Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

You've done a beautiful job Nimmi👏
The way you are portraying Sanskar's character, his mixed emotions; he wants to get revenge but at the same time he still loves his family.
Your story is simply brilliant 😳
Update soon 😊

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Brb..

Wishing you all beautiful people a very happy Dussera..
Stay Blessed!
❤️

Originally posted by: swa291

Loved the update

The aguish the anger the pain the guilt and the need for revenge all are portrayed beautifully.

I always think that raginis evilness and sanskars revenge can not be compared.

What sanskar did even then i felt had justification. He felt he was betrayed by his family which lead to the death of his love and was thrown out and left with nothing.

What ragini is doing is coldblooded calculated game with no remorse and no reason but to get a person who dont love nor want her. If they liked each other and was forced to separate then would have atleast made sense.

Originally posted by: harshsriti

Nimmi... such a emotional update. . I felt very bad for sanskar and also for kavitha. they lost their life in its beginning itself. we can't blame sanskar. he has a blg wound in his heart.. and it is bleeding. in that situation how will he care for a person? hope swara will heal him. you give full justice to sanskar's character . you wrote his feelings beautifully. outstanding update dear. .. thank you for this lovely update. . continue soon. .

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Woww
Amazing..
Totally lovd it!

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Well written Nimmi...

Now he understood why it was so easy for him to do that. Because he was surrounded by hatred. His own bitter soul for company. Those numbers of balance sheets; the business charts; the chess manoeuvres of economic world... were just like him. Soul-less! He was home!

The ruthless businessman to the core...the chip on his shoulders was beautiful portrayed

What I loved best was Sanskaar's 'humanness' trying it's best to come out from the armour he had built around himself...For me, Sanskaar was like a castle in the game of chess...he surrounds himself with his best people, places his panoply where it's need the most, knows his castle in and out...so, the game of chess goes his way, even if he loses...

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awww..

Sanskar still loves his family..

he is still confused weather he should hurt them or not..

Continue soon

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

And so his feelings bound in the irons of hate, he steps forward to cast his anger on vengeance on the "betrayers".

I loved the way u portrayed his mentality.

Please continue soon.