SwaSan TS-- Second Chances - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

147

Views

32.3k

Users

58

Likes

360

Frequent Posters

Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RUQAIYA10


Absolutely. I don't think there is another couple currently on TV who can match their chemistry. Besides the fact that they complement each other, they are both strong individuals. Sanskar has many facets to his character. He is Dark just as much as light. But what resonates most with me is that he is capable of change. Change.. the one thing that's constant in our lives because I do believe that our journey here is to gradually grow and become better people. And this is why I connected with Sanskar. He willingly cast aside his vengeance and resolved to mend his ways and the wrongs that he had done.

Swara was no doubt the catalyst. Her biggest strength is compassion and her ability to forgive easily. At times she goes too far much to the viewers displeasure but she reminds me of Dumbledore in Harry Potter. Harry once mentioned how he found it irksome that Dumbledore always tried to see the good in others. The biggest proof was his unwavering trust in Snape.Though I doubt Dumbledore was as mahaan as our heroine is in the show😆He too had a dark side. But Swara also saw the good in Sanskar. She forgave him and placed her implicit trust in him. This was enough for Sanskar who was already in awe this generosity.
This was the basis of their relationship and the very ingredient that is now producing the magic we are seeing on screen.


Very well put. I agree with you, Swara and Sanskaar are complementary in a lot of respects. He has seen enough of the dark side to know that it's not wise to always be so self sacrificing. I think he can protect Swara from being taken advantage of by others, like Ragini for example. Without him, she would just go on and on being trod upon.

And Swara can keep his grey side into a light grey 😊 you are right, that Sanskaar is inherently a person with a very good heart, and Swara has brought that out in him.


JilyPotter thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago

Confused Swara has been slightly annoying on the show regarding Sanskaar and Laksh, but confused Swara was delightful in your story. Partially because I knew exactly what side she is swaying (towards our precious Sankaaar)😳.And it was lovely seeing Sharmishta knocking some sense into her daughter about love, loyalty and true companionship. And Swara going with up on the trip takes the cake, our brilliant Swara finally listening to her heart, and of course her mom. The line "I was not looking for love when we met" and "Do you think you could learn to love me, too?" made my heart flutter, because it shows our sincere Sanskaar is about his emotion. I mean, it took the man 5 years to move on, he deserves so much but he is ready to sacrifice his love for the happiness of the girl who finally brought happiness to him. Thank you for this absolutely heartwarming, and gut wrenching story!

Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Regal.

Confused Swara has been slightly annoying on the show regarding Sanskaar and Laksh, but confused Swara was delightful in your story. Partially because I knew exactly what side she is swaying (towards our precious Sankaaar)😳.And it was lovely seeing Sharmishta knocking some sense into her daughter about love, loyalty and true companionship. And Swara going with up on the trip takes the cake, our brilliant Swara finally listening to her heart, and of course her mom. The line "I was not looking for love when we met" and "Do you think you could learn to love me, too?" made my heart flutter, because it shows our sincere Sanskaar is about his emotion. I mean, it took the man 5 years to move on, he deserves so much but he is ready to sacrifice his love for the happiness of the girl who finally brought happiness to him. Thank you for this absolutely heartwarming, and gut wrenching story!



Thanks so very much, dear. 🤗 🤗 I can't explain how much your comment touched me, because this story is one that is close to my heart. I had done the very best I could, to bring out that emotion of moving on from a past loss, learning to find happiness again, and to lead a fulfilling life again. So it was a pleasure & privilege to receive your comment.

I am so very, very glad that you liked this and appreciated those aspects, the slow budding of romance, as well as letting go of past hurts. Thanks also, for noticing the little nuances I had attempted to put in---of two mothers, really, guiding Sanskaar and Swara. One of course, being Shomi. And the other, Suchitra--Kavita's mom, who also nudges them to think of their feelings for each other.

Happy Diwali to you & your family!!


Sajal_ali20 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Omg! Absolutely loved it
Hats off to you
Loved it how swasan understood their feeling for each other without any words.
Commendable!😳😳
Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sajal_ali20

Omg! Absolutely loved it

Hats off to you
Loved it how swasan understood their feeling for each other without any words.
Commendable!😳😳


Hey...thanks so much for your comment. 😊

This is the first time we're interacting, I guess? I'm Viji. Please do let me know your name as well.

In case you are interested in my other works on SwaSan, I've written quite a few One shots /2 shots/3 shots of them. You could check out my index, the link is on my siggy, at the bottom of my posts.

Cheers

Viji


Aayat23 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Hi viji...
I guess i'm not going to get enough of your work...U left me with so much of peacefulness with this ts...I guess my words are not going to be enough to tell u how much I loved this...
I just could not express what a web u have weave with this...
I just could not stop myself from rereading it...There are my friends who r not on IF the next thing I'm going to this make them aware of such a masterpiece ...
Because It as wonderful as movie.,

U r one of my fav writer and I do mean it...now I Am seeing u as my inspiration...I seriously do mean this...

I'm left speechless with this...

I have always thought of how sansakar's relation would have been with kavit'as family after her...here u made that bond so strong and memorable that I felt this was what i was looking for...

Sharmishta she is the one of the most mature lady who beautifully made swara see the facts ...loved mother daughter convo...


Swasan scene I guess It will take me forever to express in words what I felt for that...so just one word is their in marathi that is ATULNIYA that means something which has no comparison,out of the world...

Loved every bit of this...I'm gonna read and read this whensoever I will low...bcoz this is best one to boost my mood...so thanku for writing something as incredible as this..-
mukta...
I'm nt good with typing from my phone so sorry for any mistakes above...
BlurredLines thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow It was so good. I really loved it and it was such a pleasure reading it . Such an awesome TS👏.

Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muktai

Hi viji...
I guess i'm not going to get enough of your work...U left me with so much of peacefulness with this ts...I guess my words are not going to be enough to tell u how much I loved this...
I just could not express what a web u have weave with this...
I just could not stop myself from rereading it...There are my friends who r not on IF the next thing I'm going to this make them aware of such a masterpiece ...
Because It as wonderful as movie.,

U r one of my fav writer and I do mean it...now I Am seeing u as my inspiration...I seriously do mean this...

I'm left speechless with this...

I have always thought of how sansakar's relation would have been with kavit'as family after her...here u made that bond so strong and memorable that I felt this was what i was looking for...

Sharmishta she is the one of the most mature lady who beautifully made swara see the facts ...loved mother daughter convo...


Swasan scene I guess It will take me forever to express in words what I felt for that...so just one word is their in marathi that is ATULNIYA that means something which has no comparison,out of the world...

Loved every bit of this...I'm gonna read and read this whensoever I will low...bcoz this is best one to boost my mood...so thanku for writing something as incredible as this..-
mukta...
I'm nt good with typing from my phone so sorry for any mistakes above...



Hi Mukta dear...🤗 🤗

I am very deeply touched my your comment yaar. This TS is very close to my heart, all I can say is, Thanks for your wonderful and warm comment. It really made me feel very moved and humbled.

In this TS, I wanted to show Sanskaar and Swara leaving the pain of their respective pasts behind, coming together and learning to love again, to be happy again. Am so very glad you liked it so much.

Your feedback made my Christmas holiday that much more special. 🤗

Thanks again.

---Viji

Aayat23 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
--
U successfully showed what you have imagined dear...
Your most welcome...i must be the one saying thank you bcoz it made mine Christmas very special too...
Cogito_Ergo_Sum thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaMikealson

Wow It was so good. I really loved it and it was such a pleasure reading it . Such an awesome TS👏.



Thanks so much Nita. 😊 It was a pleasure to hear that you loved this TS.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".