Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 7

Originally posted by: dazzpari

Nice start, keep going.. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: bgscribe

Loved the comparison of Sanskaar's bid for revenge compared to the game of chess. Would be interesting to see Sanskaar's reaction as his pawn transforms his army from black to white and to top it off takes the Queen position next to him. Love Love Love it!!

Continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: suhasini2727

Its pretty awesome... loved it... waiting for next update... don't forget to pm me pls

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Viji..
🤗

pole position again..
i am honoured.
Muah!

and pardon my manners.. the name is nimmi😳.

thank you so much for your support, kind words and the way you write..
loads and truck loads of love. (was about to pm ya but you are already here. i am touched)

Jhappis.

Originally posted by: piccola1

WOW, Banjaran.⭐️ You have hit upon the 1 character who is a sure shot winner to get our fullest interest ! And you have done full justice to him !👏

Sanskaar, as you're showing him, is the exact formula of all that we would like him to be (oh well, in the past at least)...intelligent, canny, smart, determined, handsome, rich and more than all that, the true blue vengeful (rightly, at least in his mind) angry young man ! And that he has his conscience challenging his plans, right from the beginning, is so well portrayed...it shows us a glimpse of what he truly is..a humane, caring, honest human, who is blinded by revenge, but can keep his "goodness" from rearing its head..

Lakshya and Swara, so far, are running true to form..and I am eagerly waiting for your take on Sanskaar's perception of the others in his family..as well of course, of what we know evolved between Sanskaar, Lakshya, Ragini and our "collateral damage" Swara.

You write very very well, and if this is your first, I AM impressed😃 ! Its beautifully captured and plumbs really well into the depths of Sanskaar's feelings..!👏

I have only 1 request...do make the updates longer...! 😆

Pic.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome and this is much better than the serial.

Every scene, be it of sanskaar office or the park scene, they are written beautifully.

Eager to know how swara will turn into queen from a pawn.

continue and update next part soon.

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow the second part was so awesome👏👏

loved the way u describe things and awesome writing dear👏👏

Please do continue soon😛😛

waiting for ur next update dear😃

Thanks a lot for the pm😳😳

Originally posted by: kulsum_5

loved this update..😊

swara have special effect on sanskaar..😆 he was feeling too difficult to continue his plan..😉

thank you for pm..😳

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Amazinggg
Must say
U write fab!! Literally fab
In total awe of u
Awesome
Do write more plsss

Originally posted by: Jamina96

Wonderfull 👏
Waiting for the next part 😳