Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 18

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

Originally posted by: anu91

Loved the update...

Do pm me while updating. ...

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...

Nik..
🤗

I am so glad you are enjoying the story😳..
thank you so much!

😆 i luv my Dp too..
now does it remind you of. bolo bolo! tell tell!

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Hey Nimmi!

Thanks a lot for the pm. I was a silent member of this forum till now. But the awesome works by some writers (including you) has forced me to break my silence.

I'm totally in love with this FF. You have portrayed the labyrinth of Sanskar's emotions so beautifully. You have struck the right chords of my mind as a reader. The constant swaying of his conscience between right and wrong is well presented.

The cosmic connection between SwaSan is simply heart-warming. Swara has already started having an effect on Sanskar. She has already made a place for herself in his mind.

I'm loving the way you are developing the story. Please do update the next part soon. I'm eagerly looking forward to it. :)

Love,

Ashi.

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

God didn't I love this chapter.
I just had this bad day and I see ur pm, I read this and hurrah! Ii am happy again.

Swara slapped Lakshya...Sanskar's reluctant appreciation and finally the similar way both Swara and Sanskar responded to the situation from different angles.
Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Read 4 and 5 together.

The cold hearted ruthless Sanskaar and his relationship with his Badi Maa was excellently portrayed. He was extremely sorry for making her choose.

The part about him being the protector and shield yet he failed to protect Kavita. So emotional...😭

The breaking news Nakul brings to Sanskaar and then Swara frustrated with Laksh.. kahi yeh tunhara Bhadaas toh nahi 😉

Nice going Nimmi.. thanks for the quick updates.

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Oh dearie don't get ideas! 😉 😆😆 it jus reminds me of one of myclose frend and SHE 😆 wears similar outfit and usually does similar poses too! 😆😆

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Hey Nimmi 🤗
Kavya..
🤗
so darn good to see ya girl.
you were missed.

Sorry for being MIA for a while now, real life happened :P Just caught up with my fav fic & read the last 2 parts in one go & I am SO intrigued!
real life does has this habit of happening.
so annoying i tell ya.🤣..
and thank you that you found the story good.😳

Your writing is awesome! The way you write Sanskaar, his thoughts, his emotions, his conflict over crossing to the black side while still craving to save that remaining humanity in him, absolutely speechless. You & Shruti, you both have such good grasp over Sanskaar's character, it's unbelievable ⭐️
awww.. thank you so much kavya
Means a lot.

Awww, I feel SO much for this bad guy despite the obvious chaos & shatters his actions are going to put everyone's life into. He's bloody going to make everything upside down, including his own life & still he's such a victim. I am sure it must have hurt him to hurt his Lucky, his bade papa, his family, his duppattewali dost & now his Swara. The things he's put them all through, even after this thorough redemption of his, he still have that guilt gnawing at him & so I think he'll always be insecure whether he even deserves love. I am SO loving the chess analogies you are using in this fic, it's brilliant. The mighty Sanskaar Maheshwari, never to have lost a game of chess, his biggest pawn is going to change his whole game & how?! I am eagerly waiting to see what happens next & how this turn of events in this game affects Sanskaar.

love the way you write about Sanskaar. though he did horrible things i just couldn't feel too angry at him. though i do not justify what he did.. he literally been through hell and back for redemption. that makes him so special in the tele land where the guys get away with much worse things without so much as an apology
Sanskaar.❤️

I love the gradual built-up of Swara & Sanskaar here 😳 Dammit those similar monologues that they had in the previous chapter made me laugh & awww at the same time 😆 Dammit it now Swara is going to fall for the loser of the century :/ Please keep that part as short as possible, I know I can't ask you to abandon it completely (😆) but since this is Sanskaar's POV and I can trust you to make it amazing, thank god for small mercies 😆..

😆
writing Laksh's love story is just about as inspiring as watching your toe nails grow.. inwards.
so i managed to run through it. though i wish i could have abandoned it. or i think i actually did.
updating soon.
and hey thank you for your compliment girl.

This was terrific Nim (I hope you don't mind me calling you that :P) ⭐️ Eagerly waiting for Part 6. Update soon please 😳

i would love it chica.
you can call me Nim. my close friends do that.
❤️..

Thanks a lot once again buddy.
Jhappis..

"Alright Nakul! Keep me posted!" Sanskaar disconnected the call.

Damn! Damn! Damn

He swore and kicked the table and got a sore toe for his efforts.

Damn!

That dumb brother of his is going to meet Swara again. And this is not going to end well for him; Sanskaar. He can just feel it in his bones. His younger brother could be quite persistence when he actually wants something. He would beg, plead, whine, threaten and blackmail till he gets his way. And he wants Swara now. And if he knows Swara which he does like the back of his hands she would blow up and that eruption of hers will take down the entire game plan and diabolical maze that he wove.

The time is ticking. He has to make a move and make it fast. Before a certain petite feisty thing blows away everything he worked, plotted, planned for.

Think Sanskaar think!

He whirled around to pace furiously to get his thoughts in order from the chaos swirling in his mind and stopped in his tracks.

