Sanskaar, Lakshya, Ragini and our "collateral damage" Swara.

You write very very well, and if this is your first, I AM impressed😃 ! Its beautifully captured and plumbs really well into the depths of Sanskaar's feelings..!👏

I have only 1 request...do make the updates longer...! 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awesome and this is much better than the serial.
Every scene, be it of sanskaar office or the park scene, they are written beautifully.
Eager to know how swara will turn into queen from a pawn.
continue and update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Wow the second part was so awesome👏👏
loved the way u describe things and awesome writing dear👏👏
Please do continue soon😛😛
waiting for ur next update dear😃
Thanks a lot for the pm😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
loved this update..😊
swara have special effect on sanskaar..😆 he was feeling too difficult to continue his plan..😉
thank you for pm..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Amazinggg
Must say
U write fab!! Literally fab
In total awe of u
Awesome
Do write more plsss
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Wonderfull 👏
Waiting for the next part 😳

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