Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Here is ur unres Sumi.

I've to go through both the chap again.

One ques,Have you kept Urmi that angry as u imagined her to be or moderated her a lil?

Coming to the shots,I jus love ur presentation

Such a perfect timeline and placement of pictures dear!

Appro to all the dialogues.

Infact I did like the way u potrayed Urmila.

And so happy to read Siya behaving lovingly with Lakshman and even Ram was moderate.

An emotional update overall❤️

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mandy001

@mandy001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Yay, i read it😆.

It was really nice. U described laksh's dilemma perfectly. But omg what happened to him now. Waiting for this twist.

Update soon.

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

very nice

the best line was " dont go Maa😭"

i am glad u brought sita rekha concept here

and if anyone has to notice , pls look at pic 3 , looks like lakshman is driving an autorickshaw😆

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Sumi this update was so good! You depicted the inner turmoil of Lakshman very swiftly. The entire session was very good. I loved the innovative idea of Sita Rekha! And also how Sita persuade him to go for Ayodhya. Niw everything is clear to Urmila! Really hope now she can take care of Lakshman. What happened to Lakshman! Plz don't discontinue it na!😳

Love,

Aanvi

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Superb, I really like the way lakshman said maa... it was heartbreaking😭 please update the next part soon...

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ramyamithra

@ramyamithra

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

its such a nice part loved it very much

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Unres
Very nice series.
It had all emotions required that were void in the same sequence of SKR.
Its difficult to guess whether the dialogues adjusted themselves with these pics or vice versa.
Especially the part where Urmila turns back and cries❤️
And dont let anything happen to Lakshman,please!