Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely story Sumi! Even i had imagined a similar scene. I specially like the use of photographs! They are very apt! One can clearly imagine the scene playing out in front of their eyes! Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri_tanvi

Lovely story Sumi! Even i had imagined a similar scene. I specially like the use of photographs! They are very apt! One can clearly imagine the scene playing out in front of their eyes! Waiting for the next part.

Thanks very much dear !!!!!! 😳❤️
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Chapter -2

Lakshman cleared his throat and started speaking and Urmila was anxious to know .

Lakshman [heavy voice] : Yesterday , at night when all were sleeping , Ram

bhaiya called me , Bharat bhaiya and Shatrughan .

Lakshman started telling Urmila that what happened last night .

Flashback : Last night =

Lakshman , Bharat and Shatrughan met in corridor while coming to Ram 's

chamber.

Lakshman : Bharat bhaiya , did u know , why Ram bhaiya have call us at this time ?

Bharat : No , idea Lakshman !

Lakshman : Shatrughan, U ?

Shatrughan makes a blank expression.

He never called us in night since 2 years , but , now what had happened?

Lakshman : You r saying right Shatrughan, Ram bhaiya never called for a meet in

night , he always complete all his meetings till evening.

Bharat : OK , let's move , we will get to know there only .

Lakshman , Shatrughan : Yes , bhaiya.

In Ram's chamber :

Ram was sitting on floor and was lost in his own thoughts and he was looking sad.

Lakshman , Bharat and Shatrughan entered the chamber and seeing Ram , they

rushed to him .



Bharat : Bhaiya , what happened ? get up !!

Bharat , Shatrughan and Lakshman gave him support.

Ram in a broken voice : Lakshman , Bharat , Shatrughan , today I have taken a

biggest decision for the welfare of Ayodhya that is going to benefit Ayodhya but

will badly affect us.

Lakshman [worried] : Bhaiya , please tell what decision u have taken ?

Shatrughan : Yes , bhaiya !!!

Ram closed his eyes : The decision is that I have abandoned my Siya !!



All got hell shocked : What !!!!!!

Lakshman [tensed] : Why and what is the welfare in this !!!!!

Ram [His voice breaks in between] : Because Ayodhya 's people think that Siya

had lived in the captivity of Ravan for 10 months and so , she is impure and an

impure women can't be the queen of Ayodhya.

Lakshman [angrily] : What rubbish is this !!! Didn't they know that my Siya

bhabhi had given Agnipariksha too ?!!

Ram : Lakshman , The people r not ready to accept Sita as queen whether she has

given her test of purity or not. Today I visited the streets of Ayodhya and I am

shocked to hell that so many people r badmouthing my Siya and this case has

become extreme . Many people are saying that I have to abandon my Siya .

Bharat : No bhaiya , u can't do this !!

Lakshman [angrily]: Yes Bharat bhaiya. And Ram bhaiya I am going to the

streets to catch hold of the people who r badmouthing my Bhabhi.

Ram stops him by shoulders : Lakshman , stop ! How many people u will catch

hold of , the people are many in numbers almost whole Ayodhya.

Tears started rolling from Lakshman's eyes.

Ram [tears started rolling from his eyes] : I don't want any big revolt to happen in

Ayodhya for this matter.

And Lakshman , u will leave Siya in forest at safe place tomorrow.

Present time :

Urmila became restless on hearing this from Lakshman and got hell shocked . She

didn't expected such thing to ever happen in Ayodhya , she was angry on citizens

of Ayodhya .


Urmila starts crying : And , You accepted the order of Jijashree Ram , right ??

Lakshman cries : Yes , Mila.

Urmila tone was getting louder and louder : Why Swami , why ?!

Lakshman : I said to Ram bhaiya that I will accept death but I can't do such task

and said sorry to him , Ram bhaiya then looked towards Bharat bhaiya and

Shatrughan , they both falled at his feet and said that they can't do this task in

any way , and overall , they don't have bit of courage to do this task.

Ram bhaiya then said to me 'Lakshman , u will only leave Siya in forest as u have

always stayed with me , no one knows Sita more better than u , neither bharat nor

shatrughan , u only have to do this task'.

I again protested his order but he said that this is order of your Raja Ram and not

your brother. Will u disobey your King's order too Lakshman ??


I was left speechless and numb , I didn't know what to do , neither I can disobey his order nor I had the courage to do such a difficult task . I became so upset that I couldn't stop myself from crying. Bharat bhaiya and Shatrughan consoled me .



Urmila was sad as well as angry , she then wiped her tears : Then ??

Lakshman : I then moved to Ram bhaiya chamber this morning and i called

bhabhi , she came , became happy to see me and ask me to come in with a big

smile.




If anything wrong would not happened , then I would be so happy to see her smiling

so bright , instead her smile pained me more . She didn't knew that her happiness

will not last for long. I too wished her back and touched her feet . She blessed me.

She asked me where is Ram bhaiya , I said to her that Ram bhaiya had gone for

some important meet as he is now king of Ayodhya.

Urmila : Then did u told her truth ??

Lakshman : Not here in palace .
I told her to take some sage' s clothes . She was confused , she asked me that why I

am saying that ?!

Urmila : What did u replied then ??

