Hey dear Tootie ,
Just finished reading this one.
Ohh dear I really dont know what should I say to you,
I seriously have no words to appreciate ur writing.
It was lovely reading it.
Your works are so mind refreshing.
It was so fascinating.
Another beautifully written work of yours.
Swara's thoughts " Why on the earth she was thinking about his eyes and how handsome he was "
She is supposed to that ...Hehehe
Loved the way Sanskar saved swara not caring that his hands were getting burned.
Seriously Swara is so lucky to have such a caring and protective best friend and husband like Sanskar.
And then the dialogues of Panditji ,
they were like " Sone pe suhaga "
And yes in the end , her realisation that she hadnt asked for what she believed was her only mission in staying with sanskar, her mababa to Kuldevi.
Instead she asked for clarity in her own relationship with Sanskar .
Superb update .
Keep writing dear.