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Posted: 9 years ago
oh very nice ff... loving it a lot and waiting eagerly for the next part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome updates...

Loving ur work...

Do cont soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Read it in 1 go
Really well written story
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Hey sara
It's Anu...
Just read ur story completely...
It's just awesome...
U written it so nicely...
For a friend he is going to any extend...beautiful portrait...loved it...
Do pm me wenever ur updating the story...din forget plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi...Will you be updating Chap 7 soon? Really eager to read more. 😊
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Awesome story just read in one go ... Amazing and interesting plz update next part soon:)
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Chapter 7
Swara is in her room thinking when sanskaar will come back

Swara: kab ayega sanskaar? It's been 1 hour 20 mins 15 secs. Pata nahi Kaha hai yeh admi. Ufff I am getting bored. Now what should I do?

She closed her eyes. Suddenly a person knocks on the door. Swara opened her eyes

Swara: kaun hai?

No one says anything

Swara: who is this.

She suddenly heard a voice of a man "Main bhoot hoon"

Swara gets scared.

Swara: Bhoot...maaa...go away. Please bhoot jee please go away. I didn't do anything to you.

Suddenly she hears a laughter and the person comes into the room.

It was none other than sanskaar

Swara: sanskaar tum?

Sanskaar: Arrey muje nahi pata tha ke jhase ki rani darthi bhi hai. He starts laughing

Swara: shut up sanskaar. I hate you. Just go away

Sanskaar: Arrey swara I was joking. I am sorry.

Swara starts smiling

Swara: I was just joking. Acha bolo meri ice cream Kaha hai.

Sanskaar: nahi hai.

Swara: what do you mean?

Sanskaar: Arrey doctor ne Kaha that no ice cream for swara

Swara: what do you mean ke doctor ne Kaha? I don't care what doctor says. I need my ice cream.

Sanskaar: bilkul nahi. I will not bring ice cream for you. Your health is most important and we won't do any compromises with that.

Swara: WHO ARE YOU?

Sanskaar: Tumhara dost aur... (Pause) Kuch nahi

Swara: I am hungry (makes baby face)

Sanskaar: Well yeh lo. I brought yogurt ice cream for you. This is good for your health

Swara: yogurt? I don't like yogurt.

Sanskaar: this is flavored yogurt. Try it

Swara opens it and eat spoon of it.

Sanskaar: kaisa hai?

Swara: this is very good. Thank you so much.

Swara continue eating it. In meanwhile sanskaar wonders that who shot swara

Sanskaar: Kis ne yeh Kia hoga? Ragini? Nahi woh yeh nahi kar sakti apni behen ke saat, Laksh? Nahi woh swara se pyaar kartha hai. Woh kabhi yeh nahi karega. Lekin phir kaun. Laksh nahi, Ragini nahi toh kis ne kiya hai yeh Sab?

Sanskaar pauses

Sanskaar: lekin joh bhi ho. I won't leave that person. I will keep an eye on everyone. I will find out that who did this to swara.

Sanskaar turns around.

Sanskaar: swara how was the ice cream

Swara: it was good.

Sanskaar notice a change in swara behavior. She seemed very quiet and tense

Sanskaar: what happen swara. Why are you so sad?

Swara: Sanskaar you know what...when I was little I use to see kids with their mom dad, sister, brothers. And I use to think that where is my papa, my sister/brother, my dada, dadi? But then I use to see my mom and smile because she meant the world to me. But then I got my papa, sister, dadi, dadi and whole family. My family was complete sanskaar but now my papa hates me. It hurts sanskaar. My sister almost killed me. Why? Why? Sanskaar I can't live without my family. I just can't. Aur Laksh...I loved him but even he left me. He hates me sanskaar. They all hate me. Am I so bad? Am I so unlucky...

She cries.

Sanskaar comes by her and hold her hand

Sanskaar: Look into my eyes. And believe me you are not a bad person. You are actually a very good person. Those people who think you are bad are bad themselves. Swara we will reunite your maa papa, expose Ragini, and make Laksh realize his mistake. And believe me when Laksh will realize his mistake, he will come to you for sure.

Swara: Nahi sanskaar. I can never be with Laksh. He is a close chapter for me. Yes it is true that I loved him but there is no love without trust. I would never ever go back to Laksh

Sanskaar looks at her and admire her.

Precap: Dida and shomi comes to the hospital. Sanskaar is in MM, ordering all servants to decorate the whole house. Everyone is shocked
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow read ur story entirely,it was soo very awesome dear,loved it a lot pls do update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally a update...
was waiting for it...

Ice cream fight was cute...
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's beautiful Sara 😳
I loved it 👏
Update soon 😊

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