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Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Jamy, u see, I can't keep stalking every now and then..So, from now on, u gotta add me to ur pm list as well..😈

And thankfully, I bumped into this one well within time, or else u would have taken it away..😆

Anyho, the cute SonyYudi and the petite n bold SonyDrau are well imaginable in ur OS. Was never much of Yudhishtir's fan, but this piece had me think about the real Yudi's romantic side...😆

All these apart, I really loved ur depiction from the beauty of IP to that of Draupadi.. And this shyness of Yudi fits perfectly for SonyYudi..😳Overall, this is such a brilliant and marvelous work!

I totally loved how u changed form from ur poetic sense to a cute romantic shot.👏⭐️

Edit:- I liked the disclaimer..🤣Its perfecto!😎

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

<font color="#ff00ff">so beautiful Jamy!👏</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">I thoroughly enjoyed the episode.it's so vivid.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">your each and every words are doing some magic in the mind's of the readers and they could visualize what you imagined perfectly.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">I could see clearly the palace ..the room filled with blue moon light. the top most long balcony viewing the city.</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">so nice.. keep writing Jamy!!!</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">the things which flash into my mind while thinking yudi were responsiblity..elder..dharm..serene..composed..</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">otherwise his weakness..in the name of dharm..</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">or the war sequences..</font>

<font color="#ff00ff">i had never thought him romantic..not at all. only arjun had some romantic sides. not even bhim and others. so I loved your work. It was a fresh read.</font>

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Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

I had always thought I would write about Arjuna when I would try writing from Pandava side. But I mysteriously ended with Yudhishthira giving a great shock to myself.😲

Originally posted by: riti4u

Finally commenting though I read it couple of days back ..

As I tell you, you describe things in detail beautifully. It takes a certain amount of effort I believe to think so deep into a scene and forming such detailed description of it.You need to visualize it...be in it.. N importantly feel it..

Keep I writing some more..😊

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awsum,superb

Originally posted by: sania_58

well written Jamy.

Though I am not at all interested in Yudi, I just love your writing.

I loved the beautiful detailed descriptions.

I can visualize it.

I just love the ending.

awesome work.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

Neatly penned OS! Every thing ws well described nd portrayed!

Running with a short comment😛