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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Hey dear ,
Hi ...Its me again .
As I told you that I have my exams
and because of that I will have to wait for reading Dark knight ,
because I wanna read it in one go.
But till then I m enjoying one shots .
Once again , U stole my heart by your writing.
It was such a beautiful update .
Loved it.
And lastly when sanskar said ,
"Jo bhi ho mai tumhe kabhi haarne nahi dunga ,
Mai hamesha tumhare sath hu aur mai sab thik kardunga , pls trust me "
And swara "I trust u "
Aww so cute it was .
Stay blessed dear

Hey again Harshida 🤗

I am so grateful you are making time to read my OSs etc despite having exams! Thank you hugely and for your very kind words- much appreciated. This was the first thing I wrote on this Forum- seems like a lifetime ago! I am so pleased you liked it and those few lines were really special for me when I wrote this so it was amazing to see it appreciated. Thanks again and you stay blessed too!

Love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Lovely OS :)

Hello! I think you are a new reader to my work? Thank so much for reading and liking, appreciate it! 😃

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_Serendipity

@_Serendipity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Hello !!

This OS has been written so amazingly. I have recently started watching this show and this small journey has been bittersweet for me. On one hand, I am glad that I found such an amazing couple who had so much chemistry but at the same time I wish I wouldn't have started watching the show. SwaSan had so much potential yet in my opinion the writers of this show didn't utilized that and just forget about the current track. Its rubbish. I am sorry, I drifted away from my review.

As I was saying this OS is amazing.You're exceptionally talented writer. You're writing is very descriptive and deep. I love reading such stories where writers delve into character. Very few writers have this ability and you're one of them. Sanskaar's each thought and emotion is beautifully penned down here by you. Makes me wish that show's creative should have shown something like this too.

I have only read this OS and one of your current story chapter and I have already become a fan of your writing. I am going through your index right now as much as my schedule allows and I hope to catch up to your current story soon.

Aavya

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