Lakshya and Ragini... A Story To Tell. Part 9 updated on page 7!!!!!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Lakshya had moved the men away from attacking Shekher.
LF: Lakshya! What do you think you're doing!
Lakshya: No dad! You cannot just do whatever you like! You're hurting others.
LF: Looks like you haven't learnt anything. Men you know what to do.
The men came and hit Lakshya on the back. They hit Shekher once again. Ragini ran to both men and just before she was about to get hit Sharmishta moved her and she for hurt instead.
Ragini and Swara ran to them. Lakshya was on side while Shelher and Sharmishta were on the other.
Ragini: Enough!
Thee stopped hitting as LF had signaled them.
Swaragini stood in front of their parents.
Ragini supported Lakshya to stand up properly but he eyebrowed her as he was fine. She held Swaras hand.
Ragini: Swara is my sister!
The words echoed in everyones ears.
Swara: We will not let anyone break this relationship!
They let go, Ragini stood between her father and Sharmishta, while Swara stood next to her mother.
Swara: This is the family we belong to.
Ragini: I accept Sharmishta khaki as my Mother and me and my sister will get out parents together.
Swara: We will face and overcome every obstacle that comes in our way .
Ragini: Including you!
LF had stood and heard then without thinking twice he started making his way out with the troop following.
LF: Lakshya, you can come home but once you realise your mistake
With that he left Lakshya.
Ragini and Swara embraces their new family. But to be torn apart from their grandmothers.
Swara and Sharmishta were taken back inside their house by dida. They knew thyd come together very soon.
Ragini ran to the house and came out with a first aid kit. The fellow people had gotten back into their houses and so did Raginis grandparents. Ragini sat her father down and took care if his wounds.
Shekher: Thank you dear, I'll go now and you should take care of Lakshya.
Ragini nodded.
She went to Lakshya and sat him down. She bandaged him and all that was needed.
Lakshya: I'm sorry Ragini.
Ragini: For what?
Lakshya: It was my fault to what happened to your family.
Ragini: What?
Lakshya explained everything and the hand the was held by Ragini dropped. Ragini stood up.
Ragini: Why?
Lakshya: I'm really sorry
Raginis eyes filled with tears.
Lakshya: Ragini please ... don't cry.
Ragini ran into the house and locked the room. She cried all her heart out. Lakshya ran after her but her Dadi stopped him.
Dadi: Stop, don't you dare.
Lakshya: I have to
He ran past Dadi and started knocking on Raginis door.
Lakshya: Please open the door. Open the door. I am sorry! Ragini.
Ragini heard him say her name and shot her eyes open.
Lakshya: Ragini?


That's all for these two parts. You might think whaaat! I know I made everything happen sooo quick but its cause I want to start making it my own but try to still make it tealte to what's kind of happening on TV at the moment. Sorry if you thought ugh or Whaaat but I hope you have faith in me to continue making it better.
Soorry for typos again! Thank you for your support and kind words.
Signing Out x Take Care x
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I wont be able to get back to everyone but I just want to say thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely work! Love how you are sticking to the original layers of the characters and current story line!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very good update...want to read more from u...keep it up...!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice updates..Pls try to write big updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing updates well written ...do continue soon...😊⭐️😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for the comments now the next paaart.
Part 4

Ragini stood up slowly from where she cried and opened up the door. There she saw a very sad Lakshya.
Ragini: Come in.
She said wiping her tears away. Lakshya sat on her bed and she closed the door then joined him.
Lakshya: Ragini, I promise I didn't want to do to hurt you but to go to get your family together.
Ragini: I'm glad you did it actually, if you hadn't then I wouldn't have my dad and now a new mum being happy together.
Lakshya took Raginis hand: I promise I'll make things better.
Ragini: What are going to do?
Lakshya let go and stood up: What I should've before all of this.
Ragini stood up beside him: Lakshya, please dibt do anything stupid.
Lakshya turned and smiled at Ragini: Do I ever.
Ragini smiled. Lakshya went to the door and then glances back at Ragini giving her a wink and Ragini blushed.

