SwaSan TS-- Second Chances - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: inlieu


Thanks Viji! Please do watch PV if you get a chance (episodes are all on youtube), I think it's the kind of show you'd like. There are things happening on so many layers and with such subtelty that it's a delight to watch. Rarely do you get Indian shows with such amazing characterization, even for the kids in the show!



Sure, will try to catch up with PV 😊 Sounds very interesting.

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Posted: 9 years ago

it was awesome, very beautifully written👏

your story is much better than the show😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: patralekha24

it was awesome, very beautifully written👏

your story is much better than the show😃



Thanks so much! 😊 I was very touched by your comment and the praise made me literally 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thank you very much Prithi, for reading and commenting. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome two-shot..👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome two-shot..👏



Thanks so much, Mystic. 😊 BTW I'm Viji.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god!!! Viji u are a brilliant writer..👏
Awesome story dear..I loved evert single bit..
Sanskaar and Swara relation is on a higher level in this story..amazing..
I loved the part when Kavita's mum spoke to Sanskar and Swara about their love relationship.And that is the spark which initiated this warm flame of love inside Swara's mind..😃😊
Loved the way Sharmishta explained Swara how to believe our heart..😳
and loved the final Swasan confession part and kiss..☺️
Loved Raginis reaction in the end😆
Thank you dear for such a beautiful piece of writing🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Oh my god!!! Viji u are a brilliant writer..👏

Awesome story dear..I loved evert single bit..
Sanskaar and Swara relation is on a higher level in this story..amazing..
I loved the part when Kavita's mum spoke to Sanskar and Swara about their love relationship.And that is the spark which initiated this warm flame of love inside Swara's mind..😃😊
Loved the way Sharmishta explained Swara how to believe our heart..😳
and loved the final Swasan confession part and kiss..☺️
Loved Raginis reaction in the end😆
Thank you dear for such a beautiful piece of writing🤗


Hey Naina 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much dear for reading and taking time to give this detailed and lovely comment. Am very glad you liked it.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Oh my god!!! Viji u are a brilliant writer..👏

Awesome story dear..I loved evert single bit..
Sanskaar and Swara relation is on a higher level in this story..amazing..
I loved the part when Kavita's mum spoke to Sanskar and Swara about their love relationship.And that is the spark which initiated this warm flame of love inside Swara's mind..😃😊
Loved the way Sharmishta explained Swara how to believe our heart..😳
and loved the final Swasan confession part and kiss..☺️
Loved Raginis reaction in the end😆
Thank you dear for such a beautiful piece of writing🤗


Naina dear 😊

Thanks also for noticing the symmetry between Kavita's mom talking to Sanskaar & Swara in the first part, and Shomi talking to Swara in the second part. I wanted to bring out that symmetry, how both these ladies help Sanskaar and Swara realize their love for each other. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
This is amazing!! I loved the subtle way in which you showed the progression in swasan relationship.

Also, I loved that you wrote about kavita and sanskaar relationship. Him loving swara doesn't mean that he is forgetting kavita. He lost his first love. And this loss made him learn a lot of things and made him the person he is today. Kavita will remain as a happy memory for him while builds his future with swara.
This emotional conflict was brilliantly written.

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