Lakshya and Ragini... A Story To Tell. Part 9 updated on page 7!!!!!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
How come I didn't notice such an excellent writer in our forum 😆 hey welcome to the forum 🤗 and you know what you are so amazing writer...awesome and superb writing...I read every part and now I just want part 5(my favouraite part)to happen in show 😆 😳 lol I know not possible for now as cvs ke dimaag mein kya chalraha hai pata nahi but you keep it up 👍🏼 👏
Write more...tc
-RagYa fan 😳 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayee! The romance is building!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you Sooo much for all your kind words and the continuing support you give me .
I shall continue and I hope you all like it! Please do give any suggestions if you have aaany.
Part 6

Lakshya: Ragini, I left for you ...
Ragini: You mean?
Lakshya: I er ... I did so ... I can help you.
Ragini: Help me?
Lakshya disbt want to confront his feelings he needed to make an excuse.
Lakshya: Help you and er Swara unite your parents.
Ragini: Oh I see.
Lakshya: Yeah I hope you don't mind?
Ragini: No, obviously not.
They sat there in silence for a minute.
Ragini: I should go.
Ragini got up to leave and Lakshya stood up as well. Ragini slipped and fell back holding Lakshya. She landed on the bed and Lakshya was on top of her. Lakshya was looking deep into Raginis eyes and Ragini was getting red in the cheeks. Raginis hair was on her face and tried blowing it away, instead Lakshya slowly removed the hair from Raginis face. She closed her eyes and breathed heavily. Lakshya was smiling, he drew his face closer to Hera and Ragini opened her eyes slowly.
Ragini: Lakshya...
Lakshya blew wind on her eyes and blew down her ear and neck, making Ragini shiver.
Lakshya: Why are you getting all shy Ragini?
Ragini looked into his eyes: I don't know.
Lakshya slowly got up and then held out his hand to help Ragini get up and he pulled her up as her hands landed on his chest. She quickly took her hands off and tried leaving but Lakshya held her hand.
Lakshya: Good Night Ragini, sweet dreams.
Ragini: Good Night.
Lakshya still didn't let go.
Ragini: My hand?
Lakshya: Is very nice.
Ragini: Lakshya, let go.
Lakshya: Aren't you forgetting something?
Ragini looked around: I don't ...
Lakshya rolled Ragini towards him and faced her.
Then whispered: Are you sure?
Raginis eyes shot up:What?!
Lakshya: I'm joking, I was only kiddin but if you want I won't mind.
Lakshya smirked and Ragini blushed. Lakshya let go and Ragini left.

Lakshya: What is wrong with me? Why don't I just tell her?

Ragini in her room:

Ragini: Calm down Ragini, it was nothing just go to sleep.

Hope you liked a little more romance. Next update will be later! Please comment and liiikkeee! Thank You!
Signing Out x Take Care x

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok this was soo romanticcc a part full of RagYa's romance 😳 ragini ka pata nahi but i was blushing while reading every line 😳 aesa show mein hojaaye toh phir RagYa ke fans ki toh balle balle ho jaegi 😆 [:D/] this part is soo good...write more (desperately waiting for your next part) 😆 😳
Edited by rumyk - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heya guys my next part will be kiof basing it on the Precap. Hope you all like it and a quick request when I write can you please tell me your fave part! So far you be been a great audience loving your enthusiasm!

Part 7

The next morning Ragini woke up and headed for the kitchen to help her grandmother with breakfast. She saw the guest room door open but left. She went to the kitchen and saw her grandmother making tea.
Ragini: Dadi I'll do it.
Dadi: Okay dear. Ragini, now that Lakshya is staying here I think you should think about getting to know him and start a relationship. You've been too busy trying to get Shekher and that bengalan together. Now think about yourself.
Forget about those two, its no is and I won't let you do that, you are not getting them together as long as I live.
Ragini didn't know what to say, she stood there and her grandmother left. Ragini picked a cup of tea and went to the guest room to give it to Lakshya. She opened the door to find it empty. She saw a note on the bed.

