'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80 - Page 35

the ending was defiantly an anti climax when everything seemed so romantic a drama it turned out to be gr8 poem dear

heyyy bhoomi
hehe.. it was a play
really nice poem, loved reading it
thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Haha.....while reading I was thinking.....I'm sure the end is not just so simple...there must be sumthing....either sad or funny....and I'm glad it was funny....how cute!!! Truly enjoyable....and the metaphors u choose r simply awesum....the way u express....still keeping the rhythm....its just gr8 Bhoomi!!! Awesum!!! And yes...I'm happy u'll remember sum words of mine...coz may I will neber be able to forget ur stories and poems....in fact there sum....that I still cherish....and waqt mile to dubara padhti hu...hehe...😉

Hi Sumaiya,

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

di!

(this is my first stating word whether whatever i wanna say...i just start with this one)

this poem is toooooooooooo good!

i mean first of u described the feelings of romance.......

then u showed that it was all but a show......

it was not real but reel......

i knew that something funny wud happen.......

and this is what it came down!

i started laughing.........

vaise bhi itni saari heezen sirf filmon ya phir drama mein hi hoti hain.......

real mein nahi.........

yeh to sach hi hai.....

jab bhi koi acting karta hai........jab tak uska mood banta hai, tab tak mein toh director cut bol deta hai........

aur phir saai ki saari fake cheezein chali jaati hain.........

i feel its funny to the actors.......

i cud only and only give out my big smile on this.......

its so good.........

what a difference between real and reel feelings......

we often wish that hamare idol couple on tv....... real mein bhi couple ban jaaye.......jabki we forget that its just a rel life......unki khud ki bhi koi real life hai..... (well i too wish that for only my mayur)

but i know the poem is such lovely woven with words......

that u cant help but get involve in this.........

loved each bit of it........

everything........

all early lines looked like a tv show to me.........and i imagined my mayur in it.....

and the last lines made me laugh very hard.......

Ankhon mey hum Dubey,Saanson Ko Sunn rahey the,
Bahon mey Ek Dusrey Ke maano Jhool rahey the,
Itney mey Ayi Nirdeshak Ki Fatkaar,
Khatm Hua Naatak Parda Giir Gaya Yaar!

too good!

simply awesome!

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak dear,

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

the ending was defiantly an anti climax when everything seemed so romantic a drama it turned out to be gr8 poem dear

HI Jyothi dear,

Originally posted by: monikaseth

nkhon mey hum Dubey,Saanson Ko Sunn rahey the,
Bahon mey Ek Dusrey Ke maano Jhool rahey the,
Itney mey Ayi Nirdeshak Ki Fatkaar,
Khatm Hua Naatak Parda Giir Gaya Yaar!

What a cute ending hahhahahaha each and every line perfect & equally describe emotions awesome thank you for this sweet poem dear.

Hi Monika,

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Mahak dear,

Yes tum mujhe Diii bulati ho...many of my online frineds call me diii , I feel nice that u make me feel as if u r yet younger ot me thoguh u r mature and feel that close as well... i always love ot read diii as i know thast the way to show u brign cloer people.. waise bhi meri umra ab aunty diii bulaney jitni to hohigayii hai.. hahah..😆

Yes dear when i was poting i felt that u may feel or imagine Mayur scene and how we feel but ye in real Arti may be different and feel different.. reel mey to kitna kuch reheresed hota hai..real mey hi spontanity ati hai😉... waise i like Mayur scene a lot.. many time i watch only ther scene and change the channel if they bore with the others..hheh the magic of romance can be fel tiwht Mayur for sure... fake nahi lagta ..

glad dear u liked the poem and enjoyed readign..and the last lines made u smiel laugh na.. chalo made my day by knowign u all enjoyed and had a smile reading..thnsk dear for commentign with such warmth everythime....u r simple rockign as well.. luv u

Bhoomi

oh thanks di!

by the way.........main sirf unhi logon ko di bulati hoon jo mujhe ache lagte hain.........aur aap aunty nahi ho.........

ab yeh mat poochna ki tum is waqt onlnie kaise ho.......kyunki i am here to update one of my stories.......

main toh sirf unhe dekhne ke liye hi mjht dekhti hoon............lekin add mein bhi palatti nahi hoon........kyunki agar unke ek bhi scene miss ho gaya toh?aur aapne sahi kaha..........magic of romance can be felt by each action of mayur.........they r the best! they rock!

i comment each time with warnth becoz i feel ur poem touching me.......they r always so sweet......and i wonder if any one could resist herself from commenting on it........i dont think that u can have silent readers..........

u too make my day by ur beautiful poems.........

love u.........

Mahak

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

oh thanks di!

by the way.........main sirf unhi logon ko di bulati hoon jo mujhe ache lagte hain.........aur aap aunty nahi ho.........

ab yeh mat poochna ki tum is waqt onlnie kaise ho.......kyunki i am here to update one of my stories.......

main toh sirf unhe dekhne ke liye hi mjht dekhti hoon............lekin add mein bhi palatti nahi hoon........kyunki agar unke ek bhi scene miss ho gaya toh?aur aapne sahi kaha..........magic of romance can be felt by each action of mayur.........they r the best! they rock!

i comment each time with warnth becoz i feel ur poem touching me.......they r always so sweet......and i wonder if any one could resist herself from commenting on it........i dont think that u can have silent readers..........

u too make my day by ur beautiful poems.........

love u.........

Mahak

HI Mahak,

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

HI Mahak,

i am glad dear that i am amogn those few whom u call dii.. and thanks to God for brgin us here in touch to share to care and to knwo each other... U know aajkal i do remember u a lot while watching MJHT.. in every scene of Mayur i wondere what u must be feelign.. eheh😆...

And dearmy poems its never difficult to write them. in few minutes it happens..only problem is to type them and post which needs the comp ..and i am havign tough time weekends only i get neoguh time.. hey next week i will be very busy so no post as such.... and to let u know i have started workign writign actually on a story with nupur and mayank..its simple and when i finsihed it totally i will post it willtake some weeks as next week i am outsattion.. its all for u ok.

tc

Bhoomi

a mayur story?????

wow!

i wud be very very excited to read it!

u know that i love them toooooooooo much........

i only write on them......

and i agree..........if u want to write poems.........only ur mood is needed.........

i too have written many poems.......but there is only one poem which i think is ok.....but it's too long....

so u too have stated watching mjht?????yipee!

well each moment of mayur, i have different set of emotions in my heart.......

they cry, i feel like murdering the culprit who made them cry.......and i too cry.......

when they have romantic scenes then i blush very hard.......

when they do anything.......i am involved with them........