Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 14

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very well done, indeed 😊

The grim resolve Sanskaar has to complete his vendetta...but his concern and human side are peeking through all right! His emotions for his badi maa, his mom, his dad.

And he may pretend to hate Lucky all he likes, but you have shown him reacting to Lakshya's brotherly affection.

What I liked was the chinks in the armor he's assiduously built up---though he wants to use Ragini and of course Swara, as pawns, he is concerned and feels guilt about both of them. Swara has already started fascinating him with her innocence. 😊

What I liked best was this dichotomy you've portrayed so well---Sanskaar's human face peeping through his iron mask. The chess analogy in this chapter too, was very apt. 😊

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I've been touched by your words again.

In fact I was thinking about something along these lines for the IK of mine too. This update has the gist of Sanskar in it. The bad and also the good. The emotions he's fighting through are so real, they could almost cut him apart.

It seems sane now, why he feels so hatred for them, he had trusted them just too much that the pain has become intolerable. I can see how their affection started to effect him, he's already feeling guilty.

You have done an awesome job of getting under this mystery guy's mask! I enjoyed this chapter more than the rest.

Good luck, keep it up!!

Originally posted by: rerose

It was superb piece of writing,loved ur work soo much dr👏👏👏

Please do continue soon,waiting for the next update😳😳

Originally posted by: tigress.meenu

awesome dear..

sanskar's feelings were etched beautifully...

and the emotional turmoil of him is described superbly😊