SwaSan OS-- 'Fire' - Page 4

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much Suhasini 😊 Sorry I delayed sending you a PM this time...I was about to do so, but by the time you had already read this and given this lovely comment. 😊 Next update, I shall send you a quick PM for sure.

Originally posted by: aafrah

Hi,
I have a lot to say, not because I am a newly turned SwaSan fan but because I have been an avid reader since childhood, and a good quality of work impedes me to come back with feedback.

So, this my dear is an impeccable work of art, pieces like this define literature. A story doesn't always need to be a compelling "story" it can be an account of a few threads of thought, a feeling that ebbs and goes, it may not have a concrete be going or even a concrete end. It just needs to touch those vulnerable chords in a reader and port them to a surreal world - your piece my dear did just that - ever so eloquently, ever so poignantly.

It's a powerful narration with few words expressed to successfully depict powerful characters - the narration was so overbearing that it over powered SawSan's track - and it was so good that, Inspite of being a SawSan fan, I am not complaining. I could have read the story with random other characters too and still it would have had the same impact on me. SwaSan didn't pull of this fiction - you as a writer have my friend!

Coming to Annapoorna, what I love about your character meta is, you allowed her to be in the grey. Readers conventionally love "good" characters so it needs boldness to depict them in more humble lines - everybody who has seen the show probably has a good image of Annapoorna but your character meta defiles that and shows her other sides too. She is in the grey and that should be acceptable, she still should be lovable and I think to. Great extent you have been successful in achieving this.
Even though it's a SawSan OS but trust me it was AAA truly and guess what, I just loved that - loved that her character stood strong and showed us the perception of a supporting character which is so different from the lead.

If you're still reading and haven't dozed off in between, I would like to say I am proud of you as a writer, and would love it if sometime in the future we can collaborate and write something!

Much love,
Aafrah

Originally posted by: CutiePie..

Finally the second shot

Absolutely woderful

Loved it

Hope u come out with an ff too...

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hi Aafrah...Thanks so much for this lovely, detailed, heartfelt comment. 😊 It felt very nice to hear that you'd liked this work.

Am so happy that I've managed to convey to you what I wanted to, regarding Annapurna's portrayal in this piece. Yes, I wanted to show her grey sides...I do feel she is such a towering persona and a very interesting character, and she has those edges, those hidden or maybe not so hidden layers, that make her a complex person.

Sure, am game for possibly writing something in collaboration with you in the future.
</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> I'm Viji, BTW. Nice to "meet" you. 😊</font>

Originally posted by: Ashakalyani

just one word...awesome..cant wait to read more from u