Redemption- A SwaSan OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: -.Aphrodite.-

It's really beautiful, loved the way you have shown Sanskaar's thoughts. Sometimes, we don't care about our actions but once we realize that we are wrong, it's too late and that happened with Sanskaar. But still his true friendship gained him Swara's trust. Trust is not easy to gain but once you have that, its more difficult to hold it and that is Sanskaar's main test now. You have shown it in such an amazing way.

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Its so beautifully penned down dear...
would like to read more of your work...
keep rocking...

Originally posted by: kaku17

lovely...plz keep writing more...😃

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

the last line said it all.

beautifully written shruti.

and yeah...go girl...u called rags a succubus!!!

write more. and i really better had go back to my ms excel presentation before i spend any more time on the forum...thanks to writers like you.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

I loved this one. The way you showed them trusting and being there for each other: it gave a warm feeling of them weaving a protective, cozy bubble around themselves, to shield each other from the craziness their relatives are putting them through! 😊

Ans yes, I loved this line "She redeemed him truly and in doing so, enslaved him forever."

That was almost poetic! 😊