Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Bhama didi , you forget your promise !!! 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I know !!!! 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi read in full. Lovely part and Sita ordered Lakshman to be with Ram to take care of him and also not to leave her sister along for life time again and to be with Urmila always.

Bhabhi pushed him back to palace and wife pushing him away from her which has resulted in him fainting. Please post the next part soon. can't handle this cliff hanger for long 😆


thank u so much jaya di !!!!!! 😃 😳

Yeah , something like this will be in next part !!!! 😉😳

Yeah bhabhi pushing him back to ayodhya and wife pushing him away !!!! 😆😆

Yeah updating tomorrow !!!! 😉😛

Next part will be more big cliffhanger !!!!! 😆😆 😉 😛


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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

It's such a beautiful update sweetie
👏 👏

I loved the way u portrayed urmila's anger
I loved the way Lakshman tried to see the situation through urmi's eyes nd judge her reactions accordingly

The emotions were very well portrayed

Well done Sumi
Update asap


Btw, I kept my promise.. I had told you that I would review ur work today itself 😆



Anokhu 🤗 🤗 !!!!!

Again big thanks for wondeful review !!!!! 😳😛

i wanted to change the situation that Urmila is angry and Lakshman is calm where as Lakshman is as usual angry and Urmila calm !!! 😆😆

yeah will be updating tomorrow !!!! 😉 😛 Almost done !!!! 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Friends , Will be updating next part tomorrow !!!! 😃 😳 😉

And please don't kill me because next part willl be way more

cliffhanger and i will be stopping the story at a crucial point !!!! 😆😆😆

And please note , this OS will be in 4 parts now , as the story was

becoming too long , so next part tomorrow !!! 😉 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
She is not bechari, upar note Dekhiye, mujhe kal next part post karna hai aur sabke reviews ke Bina mai next part post nahi kar sakti !!!! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww, its super cute my kiddo aka pari.
Lakshmila ll nvr fail to impress me with their sacrifices for their siblings. No girl can leave her hubby for the sake of her sis but its our mila who can do anything.

Am just speechless to see this bond of two sisters.👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy001

Awww, its super cute my kiddo aka pari.

Lakshmila ll nvr fail to impress me with their sacrifices for their siblings. No girl can leave her hubby for the sake of her sis but its our mila who can do anything.

Am just speechless to see this bond of two sisters.👏👏



Now please accept 4 meters long heels waali sandals as a return gift for the review from sumi😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivam...




Now please accept 4 meters long heels waali sandals as a return gift for the review from sumi😆

Bhaiya now I will give her hugs instead of that gift !!! 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3 -


Lakshman : Mila , I gone out of palace and took Sita bhabhi to the forest .When I was on the way , She was so happy that I can't describe. Seeing her so happy put me in a serious trouble that how will tell this bitter truth to her

? Her smile was breaking my courage more and more . I was worried, I was not able to

understand that what to do .Urmila 's back was facing towards Lakshman , she was notlooking at him but listening

his story with full attention calming herself down for some time.

Lakshman then continued .

Lakshman : I stopped the chariot at a safe place and Sita bhabhi came out .

She then said me that she can't see any ashram ? Where we have come ?

I was feeling helpless , my heartbeat increased that moment. My lips were trembling to say the bitter truth .Bhabhi understood my feelings and she liked a concern mother holder my chin up and asked me 'What happened lakshman , why r u so sad and troubled?I couldn't able to control myself and burst crying.


Flashback : In forest -

Sita worriedly wiped Lakshman's tears with her pallu.

Sita : Lakshman , please stop crying , tell me , what happened ?
Lakshman was not able to utter a word .

Sita was worried , she goes to a nearby lake and bring some water for him .

Sita : Take some Water , lakshman .

Lakshman : No bhabhi , I don't need this .

Sita [sternly] : Lakshman !!Sita make him drink water and ask him to calm down.

Sita : Now , calm down , tell me what happened.

Lakshman : How can I calm down bhabhi , how ?! If a husband is been separated from his wife , if a son is been separated from mother , how !!!

Sita was confused : What do u mean lakshman , I am not able to understand?

Lakshman : Bhabhi , after the unexpected thing that happened yesterday, I am completely broken and I don't know what to do.

Sita [tensed] : Lakshman, what happened yesterday , tell me . You should feel free to share anything to your Bhabhi.

Lakshman : I don't know , but today , I am not feeling free to share my feelings just like always .

Sita [tensed and in her thoughts ] : I have never seen my son like Lakshman so troubled till now , he is confused , today he is not feeling free to share his feelings with me , he is sweating profusely due to some thought.Sita sensed that something very wrong had happened due to which lakshman is behaving in this way.Sita again cupping his face : Lakshman , please don't hide anything from me , please tell me what happened.

Lakshman on being requested by Sita second time gained all his courage and says that : Ram bhaiya has abandon you .


And he started crying again.Sita was hell shocked , she wasn't able to cope up with what lakshman said.

Sita : What !!

Lakshman : Yes, bhabhi !!

Sita [tears brimming in her eyes] : Lakshman , is this true ??

Lakshman [broken voice] : Yes bhabhi, this is true !!

Sita sits crying : What have I done lakshman that your bhaiya had given me such big punishment ?? On the top of that , how can swami do this with me .Lakshman : You have done nothing bhabhi .

Sita : Then !!!

Lakshman : Ram bhaiya had abandon you because of raj dharm .

Sita : Which Raj dharm , lakshman ?

Lakshman : Ayodhya 's citizens thinks that you have live as a captive of Ravan for 10 months in Lanka , so u r impure and an impure woman can no way be the queen of Ayodhya.

Sita was shocked to hear such views of Ayodhya 's people for her.

Lakshman falling on his knees : They are not even accepting the fact that you had given agnipariksha to prove your purity.

Sita cries.Lakshman : Ram bhaiya didn't want any big revolt from Ayodhya people so he had to take such difficult step .

Sita : Lakshman , this is very true that If a woman stay with some any other man for any reason , she is accused by society that she is impure whether she has proven her purity or not .
Lakshman : Bhabhi but me and and bhaiya did not have any doubt regarding your purity . You are so pure that even flames were not able to touch you . You know that during your agnipariksha, Ram bhaiya did not uttered a single word and accepted your decision respectfully when you said to him that u will give agnipariksha to prove your purity . Why , because he knew that you are totally pure and Agni Dev can't harm you in any way.
Lakshman 's words calm her mind .
Sita : I will respect my Swami's decision as he is not only my husband , he is the king of Ayodhya too . He had taken this decision for Ayodhya and for fulfilling his raj dharm . For a king , his upmost priority is his people's satisfaction and happiness and everyone comes later , Lakshman.if there will be peace in Ayodhya due to my exile , then I will happily accept this too.

She smiled through tears .

Lakshman [sobbing ] : Bhabhi , but what about u , how will u stay without us and here alone in forest .

Sita wiped her tears.

Sita [smiling]: I am not alone lakshman , your and everyone memories are not me , you all in my heart .

Lakshman cries .

Sita : Lakshman , now , I will start my journey myself , you return back to palace .

Lakshman : No bhabhi , I will not go back.

Sita : Lakshman , go back , your Ram bhaiya and Urmila must be waiting for u to come back .
Lakshman : No bhabhi , I will stay with u forever and will serve u in your exile .

Sita : What !!

Lakshman : Yes , bhabhi .

Lakshman told about his word to Sita , he made to Ram bhaiya before coming
to forest.

Sita was tensed , she then pick up a plant 's stem that was fallen nearby .

Lakshman looked at her confused .

Sita then draw a rekha with help of that stem in front of him , Lakshman looked at
it with confused look.

Sita : Lakshman , did you remember that u drawn lakshman rekha in our first
exile for my protection when I asked you to go to Ram bhaiya .

Lakshman : Yes , bhabhi.

Sita : I crossed that line and suffered huge pain .

I have drawn Sita 's Rekha and if u will crossed this rekha then it won't be good .

Lakshman got shocked .

Sita : Lakshman , return back to palace and never live your Ram bhaiya alone , he is already broken from inside by taking this decision and I want you to stay with him always as you r the only one who stayed with him in his all happiness and sadness . Please stay with him and never leave him alone .


Also , Urmila had lived without you for 14 years , now , please don't leave her lakshman , stay with her forever .
I don't want her to suffer more.

Lakshman [his voice breaks]: But Bhabhi ?!!

Lakshman : No but , lakshman !! You will not cross this line and will return back to palace.

Will you disobey your bhabhi 's order , lakshman .

Lakshman was numb .

Sita turned away and started moving .

Lakshman started crying heavily and he folded his hands : Don't go Maa !!!

Sita after hearing "Maa" from lakshman was feeling so happy and tears started flowing from her eyes because though they both shared mother - son kind
relationship but hearing "Maa" was altogether a different feeling.

Lakshman was crying heavily folding his hands : Maa , Don't go , Please Maa !!!

Sita though wanted to go to him and console him but she can't do this due to her
word .

Sita [smiles , fold her hands and in her thoughts] : Thank u God for sending
Lakshman in my life and I am blessed to have him .

Situations are like this that I cannot even console him and thank him for coming in her life .

Tears started flowing from her eyes.

Sita moved in a dense forest leaving lakshman devastated.

Present Time :


Urmila was feeling guilty now to hell , she said so much to her dear husband

without knowing the full truth , she sobbed hiding her face from lakshman .





Lakshman was crying ' What would have I done Mila , what would I have done !! I was not able to understand Mila that what to do , I was feeling numb , I have to
return back to Ayodhya because I had no other option left , Mila .

This was the biggest dilemma of my life where I don't know what to do next and
how to do !!

Now I am not able to handle this pain Mila , now it's enough for me , I am not able
to handle this Mila !! I am feeling highly suffocated with all this !!!

He began crying heavily and suddenly he sees that Urmila was appearing blur to
him . His head was paining severely and spinning too.

He holded his heads to control himself but now he was struggling to stand even , he
was not even able to stand properly .

Lakshman says "Mila" in low voice and falls down unconscious.

Urmila turned back and sees Lakshman lying unconscious on floor.

Urmila got shocked and shouts "Swami" !!!

If u like it then please hit like button and please leave your reviews !!! 😳

Will be waiting for your reviews . 😃

NEXT PARTY STRICTLY DEPEND ON REVIEWS!!! 😆 😳
Edited by LakshmanMila..1 - 8 years ago

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