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Posted: 9 years ago
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Try to update in Hindi. It seems more real
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Which language u r convenient with update in tat yar...
Just excited to read next part...
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I am just a beginner. So pls update in english or if possible please combine both hindi and english. That is fine for me. I can understand, but still for some words and all i don't the meaning.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaar kab update karoogi
I am impatient
#waiting 😊 🥱 ⭐️
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amazing story :) Keep it up dear :)
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Continue soon yar...
Waiting 4 next part...
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Update soon 😉

Ps:I know I am anoying but i just love your ff and I can't wait 😃
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Chapter 5
Sanskaar reaches Swara's mayaka. He knocks the door but no opens it. Then he goes to mehashwari house. He knocks the door. Ragini opens it.

Sanskaar: Where is everyone?

Ragini: Sanskaar jee what happen?

Sanskaar: swara is... No why am I telling you. You hate swara! Get out of my face.

Sanskaar pushes Ragini. And screams Laksh, Papa, mummy, bade papa, maa (Laksh mom)

Everyone comes downstairs

Durga prasad: what happen Laksh? Why are you screaming like this? This is no one way to call someone.

Sanskaar: bade papa swara...she is...

Durga prasad: sanskaar calm down! Tell me what happen beta

Sanskaar: Swara is in hospital (sanskaar cries). Bade papa she got shot. She needs her family. Bade papa, I can't see her like this. Please come with me

Everyone is shocked.

Laksh: Sanskaar is she okay? Please tell me sanskaar what's wrong.

Sanskaar: no Laksh she is not okay. She is in operation theatre. Please Laksh come with me.

Durga prasad: how did this happen sanskaar?

Sanskaar: bade papa, we were outside of the mandir. We were waiting for taxi. I went to the store to get water for swara and when I came back...she was...

Durga prasad: sanskaar don't worry. Nothing will happen to her

Laksh: but what were you doing in mandir with her

Sanskaar looks at him and pause for a while

Sanskaar: Laksh we got married.

Laksh looks at him angrily

Sanskaar: Laksh I know you are angry but she needs you. Please come with me. Please don't leave her in this state.

Sanskaar pushes him

Laksh: why does that characterless woman needs me? You are her husband! Not me. I don't care if she lives or dies. She is already dead for me. I don't care about her. YOU CAN LEAVE!

Sanskaar and everyone else is shocked. Durga yells at Laksh

Durga prasad: What are you saying LAKSH? How dare you? Did you even forgot your humanity

Laksh: what humanity papa. She got married to this cheater. I don't have any humanity. I don't care if she even goes to hell.

Sanskaar SLAPS LAKSH

Sanskaar: HOW DARE YOU? She is my WIFE. I CANT HEAR A WORD AGAINST HER. SAY one more thing and I WILL KILL YOU!

Durga prasad gets a really urgent call and without saying a word he leaves from there.

Laksh: LEAVE RIGHT NOW. AND TELL YOUR WIFE... I hate her. I will never want to see her face again.

Sanskaar is again shocked. Laksh take his hand and throws him out of the house. He closes the door.

Ragini smiles secretly

Sanskaar is still shocked. Tears are rolling down from his eyes. He just couldn't believe that Laksh said all this.

Sanskaar realizes that swara needs him. Without saying anything, he heads toward the hospital.

Sanskaar reaches the hospital. He is outside of operation theatre. The operation is still on. Doctor comes out of theatre

Sanskaar: what happen doctor? Is she okay? Please tell me she is out of danger

Doctor: unfortunately no. We have done the operation but danger is still on for 24 hours.

Sanskaar: no nothing can happen to swara. She can't leave. I won't let her go anywhere.

Doctor leaves from there. Sanskaar panics and wonders what he should do next? He looks inside the room and watches swara

Sanskaar: Swara, I am sorry. Because of me you lost everything. I am root of all your problems. Please forgive me swara. But don't go!

Sanskaar back up. He overhears a husband wife talking. They were saying that if someone goes to Pahari wale mandir without wearing shoes. Then god futfills that person wishes. Sanskaar smiles. He sees a ray of hope.

He takes off his shoes and heads out the hospital. Mandir is 20 km far. But he smiles. And he says to himself that if swara can make me live again then I can at least do this.

He start walking.

Rocks, broken glass, burning cigarets, tree roots comes in his way but he doesn't stop. It is very cold outside. He is shivering, shaking and almost dying. It was very hard for him to continue walking with that unbearable pain and storms but he continues he says to himself again and again that he has to save her and he will do anything to save her.

He was walking despite facing these hardships. All of a sudden, a motorcycle comes and hit him. He is on the road. His head was bleeding. He was in intolerable pain. He just couldn't get up. He was screaming for help. He closed his eyes but saw swara face.

Sanskaar to himself: no I couldn't save Kavita. I was helpless at that time. But today swara needs me. I have to save her. I will save her by hook or crook.

He wipes his tears and stand up again. He starts walking again.

Precap: he reaches the mandir!

Durga prasad is hiding something. But what is it? Is it connection to swara or sanskaar? Can it change their life. Will swara survive? What will be Ragini reaction?

Edited by Saraa. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Sanskar😔Poor guy...
Lucky😡😡😡😡Shut up!!!!
Sanskar fear to loose swara😭😭😭😭...
Loved it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...😊
Poor Sanskaar...😭
Hope Swara gets conscious soon..

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