Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Wow, totally awesome concept!

I'd been thinking the same and I also believe Sanskaar has been attracted to Swara emotionally from the beginning, before he even started to repent.
Would love to see how this progresses ! 😊



geee! thank you so much ros_aavir😳..

great minds do think alike😆.

The sparks were always there.
how could could she see through him when even his family couldn't.
how could she hear him when he didn't say a single word aloud!

thanx again!🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Thank you so much you wonderful people for liking the story
and taking your precious time for commenting on my first work!
really touched and happy.
🤗

Big jhappis for the encouragement and support.❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...



Heya rerose..
fellow Mishal'ian🤗..

thank you for your kind words dear!


Hi,dr ur welcome and I am so glad to see u in this forum too😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
OMG this is mind blowing
I'm speechless yaar 👏
M super excited to see how the story unfold 😃
One of the best fic I read ⭐️
And ya if possible do add me in your PM list I don't want to miss it when you update
Update soon dear 😳 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rerose

Hi,dr ur welcome and I am so glad to see u in this forum too😛😛



Actually i am surprised myself that after Dutta i found someone to drool upon and root for.
Sanskaar☺️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Jamina96

OMG this is mind blowing
I'm speechless yaar 👏
M super excited to see how the story unfold 😃
One of the best fic I read ⭐️
And ya if possible do add me in your PM list I don't want to miss it when you update
Update soon dear 😳 😊



awww..thank you so much jamina🤗

Means a lot. lot lot!
thanx a lot for your compliment and words girl!

and will sure add you buddy.😳

Thank you so much again.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
I remember saying somewhere that I am obsessed with Sanskaar Maheshwari to the extent that i could come out with a FF just for him.. and dear you made it come true.. thank you thank you!!
Part 1 has been intriguing and by the end when he crushed the picture only phrase in my mind was
Now we are talking!!

Please pm me when you update next.😊
Edited by bgscribe - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38


He slowly dragged his hoodie back and casually lounged against the tree. His lanky frame supremely at ease with the surroundings.

From his vantage point he could clearly see his little brother struggling to tell a clueless girl that he is love with her by using the oldest trick in the trade. Using a friend as reference.

My friend is in love with a girl!

Oh Laksh! Dear little bro! You haven't changed at all. How about manning up and not using your family, friends and their imaginary love lives to further your agenda. But then again you don't have your big brother watching your back, pulling your chestnuts out of fire and doing your dirty deeds for you anymore. Right!

Suddenly the girl got up from the park bench they were sitting on, chirped something to Laksh and went bounding off the streets humming a little happy tune.

Sanskaar stared at his younger brother. Laksh was looking decidedly dejected.

Aha! Looks like it went well.

Sankaar was amused.

The guy proposes a girl indirectly and the girl has no frigging clue about the guy's actual intentions.

What an absolutely confusing conundrum.

Oh the hilarity of the situation.

Well the cauldron is truly bubbling over. Maybe it the time for him, Sanskaar Maheshwari to step in to give it a further stir. He has been in the sidelines for too long. Shadow boxing for too long. Time for him to step into the arena and throw the punches directly. Ok! May not be too directly!

He gave a lop-sided smile.

And looked at his younger brother.

To give credit his brother did give it a good try but looking at the reaction of the girl... Sanskaar reluctantly dragged his eyes from Laksh and stared at the back of the girl happily hopping down the streets.

Boy! She has no clue.

And if he is guessing it right; which he is being a perceptive guy with a razor sharp analytical mind; she probably is thinking that Laksh was talking about himself (bulls eye there!) and her Sister(oops!) and their love story (Ha!).

He almost grinned.

Must be his good day. Everything is just falling into place for him.

Thank you Laksh and thank you Swara Bose! He softly murmured her name.

Shoot!

He swore softly.

Up close and personal she looks even more angelic and innocent. Is that even possible!

"Sanskaar!" A voice inside him snapped.

Think about your mission! Your revenge! The five years you spent dying, living and breathing for this great game of chess that you about to play with your former loved ones as pawns. You cannot sway out of your path for a girl you owe nothing to.

She is but a pawn. It will do you good to remember just that.

No matter how angelic she looks or how innocent her demeanour is.

You owe her nothing but humanity as a stranger. But then again the human part of you has been dead and buried five years back.

She is JUST a PAWN!

Treat her like one.

He shook his head angrily crossed at himself. He has not even started and already getting spurts of humanity and conscious attack since he laid his eyes on the picture of that girl.

Damn it!

Why couldn't she look a tiny winy bit harridan, man-eater, wicked witch of west types. He probably won't have to go on this stupid guilt trips. And he hasn't even started his game.

She is a pawn! She is just a pawn!

He repeated it like a mantra.

As the saying goes "If you want God to laugh tell him your future plans".

With one last look at his brother sitting forlornly on the bench and at the retreating back of a chirpy young again bouncing off the streets Sanskaar walked away.

He had NO idea and no way of knowing that the girl he just dismissed off as a pawn will take Queen's position in the great game of elaborate chess board he has laid out to play.

Yup! God must be hysterical somewhere!


Edited by Banjaaran... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Very very well written. You have developed the plot in this 2nd chapter very well. The scheming, revenge driven mind of Sanskaar, thirsting for retribution, yet unable to completely quench his humanity and growing fascination for Swara. Her innocence is slowly tugging at his heart strings, however much he may claim his heart is a burnt out shell. 😊
Looking forward to read more. Please update soon 😊

BTW dear please tell me your name. In case you already told me and I have forgotten, sorry. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
What a great start to the Sunday morning!!
I was waiting for your update and here it is!!
Sanskar is already feeling guilty!! Aww.
Can't wait for the story to unfold.
Please update sooner :)

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