Redemption- A SwaSan OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

I loved this one. The way you showed them trusting and being there for each other: it gave a warm feeling of them weaving a protective, cozy bubble around themselves, to shield each other from the craziness their relatives are putting them through! 😊

Ans yes, I loved this line "She redeemed him truly and in doing so, enslaved him forever."

That was almost poetic! 😊

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti this is so beautiful 🤗
You are a fab writer 👏
The last line of course was amazing 😳
Please pm me whenever you write something something, i would love to read it 🤗

Umm hey
I actually don't know how to review or comment on this site
It is my first time even wanting to comment on some work here so I don't know what I am doing here and if it is really not a way to comment on fics here I am really sorry I will figure it out may be so hope you don't mind
So well you said you are more of a silent reader I really don't think you should be because it is first fic on here that touched my heart and I really loved it
And it was so so well written too I really loved reading it
And the emotions I actually only have one word for how you put all that in the words beautiful I mean all those feelings it is not easy to put them in words and get them properly across to your readers
It was really mesmerising like I can actually feel All these with sanskar
It was awesome
And yeah that last line
She redeemed him truly and in doing so, enslaved him forever.
Oh my God that was really really beautiful
You made my day with this thank you very much for this little piece
Hope you keep writing I would totally love to read more of your works
P.s. Now I would have to just figure out a way to get notification so if you post some work here I could know about it

Originally posted by: somniator99

Umm hey
I actually don't know how to review or comment on this site
It is my first time even wanting to comment on some work here so I don't know what I am doing here and if it is really not a way to comment on fics here I am really sorry I will figure it out may be so hope you don't mind
So well you said you are more of a silent reader I really don't think you should be because it is first fic on here that touched my heart and I really loved it
And it was so so well written too I really loved reading it
And the emotions I actually only have one word for how you put all that in the words beautiful I mean all those feelings it is not easy to put them in words and get them properly across to your readers
It was really mesmerising like I can actually feel All these with sanskar
It was awesome
And yeah that last line
She redeemed him truly and in doing so, enslaved him forever.
Oh my God that was really really beautiful
You made my day with this thank you very much for this little piece
Hope you keep writing I would totally love to read more of your works
P.s. Now I would have to just figure out a way to get notification so if you post some work here I could know about it

If you could do that it would be really awesome
And I would be sure to read all of your works I know they all would be really good
And I actually have this account for almost a year but it is just I wasn't able to connect with any work here before
It is actually first time I liked some fic on here
Your writing is really good
And don't worry I too am a bit obsessed with swasan pairing
And hey one question for you if you don't mind are on any other fiction sites other then here?
Or ship any other pairings

Originally posted by: somniator99

If you could do that it would be really awesome
And I would be sure to read all of your works I know they all would be really good
And I actually have this account for almost a year but it is just I wasn't able to connect with any work here before
It is actually first time I liked some fic on here
Your writing is really good
And don't worry I too am a bit obsessed with swasan pairing
And hey one question for you if you don't mind are on any other fiction sites other then here?
Or ship any other pairings

Awww 😳 thanks! There's some awesome writers on this forum, better than me- you'll like their work too! Check out the post on the first page which is the index to the fictions on this forum.
Hmm do you mean pairings as in other shows or pairs for this forum? On this forum there were and possibly still are Swara Lakshya shippers and before there were Sanskaar Ragini shippers

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

This was a very well-written OS 👏

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

This was a very well-written OS 👏

Simply awesome!

I think mera screw deela ho gaya hai 😆

I read, "I trust you" as "I LOVE you"

And not just once, but five times, because I couldn't believe that SHE said that 🤣 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice..