Lakshya and Ragini... A Story To Tell. Part 9 updated on page 7!!!!!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow
Your FF is awesome 👏
Loved it 😳

I guess u have already written many stories ?? 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
Update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandasweetie

Great update...hope something of that sort happens in the show...looking forward to seeing you in our forum discussions...waiting for a new update... :)


Thank You sooo much! Your words mean a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: creationschhavi

amazing update dear👏 ...well written and amazing concept⭐️ ...i am also in love with ragya⭐️😳 ...pls...do continue soon ...😳


Hope you enjoy the rest of my work and Thanks
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Firstly welcome to the forum🤗and really well written dear and awesome perception👏Enjoyed reading it, look forward to reading the next part, please do continue soon!😳

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Thank you for the welcome and I hope to make my other updates as good as this!
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Originally posted by: qwerty012

Perfect pair for opposite attracts formula..


I agree they make the perfect couple! Just hope the serial get them back together!
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CoNGraTs !!!!
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Very well written. ...i personally love lakshya ragini pair hope we get them as a couple in the show
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hello :) welcome to the forum hope u will active..n discussion too 😊
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CoNGraTs !!!!

You post has reached 500+ views


Aww thank you, its all because of everyones positive vibe and attitude!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First I just want to say a HUGE Thank You to every single one of you! I am just so overwhelmed by you guys responding positively and I hope in the future I can continue and feel like you guys are enjoying it as much as I'm enjoying writing it!

Before I start can I just say WHAT THE HELL LAKSHYA! He did two stupid things today and I feel so upset. Number 1 he said he didn't like Ragini then he left Shekher alone! Oh Lakshya!

Part 2

The next morning Sharmishta woke up and went outside, she same Ragini sat near the window and she smiled at her whilst Ragini smiled back. Swara came out. "Mum!"
Swara saw her mother and Ragnini and smiled to herself. She left them alone and came back into her house. Her phone rang.
Swara: Hello
Lakshya: Swara you need to meet up with me its important.
Swara: Okay, I'll be there in ten.
Swara left and met up with Lakshya.
Lakshya: Thank you for meeting up with me, after all that's happened.
Swara: Its fine, what is it?
Lakshya explained everything that had happened in their household and told Swara what his father is upto.
Swara: Her can't do that to Ragini, she's been through too much!
Lakshya: Trust me Swara I feel so guilty.
Swara: What? Why?
Lakshya: The truth is... I'm the one who showed my father the video, I ...
Swara: You! But why?!!
Lakshya: I didn't want to get married so young, I ...
Swara: That's no excuse! You... Ragini is ...
Lakshya interrupted: I know, I ruined her life nd her family. I'm truly sorry.
Swara: You need to apologize to her not me. Oh no, your father!
Lakshya: We better get to your house now.
Swara: Let's go.
Swara and Lakshya left.

At the house drama was created. Lakshyas father had his men doing what he'd wanted and humiliating the family. Ragini was broken down and so were her grandparents. Swaras grandmother tried stopping them but no one could do anything. Shekher had come back home after meeting with Sharmishta. He ran to his father as the man tried to paint him black. He fought the men away.
Shekher: How dare you touch my father!
Laskshyas Father = LF(Sorry don't know his name! )
LF: Well you knew I was going to come and seek revenge.
Shekher: Then why seek revenge on my family? Why not just me?
LF: You amuse me. Its what sort of family you created that made me do this. Hmph, your daughter put of wedlock may get a groom but once I degrade and break all relations with your parents and your daughter, your daughter will never get married because she was a misfortune...
Shekher slapped LF.
At the door was Swara and Lakshya.
Shekher: How dare you talk about my daughter like that!
LF: Swara may have children the same way her mother and father had her.
Shekher slapped LF once again. Man: How dare you slap our leader!everybody hit him!
All the men came and started hitting Shekher with the sticks. Swara and Ragini from opposite ends tried to stop it but they were blocked. Through the door Shramishta came and also ran to stop it. Finally Lakshya ran and moved the men away from Shekher

How did you guys like it?
Super sorry for the typos and hope you enjoyed it!
I'm going to write the next part now as well. Just need to think a little.
Please comment and like and inform others!
Signing out x Take Care x
Edited by Tamihna - 10 years ago

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