Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :)

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
A beautifully evocative piece dearie! I feel I'm inside Sanskar's psyche! 👏 👏

Nik..
🤗.

thanx a lot dearie..

inside Sanskaar pysche.. now that some compliment.
thank you.

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Liked chap 5 too, Nimmi 😊 And please don't worry, I intend a 😊 to be just showing happiness, not a polite ploy 😉

What stuck me most about the chapter, was the fact that both Swara & Sanskaar are in each other's thoughts. They may well be fighting this slow fascination they are starting to feel for each other, but it's there, all the same! Also like the "mirror image" monologues of Sanskaar and Swara. Each saying very symmetric sentences, but from opposite angles of the equation!

Keep it up, girl 😊 Thanks for the PM. Next few days, I very much doubt if I will be grabbing pole position like I did the last 3 times! I am traveling. But I will comment as soon as able, keep those updates & PMs coming, please!

Viji..
🤗

thankh ku thankh ku girl!
i always felt Swara nd Sanskaar are two halves of a perfect puzzle.
Am so glad you like the monologues.😳..

adn hey no isses buddy.. you have loads and loads of fun.
happy times

confession: 😊 this one still scares me😆

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
You've done a beautiful job Nimmi👏
The way you are portraying Sanskar's character, his mixed emotions; he wants to get revenge but at the same time he still loves his family.
Your story is simply brilliant 😳
Update soon 😊

Preet..
🤗

thank you so much buddy for liking the story and your comment😳..
thanx again..

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CarpediemRose

@CarpediemRose

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Wow ,loved this chapter soo much yaar👏👏👏

Awesome work,loved it a lot😳😳

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Its beautiful ⭐️ 👏
thanks for pm

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Loved the update...

Do pm me while updating. ...

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Hey Nimmi!

Thanks a lot for the pm. I was a silent member of this forum till now. But the awesome works by some writers (including you) has forced me to break my silence.

I'm totally in love with this FF. You have portrayed the labyrinth of Sanskar's emotions so beautifully. You have struck the right chords of my mind as a reader. The constant swaying of his conscience between right and wrong is well presented.

The cosmic connection between SwaSan is simply heart-warming. Swara has already started having an effect on Sanskar. She has already made a place for herself in his mind.

I'm loving the way you are developing the story. Please do update the next part soon. I'm eagerly looking forward to it. :)

Love,

Ashi.

Edited by Cinderella3 - 10 years ago

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Nimmi 🤗
The monologue in this update were mindblowing👏
You just nailed it 😳
The name Laksh Vermin Maheshwari was superb 🤣
Update soon 😳

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

God didn't I love this chapter.
I just had this bad day and I see ur pm, I read this and hurrah! Ii am happy again.

Swara slapped Lakshya...Sanskar's reluctant appreciation and finally the similar way both Swara and Sanskar responded to the situation from different angles.
Loved it.

Thanks for the pm.