SwaSan FF: Dil Ka Rishta (chapter 8 updated)

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Dil Ka Rishta

Concept: Sanskaar Swara gets married and it's about how he supports her, become friends and finally he falls in love with her. Will she accept his accept his love? How will she accept his love?


Index
Chapter 1: 1st page
Chapter 2: 5th page
Chapter 3: 7th page
Chapter 4: 10th page
Chapter 5: 13th page
Chapter 6: 15th page
Chapter 7: 18th page
Chapter 8: 22nd page
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

Dil Ka Rishta


Concept: Sanskaar Swara gets married and it's about how he supports her, become friends and finally he falls in love with her. Will she accept his accept his love? How will she accept his love?


Index
Chapter 1: First page (Soon will be updated)

nice concept
Waiting for chapter 1 😳 😳
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Chapter 1
Swara goes to mehashwari house to question Ragini.

Swara in mehashwari house

Swara: Ragini Ragini Ragini. If you're not coward then come in front of my face yells swara. Why are you scared now? Come I need my answers

Ragini heard swara voice, wonder what is she doing here but she comes in front of swara

Swara: Mrs Ragini Laksh Mehashwari! This is what you wanted right and you got this. Congrats my sister for finally achieving your dream. You did so much to achieved your dream na? You almost killed your sister, you separated your parents, you separated sanskaar from his family, you ruined our family. Why? If you have said it just one time that leave Laksh. I would had happily sacrificed Laksh for you. But you know what now you have won Laksh. Great be happy with your Laksh. But I will bring your truth in front of everyone. Just wait and watch!

Laksh comes!

Laksh: what the hell are you doing here? Get out right now, I don't want to see your face,. You're dead for me! And don't you dare say anything to my wife. She is not selfish like you.

Swara: SHUT UP! I was NOT talking to you! I was talking to your wife! Don't interfere!

Swara raises her hand at Ragini but Laksh stops her

Laksh: how dare you? LEAVE before I cross my limits

Swara: yes I know you hate me but I hate you even more, didn't you said that loving me was your biggest mistake. Yes you're right and you know what I hate you. Your existence doesn't matter to me. Yes you're right I never loved you because a person like you is not worth it. Our relationship is over!

Laksh pushes swara toward the door. She gets hurt and her head start bleeding. Sanskaar enters. He sees swara on the floor.

He runs toward swara and gave his hand to her. Swara looks at him and then hold his hand. She gets up with the support of sanskaar

Sanskaar to swara: are you okay?

Swara: Thank you once again for supporting me

Sanskaar stares at Laksh.

Sanskaar to Laksh: who give you the right to hurt Swara like this?

But swara stops sanskaar,

Swara: leave it sanskaar. He is not worth it. Lets go.
Sanskaar holds swara hand and both of them leave.

Sanskaar: I'll drop you home swara.

Swara breaks down and fall in the road.

Swara: which home sanskaar? I don't have home. My sister betrayed me. My dad hates me! I am alone. I am tired, I can't fight. Swara is dead sanskaar, Her love ones killed her.

Sanskaar gives swara his hand yet again.

Sanskaar: no swara you can't loose hope. You have to fight for yourself, your mother, and your dida. Your mother and dida needs you. And who says you're alone? You're not alone. I am with you. I will support you.

Swara: why sanskaar? Why are you doing this? We don't even share any relation.

Sanskaar: Ssshhh. Don't say anything. Sometimes you can't explain in words. I know you swara and I know you can never do wrong. But since you really want to name this relationship then...friends. Can I be your friend?

Swara smiles and nods

Sanskaar: now let's go to the hospital. You're hurt. We need to get your bandage done.

Swara: no sanskaar. I want to go to the temple first and I want you to come with me.


Precap: swara and sanskaar are in temple. They are praying to god and chunari/duppata falls on them.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

Chapter 1

Swara goes to mehashwari house to question Ragini.

