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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit
This is amazing!! I loved the subtle way in which you showed the progression in swasan relationship.

Also, I loved that you wrote about kavita and sanskaar relationship. Him loving swara doesn't mean that he is forgetting kavita. He lost his first love. And this loss made him learn a lot of things and made him the person he is today. Kavita will remain as a happy memory for him while builds his future with swara.
This emotional conflict was brilliantly written.

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. 😊 Yes, I wanted to show Sanskaar coming to terms with his loss, and moving on to find happiness with Swara. It doesn't mean he forgets Kavita, or that his first love was a mistake. Just as Swara moves on from Lucky, it is learning to be happy again, and finding love again.

I am happy to hear you liked it. Thanks very much for your warm words. If you have time and you are interested, please do check out my other SwaSan works in my index.

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Swathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Seriously its one of the best confession scens that swasan could have.

Loves it when sanskar said there is no gpong back and when swara said she would have broke the jaw if she didnt love him

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: swa291
Seriously its one of the best confession scens that swasan could have.
Loves it when sanskar said there is no gpong back and when swara said she would have broke the jaw if she didnt love him

😉 Haha yeah I remember I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote the confession scene. Very happy that you liked it. 😊

Thanks for your lovely comment.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Allyson
This was beautiful. I loved it

Thank you 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Thanks so much dpm15 for your generous words. 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: -damon-
I'm Speechless!!
I don't know wht to say!
i just loved it..Totally!
it was beautiful!

Thanks so much. 😊 Haven't seen you much around lately. Been busy with studies?

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
aww so sweet i wish this happen in serial
whoopie
totally loved it.

Thanks so much Sumi. Glad you liked it. 😊

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Hey Viji,😊

Every time I read your stories I am awe struck . Sachii you are so talented. The dream in the beginning was like the merging of Sanskar's past and present subtly hinting at his future. The memory of Kavita still lingering but no longer a source of torture and pain but rather a sweet melancholy . His confusion and inner turmoil about his growing feelings for Swara is described perfectly.

I loved the Character of Kavita's mother and her love and support towards Sanskar. Her encouragement to not hold on to the past but usher in the new beginning with Swara and stating that this is what Kavita would have wanted and urging Swara to do the same is very heartwarming.We could use such a strong character in the show.

Loved the Mother daughter convo of Swara and Shomi and Shomi enlightening Swara on her dilemma. Sometimes that's all it takes. Having a heart to heart with your Mom.

The ending was sooo romantic. Sanskar is such a hottie. Unable to control his feelings and going straight for the kiss😳.

Wonderful as always😃. Hope you already have something in the works

Ruqaiya

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10
Hey Viji,😊

Every time I read your stories I am awe struck . Sachii you are so talented. The dream in the beginning was like the merging of Sanskar's past and present subtly hinting at his future. The memory of Kavita still lingering but no longer a source of torture and pain but rather a sweet melancholy . His confusion and inner turmoil about his growing feelings for Swara is described perfectly.

I loved the Character of Kavita's mother and her love and support towards Sanskar. Her encouragement to not hold on to the past but usher in the new beginning with Swara and stating that this is what Kavita would have wanted and urging Swara to do the same is very heartwarming.We could use such a strong character in the show.

Loved the Mother daughter convo of Swara and Shomi and Shomi enlightening Swara on her dilemma. Sometimes that's all it takes. Having a heart to heart with your Mom.

The ending was sooo romantic. Sanskar is such a hottie. Unable to control his feelings and going straight for the kiss😳.

Wonderful as always😃. Hope you already have something in the works

Ruqaiya

Thanks so much Ruqaiya, for your very warm words. Seriously yaar, your comments always make my day. 😊

Yeah, in this TS I wanted to show the strong maternal characters of Shomi and Kavita's mom. How they support SwaSan in making a new beginning in their relationship. I also wanted to show that side of the Sanskaar and Swara friendship ---their "dard ka rishta". How both of them have a second chance at love, a second chance at happiness, with each other.

I thoroughly enjoyed writing the end, when Swara and Sanskaar confess their feelings for each other. So am very happy that you liked it. SwaSan are pure magic, na? 😊

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RUQAIYA10

@RUQAIYA10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thanks so much Ruqaiya, for your very warm words. Seriously yaar, your comments always make my day. 😊

Yeah, in this TS I wanted to show the strong maternal characters of Shomi and Kavita's mom. How they support SwaSan in making a new beginning in their relationship. I also wanted to show that side of the Sanskaar and Swara friendship ---their "dard ka rishta". How both of them have a second chance at love, a second chance at happiness, with each other.

I thoroughly enjoyed writing the end, when Swara and Sanskaar confess their feelings for each other. So am very happy that you liked it. SwaSan are pure magic, na? 😊

Absolutely. I don't think there is another couple currently on TV who can match their chemistry. Besides the fact that they complement each other, they are both strong individuals. Sanskar has many facets to his character. He is Dark just as much as light. But what resonates most with me is that he is capable of change. Change.. the one thing that's constant in our lives because I do believe that our journey here is to gradually grow and become better people. And this is why I connected with Sanskar. He willingly cast aside his vengeance and resolved to mend his ways and the wrongs that he had done.

Swara was no doubt the catalyst. Her biggest strength is compassion and her ability to forgive easily. At times she goes too far much to the viewers displeasure but she reminds me of Dumbledore in Harry Potter. Harry once mentioned how he found it irksome that Dumbledore always tried to see the good in others. The biggest proof was his unwavering trust in Snape.Though I doubt Dumbledore was as mahaan as our heroine is in the show😆He too had a dark side. But Swara also saw the good in Sanskar. She forgave him and placed her implicit trust in him. This was enough for Sanskar who was already in awe this generosity.

This was the basis of their relationship and the very ingredient that is now producing the magic we are seeing on screen.

Edited by RUQAIYA10 - 9 years ago