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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Thanks everyone. All these comments mean a lot to me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Nice update 😊
Hopefully shona will wake up soon 😭
update soon
I just love your ff,It's great 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
This was so emotional. Poor Sanskar 😭 He don't want to lose Swara Loved it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Okay.. It was a bit dramatic
But nice... I can see the love clearly now
I loved Sanskar in this chapter even more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
wonderful update dear with lots of emotions
poor sanskaar
waitng for next update
do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
very sad part😭. i hate laksh. Whatever it is he should not tell swara is characterless.If he cums to know about ragini what he ll do
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Please update the next chapter soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6


Sanskaar is in mandir in front of Durga maa
Sanskaar to Durga maa: Swara believes in you (pauses) but I don't. Swara thinks that whatever you do is for the best only. She thinks that you can never do anything wrong. She is your devotee. So how can you see her in condition like this. How? What has she done wrong? Why is she getting such a harsh punishment?

(Pauses for 10 secs) Then wipe his tears

Sanskaar: you know Kavita always use to say that Durga maa only call those who she loves the most. I know you love swara a lot but maa...swara family needs her. Her dida and maa needs her. Don't snatch their daughter from them. They will die without her. Please.

He pauses again and started crying

Sanskaar: Maa you took Kavita away from me. But don't snatch swara! I know I committed a lot of crimes but don't punish swara. If you want to punish someone then please punish me. Swara is really nice. She deserves all the happiness. Please maa, don't take swara away. I would die, Swara is my friend. She is someone who I can share anything with. If she dies then I won't be...,...l

He wipes his tears, his eyes turn bloody red.

Sanskaar: maa people say that a wife can do anything for her husband. She can fight with any or everything. Today, a husband will fight for his wife life. I promise you that I would never ask for anything if you return swara to me.

He takes diya and put it in his hand. Then conducts the pooja. His hands started burning but he doesn't stop.

Until...he receives a call from hospital

Doctor: Sanskaar jee your wife is now out of danger.

Sanskaar smiles and thank Durga maa.

Then he runs toward the hospital. And finally reaches to swara room. Doctor comes.

Sanskaar: Doctor please tell me how is swara? Is she okay? She is fine na. Please please please doctor tell me.

Doctor: sanskaar jee calm down. Your wife is okay and you can go and meet her. But before you go, please get your bandage done. You're badly hurt.

Sanskaar: no doctor my pain is nothing compare to her pain. She must be in a lot of pain. I have to first talk to her.

Doctor smiles

Doctor: Swara jee is indeed very lucky that you're her husband.

Doctor: I am her friend.

Sanskaar smiles and goes toward her room. He goes inside. Her eyes are closed. He don't want to disturb her. So he just kept looking at her lovingly. After a while, he is about to go outside but he hears a voice.

He looks back. Swara is now awake

Swara: Sanskaar

Sanskaar goes toward swara bed. He keeps his hand on swara forehead

Sanskaar: are you okay? You know I was very scared. You scared me. No no not you but the doctor scare me. If anything would had happen to you then...maa dida would had died. Swara how can you... No how can I

Swara smiles

Swara: you're confused.

Sanskaar: no I am...

Swara: sheesh! Don't say anything. Where were you

Sanskaar: I was here.

Swara: you know... You're bad liar. I know where were you

Sanskaar: no swara...I was

Swara: why sanskaar? Why? My family didn't supported me, Ragini left me and even Laksh left me. But you...

Sanskaar: I am your husband (smiles) have you heard shaadi is lifetime punishment. He smiles again

Swara hits sanskaar and smiles.

Lower side of her stomach start painting.

Swara: ahhh

Sanskaar: okay enough. You take rest. I'll leave

Swara: get your bandage done.

Sanskaar smiles

Sanskaar: yeah sure

Swara calls sanskaar again

Swara: have lunch as well

Sanskaar: sure

Swara calls him again

Swara: take rest too

Sanskaar: fine

Swara calls him again

Sanskaar: now what swara jee?

Swara: I am getting bored. Don't take a long time. Come back soon.

Sanskaar: sure I will but why

Swara: I want to play uno with you. Bring Tom and jerry DVD too. I love Tom and jerry

Sanskaar laughs

Sanskaar: acha acha okay I will bring uno cards and Tom and jerry DVD. Anything else?

Swara: no that's it for now.

He heads out of the room. Swara smiles

Precap: sanskaar is in swara room, wondering who shot swara.


Edited by Saraa. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Thank you for the update...
I was eagering waiting for it...
Ohh you totally suprised me..
I thought it would be completely a senti rona-dhona type talk between sanskar and swara..
but it was completely opposite..
Bravo...👏
Very nicely written..
You actually drew real Swara's character very well..
Loved it👍🏼
Edited by JIDHNYASA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
very good story.A coorection if you dont mind.You told the temple is 350 km even by bus it will take 10 hours so better if you make it 10 or 20 km.
Thank you and please do continue.

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