Swara in mehashwari house

Swara: Ragini Ragini Ragini. If you're not coward then come in front of my face yells swara. Why are you scared now? Come I need my answers

Ragini heard swara voice, wonder what is she doing here but she comes in front of swara

Swara: Mrs Ragini Laksh Mehashwari! This is what you wanted right and you got this. Congrats my sister for finally achieving your dream. You did so much to achieved your dream na? You almost killed your sister, you separated your parents, you separated sanskaar from his family, you ruined our family. Why? If you have said it just one time that leave Laksh. I would had happily sacrificed Laksh for you. But you know what now you have won Laksh. Great be happy with your Laksh. But I will bring your truth in front of everyone. Just wait and watch!

Laksh comes!

Laksh: what the hell are you doing here? Get out right now, I don't want to see your face,. You're dead for me! And don't you dare say anything to my wife. She is not selfish like you.

Swara: SHUT UP! I was NOT talking to you! I was talking to your wife! Don't interfere!

Swara raises her hand at Ragini but Laksh stops her

Laksh: how dare you? LEAVE before I cross my limits

Swara: yes I know you hate me but I hate you even more, didn't you said that loving me was your biggest mistake. Yes you're right and you know what I hate you. Your existence doesn't matter to me. Yes you're right I never loved you because a person like you is not worth it. Our relationship is over!

Laksh pushes swara toward the door. She gets hurt and her head start bleeding. Sanskaar enters. He sees swara on the floor.

He runs toward swara and gave his hand to her. Swara looks at him and then hold his hand. She gets up with the support of sanskaar

Sanskaar to swara: are you okay?

Swara: Thank you once again for supporting me

Sanskaar stares at Laksh.

Sanskaar to Laksh: who give you the right to hurt Swara like this?

But swara stops sanskaar,

Swara: leave it sanskaar. He is not worth it. Lets go.
Sanskaar holds swara hand and both of them leave.

Sanskaar: I'll drop you home swara.

Swara breaks down and fall in the road.

Swara: which home sanskaar? I don't have home. My sister betrayed me. My dad hates me! I am alone. I am tired, I can't fight. Swara is dead sanskaar, Her love ones killed her.

Sanskaar gives swara his hand yet again.

Sanskaar: no swara you can't loose hope. You have to fight for yourself, your mother, and your dida. Your mother and dida needs you. And who says you're alone? You're not alone. I am with you. I will support you.

Swara: why sanskaar? Why are you doing this? We don't even share any relation.

Sanskaar: Ssshhh. Don't say anything. Sometimes you can't explain in words. I know you swara and I know you can never do wrong. But since you really want to name this relationship then...friends. Can I be your friend?

Swara smiles and nods

Sanskaar: now let's go to the hospital. You're hurt. We need to get your bandage done.

Swara: no sanskaar. I want to go to the temple first and I want you to come with me.


Precap: swara and sanskaar are in temple. They are praying to god and chunari/duppata falls on them.

omg I just love it update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww...first swasan story
Thanks yaar saraa🤗
Nice start saraa
Laksh pushed swara😡stupid bewkoof idiot🤢
Ragini laksh maheshwari
But swasan convo was
Aww now they r frds yipiee😃
Chunari falls on swasan😳
Now m waiting for swasan marriage n swasan to bajofy ragya's band🤣
Ragini ki pehli suhaagraat ki bhi band bajana plzz🤪
Continue soon n if possible then do pm me😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow...a true friend ...a true soulmate...who cares for you no matter what happens...always stand for you in every stage ...give you strength to fight and never loose ...we are imperfect alone but perfect together defines our swarsan perfectly ,...😊😳⭐️
just love your ff alot...swarsan are meant to be ...😳

sanskaar is too strong as he had once faced all this...and he will make swara also strong...and will teach her to stand and fight ...for her...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great update!!!👍🏼
nice storyline...👏
loved it!!
Update soon!!!
And plz pm me!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super saraa gog head dear very nice start yar thank u so much for swasan ff dear i love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i am loving swarsan alot...but simple stories caring loving...are ok...but pls...add some twists into it...i am eagerly waiting to watch swarsan nokjhoks😆😳,(actuallly cant imagine how would be they... ) ...on everything since they are one of the destroyers or ziddi types...so after marriage ...their nokjhoks,...as friends and love...pls...add it in your ff ...😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone for these amazing comments. It means a lot to me.
If you guys have suggestions and ideas then let me know.

Will update the next chapter soon

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