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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: sri_4
hey bhoomi great poem again
on frienship thats really good one..
loved these lines

In our fear of what will happen now,
They know the technique to make us smile somehow,

Our Anger or rage at failures, they bear it all,
& say with a smile, we r there for u at every call,

true friends make us smile n cheer us they leave their sorrow n make us happy...
like u with u r beautiful writings dear friend!!
sri:-)

HI Sri,

Yes friends have that magic.. whatver i wrote in this poem is real true and common as well.. its not as if they solve evry problem they give their support, they listen to us and make us know how special we r and that make us get back our confidence.. get out of epression.. Awww so sweet of u Sri, u included me in such friends . i wish i can do anythign little to cheer soemone .. if any one smiles with my work i am happiest for sure... Thanks dear for encoruagign and most important for been a lovely friend to have.. hope we continue stay in this bond ..

luvu dear

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Hey Bhoomi... Kya yaar... itna achcha likhti hai tu ke main toh hairaan ho jaati hoon... kahaan kahaan se leke aati hai itne achche ideas? aur mujhe aise ideas kyun nahin aate? Too good yaar!!!!!!!!

Bhikri meri duniya was beautiful... and Friendship... that's my fav theme in life... For without friends and friendship there would be no love, no life... Its the basic foundation for any relation.. and I am so happy that I found you and many new friends here on IF..... for me my world revolves around friends after my family...

Friends stand by us though day and night

To show us the path between wrong and right

They are the best gift given by God,

To get us out from anything odd,

They become our strength and hope to face anything

They are the ones who makes us something from nothing.

This one was not as good as yours, but just felt like writing one....😊😊😊

HI Divya,

main batauu main itna achaa kyun likhti hun, woh meri ek dost bani hai Divya woh mujhee itna itneyy sweet commetns deti hai ki main bhi thodi sweet lagti hun and such concpets i can share .. hehe thats so much flattergin to hear that u feel i am talented in some way . i dotn know i still never feel i am a pot or talented..creative i like to listen but i hope my lernign process my work gets better and not worst..

good to know u liked Bikhri meri duniya and this friendship one too.. this poem is all that i thing is abotu frindship..i dotn belive in givign ur life for a friend but standign listen very common sentiments simple things i wanted to write which i too feel my friends have done.. good to know u felt the same dear..

wow!! that a very lovely poem on frindship.. loks liek u r blessed with great friends around..and i am blessed to have u as my friend for sure.. u write so well and i feel good that with talent like urs u feel i am writign well that such a big compliment for me who still feels i am immature in my work yet..

Friends surely are the best gift.. i have very few clsoe friends as such whom i confided my sorrow and yes thye came into my life when God sent them as angels i belive God sent them and i belive my bodn here with u all lovely friend is also God sent... thanks for been such great people... i feel proud abotu my readers who read my work they are all so mature talented themselves.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

a poem on frdship!!!!!!

cool!

i loved this poem......

its absolutely what we feel!

Tense situations & Tears of Disappointments,
They r the only ones u confined ur sentiments,

these lines are splendid!

seriously..........when we need our frds, they do help us and give us support...........

all the readers are too good as a frd too.........they always encourage u to write more and more......i love my readers......

sometimes we share secrets with our frds..........those which we even dont share with our parents........they do understand us........

In our fear of what will happen now,
They know the technique to make us smile somehow,

chahe jaisa bhi mood ho.........frds hamesha hi khush kar dete hai.........

Our Anger or rage at failures, they bear it all,
& say with a smile, we r there for u at every call,

Their luv is soothing like Hymns & r so Kind,
True friends r precious gems really hard to find.

awesome lines di!

this poem is too good!

loved each bit of it!

awesome!

love,
Mahak

HI Mahak sweety..

friendship pey likhun and when my friends here like reading it i am so so much happy .. u liked those lines. yes even i confide few thigns to my friends which i dotn even tomy family ... friends have a very very special place in our life.. as if we can be ourself and not bonded by any pressure.. we dotn want to be fake but say it all and it helps..many times these small things by friends make us get out of diccult siutaions .as its alwyas hte feelgin that thre is someone out there who cares and understnad u..which is soo very muich needed in these times..