Mom!

There she was; his mom; Sujata Maheshwari standing in his room and staring him down.

Hot double damn.

For how long she has been watching him?

Too long!

He ruefully thought since she is giving him the same look that she used to give him when he was being sneaky or untruthful. The Mom's stare.

Uhu!

Game up Sanskaar.

But Sanskaar being Sanskaar couldn't give up with one last ditch effort. So he started his crazy drama again. What he failed to reckon that his mother could be bigger drama queen than him.

She declared that since he doesn't care about her anymore he won't mind if she gets hurt and to his horror started hitting her head over the wall. He had to give up his game for he couldn't see her getting hurt. And when she hugged him for finally getting her old son back he felt a wave of peace washing over him.

Finally one person he doesn't have to lie to.

One person he won't have to hurt anymore.

He told her entire game plan and she decided to be his partner. After all she did lost her son for 5 years living in hell that only a mother who lost her child would live in. She too wanted his malefactors to pay for their sins.

He told her the way to forward his plan and she rose to the occasion by turning the right keys of his badi maa. End result: Laksh and Ragini's engagement was decided for the same day.

Hallelujah!

Now if only a certain Swara Bose won't wreck his scheme.

The end is so close.

Please Swara Bose! Just stay the hell away.

He probably should have wished for something else coz Swara Bose had no intention of staying away. Especially when it comes to his dear sister Ragini.

Talking about Ragini; when he went to meet her while she was getting ready for her engagement she surprised or rather shocked him by declaring him as God from bring her love back in her life back.

Damn!

At that moment Sanskaar felt terrible. For making a pawn out of the girl so simple, kind hearted and innocent. But a part of him felt happy for his Duppattewali friend that at least She would be happy. Laksh could be many things but he could count on his little brother to try and keep his wife happy for he looks genuinely found of Ragini.

You will get your happiness my friend! He made a mental promise to her.

And got down to hall area and there she was!

Swara Bose; the potential and only threat for everything he is working for; walking inside the Maheshwari mansion. And with her came in Laksh and Sharmishta.

One look at their faces and Sanskaar realized what exactly has happened. His big mouth idiot of a brother blew it and Swara must have got her mom involved and now she is here to sing the swan song for his grand scam story.

Hell and Damnation!

Sanskaar saw Swara moving towards to stairs to talk with Ragini. To warn her definitely.

Oh no lady! You don't!

Sanskaar leapt and blocked her way.

"Where are you going?" He demanded in his childish voice.

"Hi Sanskaar!" She smiled. "Gimme way please. I need to talk to Ragini!"

At that moment he slipped.

"Why?" He asked in his normal tone.

Shit!

Too late.

He saw a shift in Swara's eyes. She stared at him for a long moment with a penetrative gaze. And saw through him.

Way to blow Sanskaar Maheshwari.

What the hell was that

Swara stared at him and kept staring.

So her intuitions were right after all. There is more to Sanskaar Maheshwari. He is definitely not what he seems.

Who are you Sanskaar and what do you want?

Danger! Her instincts screamed.

Run Swara Run!.

She had to get out of here and take Ragini along. Something or rather someone is wrong her. The farther they get away from him the safer she would feel.

With that thought she moved towards left to get past Sanskaar.

And with an unnerving agility he moved and blocked her way again. She moved to the other side.

Blocked again.

Sanskaar dropped all the pretences now. He stared at her the way a predator would look at his prey. And blocked that prey's every way of exit.

Any outsider looking at them would think that they are doing what almost could count as sensual dance.

What they were doing was.. Two extremely intelligent and intuitive beings mentally wrestling to pin each other down.

But luck favoured Sanskaar. Despite all Swara's attempts the engagement was on.

Everyone gathered. Rings were presented. Beaming faces all around. Well except the groom to be; his future Mother-in-law and his current Love. Swara.

Sanskaar looked at Swara. She was looking quite agitated. Sanskaar mentally noted: probably she desperately wants to yell the classic filmy dialogue: Yeh Shaadi Nahi Hosakti!

He almost grinned and despite a part of him warning to not do so; He went ahead and stood close to her. Very close.

"Don't they look cute?" He bent his head and whispered softly near her ear pointing at Ragini and Laksh. Swara almost jumped in start and then glared at him.

Ouch! If only looks could kill!

What you gonna do now Swara Bose? Luck is on my side.

He smiled and then realized he celebrated too soon.

For his luck did a volte farce.

Sharmishta fainted and Ragini being the sweet girl that she is; decided her mom needs her more at that moment.

There goes engagement.

He nodded ruefully. Well played Bose Ladies!

Yet him being him did his last ditch attempt to convince Ragini to get engaged first.

Who else would block his way but ..Swara!

She held on to her family firmly and walked away.

And turned back at the last moment to look at him.

And he looked straight into her eyes.

Swara stared at him for what seemed like an eternity.

I know who you are Sanskaar Maheshwari.

I will find out what you want.

He almost smiled. He could never resist a challenge. In fact he relishes it.

I know that you know Swara Bose.

So Good luck Lady!

Game is on!

And he watched her walk away.