Maelstrom- A SwaSan One Shot - Page 4

Originally posted by: SantaClaus

Hello 🤗

I am new to this forum , (and the show too 😛 ) , and had been reading the fan fictions in the forum tirelessly , over the weekend 😛

I must admit , this forum is full of so many gifted writers .

I always felt that the quality of TV shows are deteriorating because the writers are over-worked due to deadlines and all . But you guys , although busy with your own work , come up with such master pieces , then why cant the so-called creatives come up with such ideas, instead of catering the same old story over and over again? 😕

Ok,enough of my ranting 😛

I wish something like this happened in the show 😊

If you dont mind me saying this , please continue this OS into a SS or atleast TS 😛

Originally posted by: hp_2006

I loved your os..it was awesome..👏👏👏

sanskaar's inner turmoil was wonderfully portrayed..

and loved the way you wrote about swara's feelings..

please write an ss on how swara and sanskaar's relationship will move forward in the serial..would love to read it 😃..i know u would do full justice to it..😊

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

Shruti,🤗

I loved loved loved this os. Thank goodness today is a Sunday..I can read this in peace.

All of the reactions were captured so nicely...and powerfully. I liked sanskaar's descriotion best...although Swara was not far behind.

This can be my canon of a missing swasan scene..because its most certainly never going to be shown in the show.

The old flame returning...and the husband's possesiveness...as well as the fact that the new love is blooming between them, which happens to be way more powerful and deep than the one before...all of it was expressed in your usual detailed manner.

love--

Medha.

Originally posted by: Breezy-

I LOVED THIS ONE! <33

I really liked as this was mostly based on sanskar's point of view, on what he feels with this current things going on. Really liked how you potrayed a bit of his jealously after laksh entered the room. <3 Emotions are feelings-Literally. When i was reading this, I felt emotions in my body as tingles and muscular tension😆 Tingles coz the way sanskar wanted to Punch laksh right away but unfortunately he can't. He loves swara so freaking much. And tension coz i was bit afraid on how swara feels for sanskar. Glad she told sanskar not to leave her alone in the room with laksh.😳

Do write more.x

Love and kisses for you, from my side. 🤪 🤗

Originally posted by: luv_virmaan

I loved loved loved the OS. 👏

The way you brought out Sanskaar's pain and turmoil is awesome!

And i hope to see a monologue of Swara on the show, regarding her and Sanskaar's relationship, just like the one in your OS.

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Beautifully written yaar shruti

Loved it😃

Originally posted by: meghaashvikian

Awesome. Amazing mind-blowing OneShot dear
Sanskaar wat to say abt this guy ... Hayeee every time I read any Fic abt swsan I m falling vry deeply nd madly in love with this guy 😳
How much he care for his lady love ... He sat away from her bcoz he don't want her to be uncomfortable 😳
How he wish at that time ..if they were a normal couple then things would have been so diffrent 😊
Awww he want to erase all the stress and pain from his love's face 😳
How he wanted to soothe her ...hug her kiss her ...but he can't do that ..
Sanku is jealous ...hayeee how cute he looks when he is jealous 😳
He is hurt to see swara laksh ...but he control his emotions and going outside so they can talk to each other ...but swara stop him 😳
She said to him ...he can't leave her alone with lux 😊
She want him to be with her ...
😳
Hope ki cvs also show something like this in the show ...but they are not as good as u dear 😆
I love ur writting skills dear ...I m fan /ac /cooler ...of ur writing ...
Thanxxx for the pm
Ps:- actually I wrote a very long comment but that got deleted 😡
<3...<3...lots of love...<3...<3...

Originally posted by: princess_tara

that was beautiful

Originally posted by: Asyalover

nicely portayed swasan's emotions..cont soon