frineds liek u are a blessign , they love, they care, they value and they spread just positivity ..i am lukcy to get such a young friend here..ehehehh😆.. age doesnt matter na..

hope our frinedship stays like this for a looooooooooooooong time.. and i cherish a lot of memoreis in our friendhsip uptil now.. lucky bklessed i know i am.. with aswesoem set of friends here.. love u for lovign me so mcuh and making me feel special ,...

thanks Mahak for commenting and this poem i was just waitign to hear from u ..as if soemwhere u shoudl read it i felt..dotn know why but i felt.. and glad u liked this.. luvu tc

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#324

heyyy bhoomi
read all ur poems
they were just fab
do write more
thanx for the pm

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#325

i tried my hand at this one and few more whcih i will be posting as well..and u have no option but to read that torture u see😆..

Hi Bhoomi I think you mistook my comment. I meant to say you are good in English poetry but better in Hindi. similarly you are good with humour but you manage to bring pathos into a poetry with 2 lines. It was meant as a compliment. Reading your poems can never be a torture. If it was I wouldn't be reading it as I seriously don't believe in torturing myself in any way.Best wishes tc.ssh57

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ssh57

@ssh57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#326

Hi Bhoomi, 'FRIENDSHIP' a nice simple poem but everyword rings true. Liked it very much. Love ssh57

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#327

Bikhari Meri Duniya:

I felt like u were depicting the miserable condition of Haiti...I mean thats the thing first came to my mind....but not only Haiti is a victim...I knw dat. And the first para was showing the happiness n then this sudden earthquake se sab kuch hil gaya....U definitely did it wonderfully Bhoomi.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#328

Friendship:

Wat to say....true frnds r really hard to find....hehe. And I think frndship is essential in every relation....I mean u dont need ur frnds to be related wid u sumhow....but u do need ur relations to be frndly wid u....so I think its an asset n not every1 is blessed wid it....though I'm happy to hav sum realy gr8 frnds hehe....and the lines u hav written n each n every word is just so wonderful...perfectly depicting the importance of frndship....it was just lovely....amazing dear!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy bhoomi
read all ur poems
they were just fab
do write more
thanx for the pm

Hi Seema,

wow!! good to know dear that u liked the poems.. .. so sweet of u to say its fab.. just trygin to put some stories thoughts together.. yup will be posting more..and hope u like them as well.. thanks for commenting..tc

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: ssh57
i tried my hand at this one and few more whcih i will be posting as well..and u have no option but to read that torture u see😆..

Hi Bhoomi I think you mistook my comment. I meant to say you are good in English poetry but better in Hindi. similarly you are good with humour but you manage to bring pathos into a poetry with 2 lines. It was meant as a compliment. Reading your poems can never be a torture. If it was I wouldn't be reading it as I seriously don't believe in torturing myself in any way.Best wishes tc.ssh57

Hi Shardha,

come on.. i was not taking anythign negative at all.. I sometimes am not happy with my work and i really felt My love wasnt written that well.. but i dont change things as the thoughts dont coem again in the same insticnt so .. and there is no doubt in my mind at least to say ..i am comfortable to write hindi much more than english atleast in poems.. I have written In matromony a long englih poetic story .. i felt confident to write that only after my english verses in many of hte stories i wrote.. My love is written way too back..and u know i always always tell my friends and u may have read in the intro of many stories too that i feel sometimes that i am gogint o eat ur brains..😆 dear torture ahhhh it was all in good humour and on a lighter note.. 😃 I know u had written u felt both hindi n englsih poem were written nicely how could i misunderstand u .. naa.. U are a sweet person and i know U bring warmth to me with ur comments.. ....

Get use to it Shardha, whatver my readers say .. i always know n belive i am still learnign and my thoughts for me r good but i never feel sure of my skill in the literary aspect of poetry.. may be its simple innocent attmept and Feels so good that i have so many of u to share that with ..and feel touched that my simple words coudl brign those emtoions out..

thanks Shardha for commentign and also for been so sweet to clear those things and make me know how much u care for me and can only encoruage me.. i truly know that dear.. tc luv u

Bhoomi

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