Lakshya went home and saw everyone waiting for him.
(Durga Prasad is his dads name right? Well I'll name him DP lol)
DP: Where were you Lakshya?
Lakshya: At Raginis house.
Everyone turned to him.
Lakshya: I have something to ask dad.
DP: You need to ...
Lakshya interrupted him: You need to listen to me now. You've gone beyond your limits. You've done wrong to those around you and you know it dad!
DP: Don't you dare!
(A is Lakshyas mother)
A: Lakshya!
Lakshya: No mum, he needs to know how we feel.
DP: That's enough of your shouting!
Lakshya: Oh I'm sorry, you don't like hearing anyone else's voice but your own do you!?
A: Lakshya please!
Lakshya: Mum, its too much.
(I don't want to rewrite everything about what happened and how he left the house and the Sanskaar issue because you all known it and this is him leaving)
Lakshya left his house, promising his mum he will back for her after he does the important things. His father is left to just hate his son.

At Swaras house Ragini is helping Sharmishta and Swara with household chores and stalling to talk to Nani.
Swara: Ragini, go.
Ragini: Not yet, just...
Sharmishta: Ragini dear, don't worry Maa is nice, you don't need to worry
Ragini sat up at made her way to their door where Nani was sweeping the floor
Ragini knocked: Nani.
Nani turned around: What are you doing here?
Ragini: Actually, I ...
Nani: Look dear, I know you want your father and my daughter to come together, I wanted that as well until your grandmother disapproved and embarrassed me.
Ragini: Nani, I am truly sorry for what happened. But that was all in the past.
Nani: But the past is what brings us to the present and is what counts
Ragini: I agree Nani, but to move on and makes things better you need to let go.,isn't that true?
Nani left and went into her room. Ragini was about to step in but didn't. She didn't know if it was the right time.
She went back to Swara and Sharmishta.
Ragini: Guys I think I'll try again sometime.
Swara: Why?
Ragini: Nani seems upset and she wants happiness for her children but others opinions need to change for Hera to change as well
Sharmishta: I understand dear, now you should get back to your house before your grandmother gets angry. Ragini left to go to her house.

Next part below will be a continuation. Thanks.
Signing Out x Take Care x
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5

Later that evening Lakshya came to Raginis house. He knocked at the door and Dadi opened it
Dadi: Lakshya? Dear why are you here?
Lakshya: I left my house because if what dad did, I was wondering if ...
Dadi: Yes, you can stay with us.
Lakshya smiled. He walked in and sat with them for a while.

Ragini and Swara were in the roof hathibg and idea to get their parents together and convincing their grandparents as well.
Swara: Any ideas?
Ragini: Well...
Lakshya: Maybe I can help.
The sisters turned back.
Swara: Why are you here?
Lakshya: To help you.
Swara: Really?
Lakshya: Yeah
Swara: So what are we talking about?
Lakshya: About uncle and aunt and how your going to get them back together.
Swara: Okay don't try and act smart.
Lakshya: Well I won't need to.
Swara: Haha. Now let's think.
Ragini forgot what she was about to say and was thinking, while Lakshya was admiring her.
Swara: *CoughCough* Staring done Lucky?
Lakshya: Huh?
He zoned back in and Ragini blushed.
Ragini: You know what, I think we should cone back to this tomorrow, its getting late. Let's all go home.
Lakshya: True.
Swara jumped over to her house and Lakshya and Ragini went downstairs to Raginis house.

Downstairs:

Dadi: Oh there you two are. Ragini dear, I get the guest room ready.
Ragini: Why? Is someone coming to stay? And at this hour? Who is coming so late?
Lakshya: Me
Ragini: What?
Dadi: Aree, stopping asking so many questions and go get the room ready. You know where everything is, I'll call your dad to help.
Lakshya: Nahi Dadi, I'll help Ragini.
Dadi: Atcha, you two get in with it, I'll get dinner ready.

Ragini went to their storeroom with Lakshya following her like a lost puppy. She got the duvet ou and Lakshya took it from her and then she took the pillows. They walked back to the guest room where it was right next door to Raginis Lakshya noticed.
They made the bed and Ragini cleared everything up.
Lakshya: Why is Dadi being nice to me?
Ragini: She told me she felt sorry for you having father like that and its not your fault. By the way why are you here?
She was dusting the top of the cupboard on a stool.
Lakshya: I left home. Ragini shocked lost control and slipped off the stool but Lakshya held her in his arms and led her to the bed.
Lakshya: Couldn't you have been a little more careful?
Ragini: Why did you leave?
Lakshya: For you

Hope you enjoyed those two parts. Please Comment! Like! And continue enjoying the stry.

If you have any suggestions then write it below. Sorry if it was a little rushy and short.
Signing Out x Take Care x
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great one...,cliffhanger...!!! Way to go...update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved this!! Can't get over how many RagYa scenes you have added in the story 🤗 😳 do continue soon!! Waiting to read the next chapter!! :)

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