It read...
Ragini, I know you're here to give me something for breakfast but I've had breakfast and left to look for a job. I don't want to live here and not be able to provide for myself. I'll be back home within two hours.
Don't worry, Lakshya x

Ragini smiled and left. She went outside and sat down with some vegetables to prepare. Her mind kept going back to what her grandmother had said. While not looking she cut herself.
Swara: Ragini!
Swara came running to Ragini while passing by as she heard the knife fall.
Ragini: Aaah
Swara: I'll get the first aid box.
She ran to her house and got it and started clearing her wound.
Swara: Ragini, what happened? Why were you all the way into out of space?
Ragini: Swara, I don't know what to do! Why'd she ask me to do such a thing?
Swara was done cleaning and tending the wound
Swara: Ragini? What are you talking about? Tell me everything.
Ragini explained what her grandmother had said.
Ragini: Swara, you don't need to worry. I choose to get my family together because that's most important for me now
Swara: But you have feelings for Lakshya...
Ragini: I do but our family is matters. I need them to be happy.
Swara: Thank you, for making a sacrifice.
Ragini: Swara, I'd do anything to be happy because they've done everything for us.
Swara: I have to go, mum sent me to get some groceries,I'll see you later and take care don't be careless.
Ragini: I will be careful.
Swara left Ragini to ponder and do her work, meanwhile Lakshya was listening to everything.

Later that evening, after dinner Ragini retired to go to the roof. Lakshya followed her. Ragini looked at the stars.
Lakshya: What's got you thinking?
Ragini: Nothing, just looking at the stars, aren't they just beautiful?
Lakshya: Yeah just like you.
Ragini giggled: You're too kind.
Lakshya looked at Ragini: I heard you talking to Swara early this morning. I want to help you get your parents together.
Ragini: I know you do, but we need a plan.
Lakshya: We'll need your sister for this.
Ragini smiled: She is smart.
Lakshya: Not as me.
Ragini: Really?
Lakshya took a step closer towards her: Really.
He took a few more but Swara cane jumping over the wall. Ragini and Lakshya moved away from each other.
Swara: So any plans guys or just romance?
Ragibi blushed while Lakshya smirked.


Please comment and like! Hope you liked it and tell me what you liked most!
Thaaank you for literally everything!
Signing Out x Take Care x
Edited by Tamihna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
too cute updates pls...write more on ragya ...concept can be bengauli new year ...also if you want...😳⭐️
har baar swara ragya ke beech mein tapak padti hai ...i am loving it too much ...😆😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
but can you pls...change the story line a bit in your next ff 😳...i want ragini to be a confident girl and start ignoring laksh ...and then laksh realising her value slowly and start liking her ...😊😳⭐️
also as bengauli new year is on the way and lakshya and ragini are living in same house ...and try to avoid each other ...maybe lakshya tries to talk to clear every misunderstanding but ragini ignoring him because of their family disturbances and she knows that its all over ...btw them ...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 8

Lakshya: I have a plan, why don't we just make them, I mean your grandmothers think about the old times.
Ragini: Yeah all the fun they had.
Swara: Yeeaaah that will work, they'd being thinking so much and want to relive those moments, well done Lakshya.
Lakshya turned to Ragini: Told you.
Ragini: Whatever, anyway let's go to sleep and we can get our plan working tomorrow.
Swara: Sounds good.
Swara left and Lakshya walker with Ragini downstairs to their rooms.
Ragini: Lakshya, how'd it go today?
Lakshya: With?
Ragini: Finding a job.
Lakshya: Oh, yeah I've got an interview the day after tomorrow.
Ragini: That's good, how's the place?
Lakshya: Good vibe, people seem nice as well.
Ragini: What will you be doing?
Lakshya: Its a law firm, I'll be doing an apprenticeship there.
Ragini: Wow, that's interesting.
Lakshya: Yeah can't wait.
Ragini: Well I'm sure you'll do great with everything, Good Night.
Lakshya: Good Night Ragini.

The next morning Ragini woke up and made breakfast then headed to the roof to hang out the clothes. Once she came back she saw her family and Lakshya laughing and chatting. Ragini smiled at herself and joined them.

At Swaras house Swara told her mother the plan and started to make things happen. They talked to her about the good old days and wanted her to respond positively. Though she did listen and say good things she ended up saying bad things and talked about how she hates her. So Sharmishta and Swara left.
Sharmishta: Well that couldn't have gone any worse!
Swara: I know, let's hope Ragini and Lakshya can do any better.

