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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: jasw
Thanks for the PM! Hayeee, Sanskar in full jealous mode! 😛 I haven't seen the spoilers. Do they show a jealous Sanskar? Hope they do.
I loved the united stand of Sanskar and Swara in the end. ❤️
Beautifully written.👍🏼

Welcome for the PM and glad you liked it! Oh I was inspired by the precap where Sanskaar simply went and sat on the table letting Lux in, I imputed the rest of the feelings in myself as to what I felt he would feel:). Yes, I wanted to show that Swara has now come to "need" him too. Thanks for commenting.

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luv_virmaan

@luv_virmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I loved loved loved the OS. 👏

The way you brought out Sanskaar's pain and turmoil is awesome!

And i hope to see a monologue of Swara on the show, regarding her and Sanskaar's relationship, just like the one in your OS.

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love
Its so beautifully penned down⭐️... Loved it Shruti...you're an amazing writer..👏 You've put down the emotions and thoughts of Swara and Sanskaar so aptly that, as a reader, I felt what they must be going through.. 😳 Looking forward to read more of you're work.. Keep rocking...

Arrr- thank you sweetie! That's so nice! Glad you liked it x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: manasie23
Superb Shruti.. loved this one shot... because this was soo realistic ki this could have actually happened... thanks for the pm

Thanks hon- glad you enjoyed it! PS: Hope you saw how nice your creations look in the other 3 Shot? Thanks again for that:) x

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sonal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Beautifully written yaar shruti

Loved it😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: piccola1
Wow Medha..this caught MY heart and squeezed it, you have written it so beautifully !👏 Your oneshots are so excellently written, you can literally SEE them roll out..wish wish wish this could be the screenplay the serial folks would pick up and use !😳
I love the way you have depicted Sanskaar..so needy of His desire to comfort and love Swara, so insecure of their future, so resigned to Swara not loving him..and so frustrated with Lakshya.

And Swara...her confusion, her being torn between ehat she knew of herself and what she is still to know of her current self, absolutely spot on !

Lakshya -can u just leave these 2 together please !

Can I request you yo make this a TS and give it the dream climax it sooo deserves? Pwetty pwease?😳

Thank you Pic! You haven't confused me with Medha right, assume above is just a mistake in names? 😃. I'm assuming you meant this comment for here but if not, sorry! 😆. Glad you liked it. As for the actual CVs picking it up 😳- itna atcha bhi nahi hai! You've totally got what I wanted readers to feel through my characters. I'll think on extending this further, some others are asking the same so let me think 😳.

PS: Did you read my recently completed 3 Shot as I've mentioned you in that due to a certain request you made on that 😉, I mean the one called Overpowered in Love 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: shababr
very nice writing. Look forward to reading your take Shruti. Please do write more often. ⭐️

Hey! Thank you for reading and liking, appreciate it. I have written a few others you can check out if you have the time and inclination 😳. The links are on the SwaSan AT or I can scrap them to you!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sun_shine18
Okay, I'm gonna assume that this was what had actually happened 😳
It would give my crazy, swasan obsessed mind a lot of peace.😃
As usual you nailed it. It was really beautiful, especially Sanskar'a thoughts. 👏
Sanskar's monologues are something I never get tired of reading, and something I haven't attempted to write yet.
He seriously scares me with all his layers and shades. But you always write Sanskar to perfection.
Hats off for that. 👏
Please do write more. It's always a pleasure reading from you. 😊

Thanks so much Paro! Thank God for our imaginations eh? We can make it happen the way we want to 😉.

Re Sanskaar- oddly, I find Sanskaar easiest to write. Very rarely, I get over obsessed with certain characters, usually for me these are a bit grey, with layers to their personalities and depths that I can really explore. I literally start to feel I actually know them, like for real I mean. For me, Sanskaar is such a character so it's not really hard work for me. Thanks for appreciating it!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
It is gross, isnt it? You could have planned n plotted the next day. Pretty presumptuous of lux to unmask everything tonight now that HE finally suspects something is wrong.

Sanskaar is in so much pain 😭 they could have easily incorporated all these things into the episode, varun could have shown all these emotions quite well. But of course all they concentrate on is more drama. Really a heart wrenching description of what sanskaar is feeling.

Hi S, IKR! What is it with these mental people doing a month's worth of drama in a night?!. I don't have much hope that they will explore the real subtleties of the characters' feelings etc in the actual epi before launching straight into the action and I too felt that VK especially could so bring it all out, given the chance, I felt I had to make it up like this. Glad you enjoyed reading.

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megha jain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Awesome. Amazing mind-blowing OneShot dear
Sanskaar wat to say abt this guy ... Hayeee every time I read any Fic abt swsan I m falling vry deeply nd madly in love with this guy 😳
How much he care for his lady love ... He sat away from her bcoz he don't want her to be uncomfortable 😳
How he wish at that time ..if they were a normal couple then things would have been so diffrent 😊
Awww he want to erase all the stress and pain from his love's face 😳
How he wanted to soothe her ...hug her kiss her ...but he can't do that ..
Sanku is jealous ...hayeee how cute he looks when he is jealous 😳
He is hurt to see swara laksh ...but he control his emotions and going outside so they can talk to each other ...but swara stop him 😳
She said to him ...he can't leave her alone with lux 😊
She want him to be with her ...
😳
Hope ki cvs also show something like this in the show ...but they are not as good as u dear 😆
I love ur writting skills dear ...I m fan /ac /cooler ...of ur writing ...
Thanxxx for the pm
Ps:- actually I wrote a very long comment but that got deleted 😡
<3...<3...lots of love...<3...<3...

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