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megha jain

@meghaashvikian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Megha🤗Thank you so much for your detailed comment and very kind words and I'm sorry you had to re-type after a longcomment- I hate it when that happens😡. Well. as you can probably tell, I'm totally in love with Sanskaar so your in good company😉. Yourembarrassing me with your praise😳but I'm very grateful!

Don't be sry dear I don't mind to retype ...for a lovely writer like u
Hehe I would love to be in ur company 😆 hope by being in ur company some day I m also able to write at least four line on swasan (I know that day never come my writing sucks 🤢 but hope so ) 😆
We r grateful to u dear ...for giving us such a lovely stories to read
Thanks to u for writing these stories 😳

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome interpretation. Would love to see something like this go down. 😊

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misaki

@misaki

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Honestly, I rarely really enjoy reading Fan Fiction here on IF.

Major turn off for me is bad English and cliche'd plots. I have very few writers that I like and enjoy reading their works.

I'm really happy and glad that I have a new addition to that list. Really well written Shruthi and I loved the way you have beautifully brought out the turmoil and love within Sanskaar. I have never looked or thought of Sanskaar as the typical guy in love. I guess you know about that too. Your Sanskaar is exactly the way I see Sanskaar and this is why I immensely enjoyed this work of yours. I only hope that I will someday be able to write the way you guys do. Brilliant ! 👏

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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kaku17

@kaku17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Brilliant...you have penned down the emotions so beautifully ⭐️...it flowed so smoothly that I could visualize it and it tugged at my heart...

I am a hopeless sanskaar fan 😃 and his conflicting emotions were so raw...and I loved that part where he turns to see swara's emotions after giving them time to sort out the things knowing fully well that he might see the same thing which he saw on lucky's face, but he still does as he could not stop himself...ofcourse I was relieved when swara stopped him from going by holding his hands and sansku's shock on that...ahh my shipper heart...😳

Please keep writing more when time permits...i love to read your work...😃

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Awe!!! no words dear...hats off dear. ...

My mind started to imagine...how it will b if the same sequence in the show...

U described it so well dear...

Fantastic update...

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hope something like thi had actually happened

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
Awesome interpretation. Would love to see something like this go down. 😊

Thank you!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: misaki
Honestly, I rarely really enjoy reading Fan Fiction here on IF.
Major turn off for me is bad English and cliche'd plots. I have very few writers that I like and enjoy reading their works.

I'm really happy and glad that I have a new addition to that list. Really well written Shruthi and I loved the way you have beautifully brought out the turmoil and love within Sanskaar. I have never looked or thought of Sanskaar as the typical guy in love. I guess you know about that too. Your Sanskaar is exactly the way I see Sanskaar and this is why I immensely enjoyed this work of yours. I only hope that I will someday be able to write the way you guys do. Brilliant ! 👏

Oh wow! That's an amazing compliment! I too have the same issue with poorly written English so am relieved you think I pass that test 😊. Your embarrassing me but am so glad you liked it and could especially relate to Sanskaar- needless to explain how obsessed with him I am 😳.

What's your name btw? Oh and I am sure you write well too? Have you written anything? I'd love to read! Let me know if you have x

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: kaku17
Brilliant...you have penned down the emotions so beautifully ⭐️...it flowed so smoothly that I could visualize it and it tugged at my heart...

I am a hopeless sanskaar fan 😃 and his conflicting emotions were so raw...and I loved that part where he turns to see swara's emotions after giving them time to sort out the things knowing fully well that he might see the same thing which he saw on lucky's face, but he still does as he could not stop himself...ofcourse I was relieved when swara stopped him from going by holding his hands and sansku's shock on that...ahh my shipper heart...😳

Please keep writing more when time permits...i love to read your work...😃

Thank you here too- just replied on the other story too 😊. Sanskaar is an easy character to get obsessed with I think- such layers and so many fascinating things you can impute into his character without ever getting bored. Glad you liked my analysis of his feelings and reactions. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my ramblings- appreciate it hugely! 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: anu91
Awe!!! no words dear...hats off dear. ...
My mind started to imagine...how it will b if the same sequence in the show...
U described it so well dear...
Fantastic update...

Thanks so much for this Anu and I am really really sorry I forgot to PM you! I was so tired by the time I finished, I couldn't keep track- I'll remember next time!

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