Back at Raginis, there sat Ragini and Lakshya with a very angry Dadi. She was saying awful things which were few things Raginis never heard. They looked at each other helplessly. Soon thy made their quick escape.

Lakshya: Even Dad wouldn't say things like that.
Ragini: What are going to do?
Lakshya: Let's call and ask Swara how it went with her.
Ragini called Swara.
Swaragini: How did it go?
They said in unison.
Swaragini: Not well.
Again in unison.
Ragini: Now?
Swara: We meet up later, get some drinks and think.
Ragini: Okay, bye
Swara: Bye.

Ragini: Didn't go well for her either, she said we should meet up later and think about it.
Lakshya: Sounds good.
Ragini: Well I need to go and do some work in the kitchen.
Lakshya: I'll come and help.
Ragini: What? You and helping in the kitchen? I'm sorry but I'm sure you'd get lost and won't find your way out
Lakshya: Very funny, now go.
He slowly pushed her towards the kitchen and he helped her.

Thank you for reading, I know you're think whhhaaat! What did thy do in the kitchen buuut I want you to comment on what they should do and I'll add it in. And there will be a few twists but nit juuust yet you'll just have to wait. Please comment like and give me your ideas. The next update will be up for me, tomorrow as its half ten in the night for me ans I want to sleeep. Night x sweet dreams to all x
Signing Out x Take Care x
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Sorry for the late reply 😊
Just read everything at one go
And it's really very nice
Keep it up :)

Continue the way u r doing..Loving it
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 9

No replies! But anywhooo I'll continue hope to see more comment guuuys

Ragini and Lakshya were preparing lunch, as we know Lakshya isn't the most domestic person. Ragini and started to make the rotiis while Lakshya just watched, after that he had a go himself. Rather than a circle rotii it was some sort of a ripped oval. Ragini cpulsbt atop laughing.
Ragini: Oh my gosh!
She said with laughter. Lakgya smirked.
Lakshya: You think that's funny huh?
Ragini nodded and Lakshya blew flour on her face and she stopped laughing. Now Lakshya started laughing.
Lakshya: You look like a cloud!!!
Ragini frowned and blew the flour away. This was the begining if the mess they made. After half an hour Ragini got back into her senses.
Ragini: Lakshya! We didn't make lunch yet, hurry please.
Lakshya: Okay you cook, I'll clean.
Lakshya was rushing all over the place sweeping, dusting and washing. Ragini finished cooking
Lakshya: Good team work. High five.
Ragini high fived Lakshya.
Ragini: You should get yourself cleaned up and ready for lunch.
Lakshya: You too.

After eating lunch Lakshya retired to his room, he'd missed his mum a lot, he missed everyone but mostly his mum.
Lakshya was staring at his mothers picture: I'm sorry mum. I didn't mean to do this, I needed to. I couldn't stand to be brought up where a man didn't respect others. I promise I'll be back a changes and better man. I miss you.
Outside Ragini heard and started tearing up. Ragini knocked and Lakshya stopped and wiped his years away.
Lakshya: Come in Ragini.
Ragini walked in and sat with Lakshya on the floor.
Ragini: I miss my mum too Lakshya.
Lakshya: I can't believe I left her I ...
Ragini: You didn't want to, I know. You had to, so you could change.
Lakshya: Exactly
Ragini: Lakshya, why don't you go and see her?
Lakshya: I'm not going back to the house.
Ragini: You don't need to.
Lakshya: Then how else?
Ragini: Well maybe somewhere outside. I can call your mum and tell her you asked to meet.
Lakshya: Your do that?
Ragini: For you to be able to see your mum, yes, I'd do anything to see mine.
Lakshya: I'm sorry.
Ragini: Don't be, you're helping me get another mother who'll love me just as much.
Lakshya: Thank you Ragini, for everything.
Ragini: Its the least I could do, now come on, lets make that phone call.

Thanks for reading. Next part will be up tomorrow. Hope you enjoyed it, COMMENT &LIKE! PLEEEAASSEE.
Signing Out x Take Care x
Edited by Tamihna - 10 years ago

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