Restored by Grace - A SwaSan Three Shot - Page 3

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti i love you for this 🤗
This ia masterpiece. This is marvellous 😳👏
Hats off to you for writing this incredible story.
This is exactly what i want to see in the serial.
You have portrayed Swara's feelings so well. I really hope cvs takes some inspiration from your story 😆 and shows a mature and rational Swara as she was at the beginning of the show. I too felt frustrated by her cold behaviour towards Sanskar, as it was not totally justified (according to me).
Okay he did mistaked but also asked for forgiveness lots of times, but breaking all the relationship with him is not done.
Anyways amazing work Shruts 🤗
Keep writing 😳

Originally posted by: rahul_coolaz

Awesome ts...
Loved how you put forward swara ' s state of mind, because swara in the serial is annoying hell out of me, especially after yesterday's episode
Very good narration style...

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Beautiful! 👏👏👏

I have no words to say how beautifully this was written. I was seeing it play before my own very eyes. You seriously should become the creative for the show. This is one scene, I would LOVE to see in the show. Please Please do PM me whenever you post any OS/SS/FF. Would love to read them. 😳

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

I am on a reading spree today & stumbled upon this Shru 😆

OHMYGOD This was SO good ⭐️ I mean it literally felt like you put all your research & efforts into it with the whole description of Ashapura Maa. I googled the images & could actually imagine the scenes & it felt divine 😳 Love the dialogues by panditji, you actually used proper hindi there & I love it when someone speaks & writes such good hindi. WOO! 😆

But this felt like something that could TOTALLY happen in the show & I so wish that it does. I'll be very disappointed if the Kuldevi Pooja is not shown after specifically getting SwaSan married for it. Their first important even as a married couple 😳 Really want this to happen! The Sanskaar here is SO dreamy He won't let anything happen to Swara even if he gets harmed in the process <3 Swara would be stupid to not see his worth soon tbh. Loved the way Swara finally came to understand & respect his feelings here & at the same time begun to realize her attraction towards him & introspect her feelings. Yes Swara your husband is way TOO attractive & it's unbelievable that you haven't noticed it YET. I refuse to believe 😆 Love how they rekindle their friendship towards the end & we get their smiles back. I love the panditji in your FF 😳😆

Lovely TS Shru 🤗 It was amazing, do write more :D

Originally posted by: SONAL30

wow shruti

beautifully written

loved her confusion n then her trust👏

Originally posted by: Breezy-

Res.

I will edit soon <3

-Edited.

Having just read your 3 shots, I wanted to thank you for writing it. It is fascinating. It is so beautifully written shruts. I felt as though it enabled me to be a part of that 'Kuldevi Puja' even though that can never happen. 😆 Dammit swara is so lucky to have sansksar in her life, who is always ready to protect her.
The way you have pended this fic - it proves that you really have done a wheelbarrow full of research on Ashapura mata (Something like that lol)
I really liked how swara understood sanskar at the end.I really hope something like this happens in the show too.
I look forward to reading your next Fic, till then bye.x