SwaSan TS-- Second Chances

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Awesome ts 👏
Loved it totally
Thanks for pm

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome ts 👏
Loved it totally
Thanks for pm

Thanks so very much dear. 🤗 🤗

Very glad that you loved this TS.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Awesome TS

The whole story line was awesome.

I also like the poem 'The unending love 'written by Rabindranath tagore. He beautifully portrayed the eternity of love. You beautifully presented the concept of love using the poem

I loved all the characters in the TS, The character of Kavita's mother was nice. She understood sanskar very well. And she was happy for him

The bond between swara and sharmista was also nice. The bond between mother and daughter, you beautifully visualized it.

At the end the love confession of swasan was beautifull

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome TS
The whole story line was awesome.
I also like the poem 'The unending love 'written by Rabindranath tagore. He beautifully portrayed the eternity of love. You beautifully presented the concept of love using the poem
I loved all the characters in the TS, The character of Kavita's mother was nice. She understood sanskar very well. And she was happy for him
The bond between swara and sharmista was also nice. The bond between mother and daughter, you beautifully visualized it.
At the end the love confession of swasan was beautifull

Thanks a ton Sakkiyah 🤗

This piece is very close to my heart, so I am so very happy to hear that you loved it.

That poem "Unending Love" by Rabindranath Tagore is a favorite of mine, it is so very profound and sublime in its meaning. I felt it was so very appropriate for SwaSan.

I wanted to portray Kavita's mother in this Fic as being a very understanding and wonderful person, who is well disposed towards Sanskaar. Similarly, I wanted to show a very loving and mature bond between Shomi and Swara, with Shomi advising and counseling her to make the correct choices for herself.

This was very special to me, as I wanted to show SwaSan's journey towards finding each other. Of leaving their past pain behind, learning to move on and find happiness again, finding love and contentment again, with each other.

Thanks again for your warm words about this piece. 🤗

Quote

taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Omw that was genius , how do u contain so much off talent u lucky girl.

U are a magician with words i am still feeling the after effects of that rollercoaster

Of emotions u took me on with this magnificent piece. I dont like kavita nvr did like her

But in ur story i actually appreciate her part in his life. Swasans nervous anticipation

Of those supressed feelings had me reading with butterflies fluttering icould actually

Imagine them going thru it. I love how ur love confession us always unique NVR boring.

U say it all with the atmosphere and feelings around far better than them actually uttering the

Words now to achieve that with a reader is really a stroke of brilliance. U also bring in a little comedy with Ragini , I can't help but laugh at her silly useless methods. Have a raved enuf abt this piece? Maybe i failed to convey his much I loved it any way here goes , I LOVE THIS TS

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: taniks
Omw that was genius , how do u contain so much off talent u lucky girl.
U are a magician with words i am still feeling the after effects of that rollercoaster
Of emotions u took me on with this magnificent piece. I dont like kavita nvr did like her
But in ur story i actually appreciate her part in his life. Swasans nervous anticipation
Of those supressed feelings had me reading with butterflies fluttering icould actually
Imagine them going thru it. I love how ur love confession us always unique NVR boring.
U say it all with the atmosphere and feelings around far better than them actually uttering the
Words now to achieve that with a reader is really a stroke of brilliance. U also bring in a little comedy with Ragini , I can't help but laugh at her silly useless methods. Have a raved enuf abt this piece? Maybe i failed to convey his much I loved it any way here goes , I LOVE THIS TS

Hi Sabarshni 🤗 🤗

Wow...you really made my evening with this comment on a TS which is very close to my heart. Dozens and dozens of jhappis to you for this. 🤗

As a major fan of SwaSan, what more could I ask for than a very analytical and intuitive reader like you, saying that you loved the way their story was portrayed, how they confessed their deep and irrevocable love for each other. Thanks so very much for that, I felt so very touched by your words.

To tell you the truth, I always considered Kavita as a pleasant memory of a past love in Sanskaar's mind. That's it. I have flatly refused to acknowledge the resurrected Kavita in my mind. As far as I am concerned, she passed away tragically 5 years back, and that's the sad end of her story. IMO, the serial should never have tried to tamper with that memory by bringing her back.

Ragini was certainly sly and spiteful here...she's at that stage where she's rabidly insecure about Swara, and tremendously jealous of her too. She just cannot feel to happy seeing Swara or Sanskaar happy. 😕

Thanks again for your very warm words of appreciation. 🤗

Quote

lekahravi

@lekahravi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Oh friend...out of word n world...
Kya writing skills ...im damn sure..its my kind request pls start ur work for writing book...im amazed...hats off...
They way u conveying each person feel,pain in your words.
..pls its request...
Will do read other works also... 😃

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: leku
Oh friend...out of word n world...
Kya writing skills ...im damn sure..its my kind request pls start ur work for writing book...im amazed...hats off...
They way u conveying each person feel,pain in your words.
..pls its request...
Will do read other works also... 😃

Thanks so much Leku. ...🤗

Am truly touched and humbled by your words. Let's see, God willing, maybe some day in the future.

Am so happy you loved this story. Its very close to my heart, so your words meant a lot to me.

Quote

sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

This is one of the most amazing story I have ever read :)

Beautifully written :)

Too good :)

Amazing :)

Lovely :)

Quote

Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
This is one of the most amazing story I have ever read :)
Beautifully written :)
Too good :)
Amazing :)
Lovely :)

Thanks so very much Sumana. 🤗 This story is very close to my heart, and it means a lot to me to hear that you loved this so much.

Love,

Viji