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Wow!!! Beautiful Jamy!!!! Loved it! Your language and descriptions made it come alive for me. It was so visually stunning. The ending was really 😆

Keep writing more!!! 😳

I am 🤣 after reading your Disclaimer...You seem to think we Drauholics are monsters who will eat you up...Well you can relax...coz u have portrayed Draupadi well enough to get your poor soul spared from our torture of repetitive whining...😈

Beautiful story Jamy.A YuDi OS from you made me go😲And the way you write especially your descriptions about nature❤️I can simply sit and read them repeatedly for an year(Remember Vinod:"anganonnum pattillayirikum pakshe enikipo anganokke thonnunnu😆)And I was feeling terribly jealous towards YuDi imagining the sight they were enjoying.You described Yudi's feelings towards Drau beautifully.I felt a joy rising in my heart reading those lines for God knows what😳It was a very realistic one I think that is how every relation grow deep;through the small small yet amazing things we discover about the other person.Anyways I was jealous towards YuDi for one more reason and that was because you wrote on them😆

Your disclaimer! 😆 So a karna writer turned into YuDi one suddenly. 😆 Well, honestly i am not surprised because similar things happened with me. I am frankly not a karna lover but when i entered the forum i suddenly turned into a karna writer. 😛
I said it before and i am saying it again, you can indeed be an excellent author. You are amazing and your words are beyond beautiful. Love the way you describe every single detail. And the ending made me 😆 😳 . And i agree with Amrita di, you almost wrote about the real Yudhi. Loved this piece completely. Awesome! 👏 Keep writing more. 😃

Originally posted by: KURT15

Wow!!! Beautiful Jamy!!!! Loved it! Your language and descriptions made it come alive for me. It was so visually stunning. The ending was really 😆

Keep writing more!!! 😳

Thanks a lot for the appreciation GC.😊 He he...this time I wrote the ending dialogues first and then the rest.😆

Originally posted by: amritat

I am 🤣 after reading your Disclaimer...You seem to think we Drauholics are monsters who will eat you up...Well you can relax...coz u have portrayed Draupadi well enough to get your poor soul spared from our torture of repetitive whining...😈

Although this is a work of fiction...I feel the characterization is very close to the epic...

And well-written...Unlike your previous works which have a poetic touch to them...this OS has more prose-like straight-forward approach which I absolutely loved...😊

And I understand your transformation to a YuDi writer...😆

I too had begun writing on Ardi n ended up writing on K-D...😆 in my OS long back...

However YuDi OS in Karna forum...I was slightly surprised.

Anyway...keep up the great work...😊You are a great writer...😊

No amrita, I never meant that!!! You won't even let me to be funny a bit.😡 bad jokes aside... well, I thought of giving such a disclaimer coz I hardly know both Yudhi and Drau. And for the die hard perfectionist that I am, I mostly won't tolerate a seemingly stupid portrayal of Karna without a good disclaimer.😆 So I had to be equally careful whenever I write about other characters. And I mostly don't like being serious.😃
I am not only feeling relieved, but also joyful that you liked the way I portrayed Draupadi. And if you felt that my imagination is close to the original, I cannot ask for more.😃 Thanks a million for each word of appreciation.
😆 This is just the after effect of SonyYudhi. And I really like SonyDrau. She appears adorable more than StarDrau, for me. And yeah, in hurry, I forgot that MB forum is still active.😆 Nevertheless, let this be a salute to SonyDrau. I wrote this keeping Pankhuri minus maggie hair in my mind. You guessed right about my YuDi transformation. I always wanted to write something on ArDi from Draupadi's POV. But I never get right words for my ideas. Hoping one day I will write that also.

Originally posted by: .Vaikartana.

Beautiful story Jamy.A YuDi OS from you made me go😲And the way you write especially your descriptions about nature❤️I can simply sit and read them repeatedly for an year(Remember Vinod:"anganonnum pattillayirikum pakshe enikipo anganokke thonnunnu😆)And I was feeling terribly jealous towards YuDi imagining the sight they were enjoying.You described Yudi's feelings towards Drau beautifully.I felt a joy rising in my heart reading those lines for God knows what😳It was a very realistic one I think that is how every relation grow deep;through the small small yet amazing things we discover about the other person.Anyways I was jealous towards YuDi for one more reason and that was because you wrote on them😆

Thank you a lot Vani though you don't like being thanked. I have to thank you each time with bated breath.😔 You are a scary person!!!
What will YuDi do if everyone feels jealous for them?😲 One Dury alone had made their life a hell once. You know, Karna's wife also was gossiping the same. She doesn't like Draupadi at all coz Drau made own palace look exactly like what she had imagined, and Karna never did let his wife do her manmaani in his palace.😆 These women bhi na... And if she ever meets Yudhi, not even Draupadi will save him from her😆. Now please don't trouble God. He doesn't know anything about you. He has been hiding behind heavenly clouds since they day you were born. Poor guy!!!

Originally posted by: ramya06

Your disclaimer! 😆 So a karna writer turned into YuDi one suddenly. 😆 Well, honestly i am not surprised because similar things happened with me. I am frankly not a karna lover but when i entered the forum i suddenly turned into a karna writer. 😛
I said it before and i am saying it again, you can indeed be an excellent author. You are amazing and your words are beyond beautiful. Love the way you describe every single detail. And the ending made me 😆 😳 . And i agree with Amrita di, you almost wrote about the real Yudhi. Loved this piece completely. Awesome! 👏 Keep writing more. 😃

Well Ramya, you had not seen the wild days of MB forum. You yourself will put a better disclaimer next time.😆 I am not a strict Karna fan as many think. I just speak for him as there is no one else to do that.😆 I can write on anyone and I wish to do so but I hardly get time enough. The last one I wrote before writing on Karna was about Bheema. You thinking that my description of Yudhi was closer to the original itself is more than enough for me. Thanks a lot for the encouraging appreciation.😃

Jamy, u see, I can't keep stalking every now and then.. So, from now on, u gotta add me to ur pm list as well..😈