Redemption- A SwaSan OS - Page 4

so nice ... really can't imagine sanskar POV at that scene

Really a awesome os
Loved it 👏

Originally posted by: SuMaN_TR

so nice ... really can't imagine sanskar POV at that scene

so perfectly potrait !!! And swara unknowing connection !!!

Bravo👍🏼

Thanks so much! So glad you liked this:) and appreciate you letting me know!

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Really a awesome os
Loved it 👏

Thank you so much dear! This was the very first story I wrote on this Forum:) X

Awesome os. Really loved it. The thoughts of sanskar was beautifully written. The friendship and trust between swara and sanskar was clearly visible. Unknowingly sanskar fall in love with swara.

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome os. Really loved it. The thoughts of sanskar was beautifully written. The friendship and trust between swara and sanskar was clearly visible. Unknowingly sanskar fall in love with swara.

Hey Sakkiyah! Glad you found this relatively old piece and liked it so much, thank you so much X

Originally posted by: amimus

Awesome OS Shruti.

Hi Shruti,
You are one of the most amazing writers.

The way you penned down sanskar's thoughts wondering over past few days ,
how swara became an integral part of his life ,
and now every single tear falling from her eyes pierced his heart to the extent,
where he just feels to destroy every reason of her agony.


Such a wonderful portrayal.
And liked the way , in the end where swara expressed her trust on him.
Loved a lot.


Plus I m really a big fan of your writings.

And in the mean time I just wanna tell you that the storyline of DK is AMAZING.

I have started reading it and reached to the half of story .

Though I don't want to stop but I have to keep it on hold as I have my exams. Sorry for rhat
Could not read it earlier due to some reasons.

A BIG thank you to you for not stopping your PMs.
Will let you know my thoughts on DK once I m done reading.


Get well soon dear and stay blessed.

- Best regards

Mukta

Hey dear ,
Hi ...Its me again .
As I told you that I have my exams
and because of that I will have to wait for reading Dark knight ,
because I wanna read it in one go.
But till then I m enjoying one shots .
Once again , U stole my heart by your writing.
It was such a beautiful update .
Loved it.
And lastly when sanskar said ,
"Jo bhi ho mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga ,
Mai hamesha tumhare sath hu aur mai sab thik kardunga , pls trust me "
And swara "I trust u "
Aww so cute it was .
Stay blessed dear

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi Shruti,
You are one of the most amazing writers.

The way you penned down sanskar's thoughts wondering over past few days ,
how swara became an integral part of his life ,
and now every single tear falling from her eyes pierced his heart to the extent,
where he just feels to destroy every reason of her agony.


Such a wonderful portrayal.
And liked the way , in the end where swara expressed her trust on him.
Loved a lot.


Plus I m really a big fan of your writings.

And in the mean time I just wanna tell you that the storyline of DK is AMAZING.

I have started reading it and reached to the half of story .

Though I don't want to stop but I have to keep it on hold as I have my exams. Sorry for rhat
Could not read it earlier due to some reasons.

A BIG thank you to you for not stopping your PMs.
Will let you know my thoughts on DK once I m done reading.


Get well soon dear and stay blessed.

- Best regards

Mukta