SwaSan OS-- 'Fire'

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Please post the next OS in the series! I want to read about the reactions of Swara and Sanskar!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: TRPS
Beautiful!!!!!you wrote the every character , their nuances very accurately. 👏

"With a determined look on her face, she had instead gone over to the back, where Sanskaar had been asked to sit, right next to the gilded pillar that rose to the ornate ceiling. There was barely any room there next to him, but Swara had squeezed herself in, practically sitting on his left thigh."

but in your whole prefect OS, don't know why, this scene touched my heart. Just loved it! If Cvs ever show ths in the serial, definitely It would be a epic scene of Swasan. 😊

Thanks so much for your detailed and lovely comment dear 😊

Glad you liked that scene of Swara determinedly going over to sit, right by Sanskaar. There was a bit of symbolism I'd inserted there: the "practically sitting on left thigh" bit. In pujas/ havans etc, when married couples participate, the wife always sits just to the left of her husband. Close to his heart. 😊 And if you see the depictions of Divine Couples like Laxmi---Narayan, in Hindu mythology, She is shown seated on His left thigh. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
That so nice..
The detailing of the OS is just marvellous...
👏
Thank u for the PM

Thanks for the compliment. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Thank you for the PM. I had read it earlier. I loved it but I'm waiting for the next in the series.

Thanks so much. I am working on "Earth", the 3rd and last part in this series, but I need some time as I have an official travel commitment this week.

Plan to have it up week of Oct 12, and if at all possible, will try to post it Oct 10--11 weekend. Don't like keeping readers in suspense, but I just need time to make sure it comes out the way I envision it. 😊

Thanks again for reading and commenting on my work.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: anju10
lovely os dear
wonderfully written
amazing

Thanks Anju. Really appreciate that you took the time to read & comment.

I'm working on the last part--"Earth" at the moment, and shall PM you once its up.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: NabilaIslam
When are you going to post the "Earth" OS ?

Hi Nabila. Sorry to keep you waiting yaar, but I have an official travel commitment this week. I am confident of updating "Earth", the week of October 12, and if at all possible, will try to do it earlier. I don't like keeping readers in suspense, but with this official commitment, I do need some time to make sure the OS comes out properly, the way I envision it.

Thanks for reading and commenting on my works. I'm really grateful for the motivation! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: patralekha24
hope they show her this way, it would be interesting to watch her with gray shades.
your whole analysis on her character is brilliant. I am loving your writings more than the show.
plz pm me when you write something.😊

Hey...glad you liked my portrayal of AP. Thanks for the buddy request, I've added you and shall PM you for my further work.

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kaku17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Thanks a lot for the pm or else I would have missed out on this wonderful part.

Annapurna, ah, that lady really does confound me. You have beautifully brought out her character traits, though I must admit, I never saw her along the lines which you have mentioned.

The paragraph where you mentioned about her being J regarding the remarkable son being born to Rp and Suju were bang on. Her jealousy and her innate resolve to make her younger son be the better one was remarkable. It is her that nature which always make me feel that she was the reason behind KAVITA'S death. I am definite that the goons were somehow sent by her, though motive can be shown as different as per the cvs liking.

Swara and sanskar part I liked and I also feel its only swara who can take on AP head on.

Waiting for the next part in your trilogy n hoping that soon swara will show AP her rightful place without stepping over boundaries.