Lakshman : I told her that some great sages want to meet her and wanted to stay

with her for 5 days . I further said to her that the sages had said that they will be

blessed to have Queen Sita in their ashram .

On this Sita Bhabhi smiled happily and took extra clothes and herself dressed in

that attire .It pained me when I see again saw her in that dress after 2 years .

She said that we should meet Ram Bhaiya before leaving. I agreed and took her to

Ram bhaiya as this maybe last meet of them . When we gone to meet Ram bhaiya ,

he was moving worriedly in corridors , Sita bhabhi rushed to him and asked

whether any problem is there so he replied that that 'No problem' and controlled

his tears seeing her in sage's dress up and leaved a fake smile .



And said that take care of yourself and our unborn child in your this journey.


I felt the pain in his eyes but Sita bhabhi smiled and touched his feet.

Tears were continuously from Urmila's eyes.

Lakshman : I then said to Sita bhabhi to go out and sit in chariot , I am coming.

Sita bhabhi happily agreed. I then said to Ram bhaiya that I am also going with

bhabhi and I will stay with her my entire life to serve her . Ram bhaiya got

shocked . I further said that I can't leave my bhabhi to suffer pain in forest just

like a son cannot leave his mother in pain. I asked him to blessed me that I can

serve my Sita bhabhi without fail . Tears started flowing from Ram bhaiya eyes

but I had to do this. Ram bhaiya blessed me .

I then goes outside of palace leaving him sad .

Urmila now became angry and began crying loudly , she started losing control over herself.


Urmila : So You broken your word .

Lakshman [hesitating] : Yes !!

Urmila :I didn't expected such thing from you.

Did u remember what u said to me before exile , have u forgetten ??!!

Lakshman : No way , Mila !!!

Urmila : No , I don't think this so !!! U had said to me that u will take care of the

happiness of your Ram bhaiya and Sita bhabhi for your whole life and u will

always take care of their needs , but what u have done ??

You yourself left your bhabhi and my Didi Sita in forest to suffer pain.

Lakshman cries.



Urmila : My Sita didi is pregnant and with so much difficulty she must be

spending her time in forest.



Jijashree Ram was bounded for Ayodhya welfare and as a king of Ayodhya and

that's the reason he had to abandon Sita didi , but u , from which thing u were

bounded with ?! That you leaved my Sita didi !!!

Her words were piercing Lakshman's heart more and more.

But he controlled himself with the fact that at the current moment , she was not his

wife Urmila , she was a caring sister of Sita didi , who was speaking this words , he

knew if something similar would have happened with him , he too have reacted

the same. He remembered that when Ram bhaiya got order ofexile , he too lost

control over himself but his Ram bhaiya calmed him.

Urmila [crying but anger was dazzling in her eyes] : 2 years before , we were

United after 14 years of separation! But now , we will be separated for lifetime.





Lakshman got highly shocked and looked at her .

Urmila : Now , I am not your Mila , U have lost me after the thing that you have done .




Lakshman [screams] : No , Mila , no !!!! Don't say this please!!!!



Urmila started crying heavily and tried to move out of the chamber but Lakshman came in front of her .

Urmila [though angry with him but tears were flowing from her eyes for saying this harsh words to him and also for her Sita didi who is now in forest instead of palace ] : Get aside.

Lakshman cries heavily : I will not get aside.

He falls at her feet and folded his hands : Mila , remember, we should not take any big step when we are angry .
Mila , just listen the complete story , please , if u still think that I was wrong then I

will never show my face to you . Not for me , but listen once for your Sita didi

. Please Mila !!!! Please !!!!!!!

Saying this , Lakshman cries .

Urmila 's heart was too paining seeing him crying like this.

Urmila turned away from Lakshman : OK , tell me !!

Lakshman looked at her with tearful eyes !!!!


Precap: Now , I am not able to handle all this , I am not able to bear this pain , Mila , I am not able to , I am suffocated now with all this !!!
The words of his Sita bhabhi and his Mila echoed in his ears , he then find that Urmila was appearing blur to him and his head was spinning.

Please hit like button if u like it and please review . Your reviews means a lot for me !!! 😳

AND NEXT PART WILL STRICTLY BASED ON REVIEWS !! 😆😆 😛
Edited by LakshmanMila..1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 😆😆 Thanks !!!! 😛😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi read in full. Lovely part and Sita ordered Lakshman to be with Ram to take care of him and also not to leave her sister along for life time again and to be with Urmila always.

Bhabhi pushed him back to palace and wife pushing him away from her which has resulted in him fainting. Please post the next part soon. can't handle this cliff hanger for long 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Beautiful Sumi!!! 👏
Urmilas pain!!😭
And the perfect pictures you put at the perfect places!

A beautiful update Sumi and specially the part where she tells Lakshman about his broken promise.. 👍🏼

Will be waiting to read what happens in the next part :)
Update soon dear :) 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
That was superb sumi, and the pictures were perfect too. Urmila and lakshman's emotions have been portrayed perfectly👏, I'm eagerly waiting for the next part, please update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
Sumi, this was amazing! 😳
I love how you built up Lakshman's dilemma before he decides to tell Urmi
His emotions are portrayed really well
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres with chota review:
This was amazing 👏👏 Lakshman 😭😭 Urmi 😭😭
Update fast.
Tomorrow, you will get full review from me. Bhama promise 🤗

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