Lakshmila OS : Biggest Dilemma of my Life : Updated Final chapter Pg19

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Amaya Rishikesh

@Seraphina231

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Chapter 2 was beautiful, the way you went from past to present

Urmil'a's anger, her emotions. And Lakshman's emotions. Beautiful, Sumi ❤️

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Anokhisharma

@Anokhisharma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

It's such a beautiful update sweetie
👏 👏

I loved the way u portrayed urmila's anger
I loved the way Lakshman tried to see the situation through urmi's eyes nd judge her reactions accordingly

The emotions were very well portrayed

Well done Sumi
Update asap

Btw, I kept my promise.. I had told you that I would review ur work today itself 😆

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nathand48

@nathand48

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

This was an amazing chapter. You left us with a cliffhanger. I want (no need) to know what happens next. Please update soon.

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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Pls update soon
Greedy me, great update sumi his dilemma and her anger. Ram as broken husband and upright King. Siya cheerful not knowing what awaits her as an eventuality.
Everything was just beautiful dear..

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Res before PM 😉

You are making it a habit😆

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Shivam...

@Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Very good update , loved it as always

The scene narration was fantastic , and the use of Graphics added to the beauty of writing👏

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Janaki

@RamKiSeeta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

What an amazing chapter, Sumi!👏

Although I do not like to think of Lakshman and Urmila have a disagreement, you have written it so well without making them OOC. They are in sync with themselves and the dialogues are written perfectly.

You have left us all with a cliffhanger, write soon! 😎

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: SenAnu
Beautiful Sumi!!! 👏
Urmilas pain!!😭
And the perfect pictures you put at the perfect places!

A beautiful update Sumi and specially the part where she tells Lakshman about his broken promise.. 👍🏼

Will be waiting to read what happens in the next part :)
Update soon dear :) 🤗

Yeah Urmila Pain !!!!!! 😭😭
Lakshman also was bearing so much pain hearing this words from Urmila but he knew she was sita sister that time . 😭😭😭
Thanks for the compliment dear , its means a lot to me , i put that promise to make the story go through more deep emotions !!! 😳😳
Will be Updating ASAP !!!!! 😃😛
Thanks dear !! 😳

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: moviefan-pooja
That was superb sumi, and the pictures were perfect too. Urmila and lakshman's emotions have been portrayed perfectly👏, I'm eagerly waiting for the next part, please update soon...

THank u so much pooja dear !!!! 😃😳
Will be Updating ASAP !!!!!! 😳😛😉

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Sumi

@RadhaKrishna_19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: KanhaKiChutki

Sumi, this was amazing! 😳
I love how you built up Lakshman's dilemma before he decides to tell Urmi
His emotions are portrayed really well

Thanks a lot chutku !!!!! 😆😳
Hmm...bahut sochna padta hai !!!!!! 😆😆 😛
Thanks dear once again !!! 😳