Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :)

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Cintila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Hey ! Just read both the parts. This is freaking amazing..!

Soo different and intriguing. Do update soon.😃

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Fab update!

Loved the chess analogy 😃

Cont soon!

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Its good to read things from sanskars pov.

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

This exactly is Sanskar as I pictured him at the start of his character, an inner battle of god and devil inside his hell of a mind. His attraction to Swara is quite interesting too. Your plot is shaping up perfectly, can't wait for the next part.

PS: thanks for the PM!!!

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Fantastic update dear 👏
You captured his emotions so well. He is trying to not get attracted towards Swara and treat her only like a pawn.
This is something brilliant.
Can't wait to read more 😳

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.Sarcasmazing.

@.Sarcasmazing.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Wow! This keeps getting better & better :O

I absolutely LOVE how you keep adding the bits of cosmic connection between them. The tiny bit of God laughing when you tell him your future plan, damn did that ring true 😲 As always it is, Man proposes, god disposes AND plans something even better ;)

I love it that Sanskaar still has that semblance of humanity & sympathy in his heart even in his darkest phase. God does revenge blind you or what :( I am glad Sanskaar is never going that dark path again & will use his grey twisted ways for the greater good. But seriously, it's amazing to see him lurking behind & manipulating Lakshya, Swara & Ragini's life ever since the beginning & using them as pawns. Love that chess analogy & that bit about his biggest pawn turning into his queen in this game of chess he's laid, mind again blown away! Easily my favorite part in the whole update <3 Dammit I can't wait to read more, can you please update the next part already? This time longer please, my shipper heart is selfish 😆

Glad to know you like reading my incoherent bokwaas KDR's 😳😆 That soul connection scene is absolute effin brilliance ❤️ Nobody can be endgame except SwaSan after that & I am really a sucker for divine cosmic connection stuff :P Yep Kavya here :D & may I know your name too Banjaaran ji? Quirky UN, love it ⭐️

Update soonish please! <3 Thank you for the PM :)

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hey read both the part...

They are awesome...

Loved it...

Continue soon

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very very well written. You have developed the plot in this 2nd chapter very well. The scheming, revenge driven mind of Sanskaar, thirsting for retribution, yet unable to completely quench his humanity and growing fascination for Swara. Her innocence is slowly tugging at his heart strings, however much he may claim his heart is a burnt out shell. 😊
Looking forward to read more. Please update soon 😊

BTW dear please tell me your name. In case you already told me and I have forgotten, sorry. 😊

Viji..
🤗

pole position again..
i am honoured.
Muah!

and pardon my manners.. the name is nimmi😳.

thank you so much for your support, kind words and the way you write..
loads and truck loads of love. (was about to pm ya but you are already here. i am touched)

Jhappis.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: natasha-
What a great start to the Sunday morning!!
I was waiting for your update and here it is!!
Sanskar is already feeling guilty!! Aww.
Can't wait for the story to unfold.
Please update sooner :)

aww natasha...
🤗

you made my Sunday when i read your comment😳..
thanks a lot dearie.

and yo! updating soon.
and pm'ing ya.

love.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: JazzyM
The whole narration swings towards Sanskaar...all his emotions are there to be read, the layers of his personality is being laid bare, his intentions meticulously noted...really loved how you brought Sanskaar into the play...
The rest of the characters even Swara were sidekicks as far as I was concerned...Loved how you brought the hiccup scene ...Swara+Sanskaar...very cute.

Jazzy..
🤗

thank you so much for your beautiful compliment.
and no Swara hopefully wont be sidekick for too long. she is half of him after all.
but yeah i am biased towards Sanskaar.

thanx again..
love..

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