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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Nithya.G
Its awesome os 😳
lovely update ❤️

pm me plse 😉

Thanks so much for the comment, Nithya. 😊 Got your buddy request & added you, shall send PM for my future work.

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Nabila

@NabilaIslam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

When are you going to post the "Earth" OS ?

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1005068

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

hope they show her this way, it would be interesting to watch her with gray shades.

your whole analysis on her character is brilliant. I am loving your writings more than the show.

plz pm me when you write something.😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.
Hi Vijii,
You write so well. Love how you manage to get symbolisms into ever piece of writing you pen down. Really enjoyed this.

Looking forward to read more work of yours.

-Nisha

Hi Nisha 😊 Thanks for your comment.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: inlieu
Oh wow! What a lovely way to start my weekend by reading this!
I loved the way you described Annapurna and I could actually picture her this way in the show. I hope the writers give us more insight into her thought process.

I am beginning to feel more and more confident that she's the one who had Kavita killed. They even said in the show that Sanksaar had taken the lead in the family business when he was still living with them years ago. I guess she could never digest that. Her jealousy and grudges against Sujata and Sanskaar would make sense.

Sujata might be unfair with her prejudices but she is no hypocrite - I love that she calls a spade a spade. Annapurna, well, I'm sure that even if she knew Ragini were wrong (I sometimes suspect she does already), her pride and ego won't let her admit or accept that she could have made a mistake. I can totally see her trying to bulldoze SwaSan's relationship to get Lakshya and Swara back together.

Great piece of work again, dear. I am looking forward to the next installment. 😃

Hi Jean. 😊 Was so happy to know you'd liked my portrayal of AP in this one. Yeah, I do feel her character has a lot of potential to be developed, she really fits the "still waters run deep" and "hand that rocks the cradle rules the world" adages 😊

I'm working on Earth at the moment, but may take time since I have some official travel commitments coming week. Hoping to have it up week of Oct 12.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: samiya.059
How do u write such beautiful stories...ur way of writing seems so lyrical...it was an amazing piece of work I must say...part ist about annapurna was so good...totally described her character..
and swason part was brilliant...just loved it to the core...keep writing more n more...
thanks for pm

Thanks so much Samiya 😊

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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

And You managed to surprise me this time. Water was predictable cuz none is more adaptable than Swara.
But Annapurna as fire...now that was a bit bewildering for me at first.
However once I read the whole thing and thought on that perspective, things clicked to place too well.
I think you may have actually started a new interpretation of the character's psychology.
Congratulations!!!!!!
Coming to the story, u r a really wonderful writer. You managed to grab the undivided attention right up to the end.
I liked the apparent wariness of Annapurna towards Swara. Fire and water, the opposites.
Annapurna and Sanskar's relationship reminded me of Maharana Pratap and his third mother, Rani Dheerbai Bhatiyani. She too used to wish that her child was like Pratap and envious, she used to present a facade of altruism to all.

Waiting for the next.

-Niki

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drooler

@drooler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Loved the update. I like the way you have woven annapurna's past and thus justifying her nature.

Will the update be continuing from here or it will be based on a totally different theme ??

waiting eagerly for the next element. ..

continue soon.😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Flabbergasted...seriously...the way you wove the story of AP and Swara...Both ladies are tough cookies but then AP has always had it 'given' to her ...meanwhile Swara worked hard for it...

Fantastic writing and the ending about Fire...super summation.

Loved this...👏

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Hello Viji😊

Thanks for the pm. Your characterizationof AP is extremely detailed and built concisely. Her backstory is quite an insight in to Annapurna psyche. How she thinks, what she feels, her motivations and actions. Though this fiery attribute has yet to manifest on screen your version certainly gives her character more depth and dimension.

Coming to Swasan I don't know if AP will pose a threat to their relationship, she is quite fond of Sanskar but that can only be determined once Raginis truth comes out. But would love to see how her character comes in to play in your story. Waiting for Swara to confess her love to Sanskar and hoping for some romance in the next update. 😳

As always brilliant writing😊😊

Sorry for the late response

Edited by RUQAIYA10 - 10 years ago

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