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Posted: 15 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey was a nice n hilarious poem


hee good to know u enjoyed and had a good time reading this weird poem😆
tc
bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

oh my god bhoomi
it was so hillarious hehehe!!
bechara ladki dekhkhe kuch zyaada hi expect karne laga aur wooh nikli koi aur..-hai hai!!kya ho gaya.. 😆
loved this side of u rs it was small yet so funny,,,


Hai!!, Unki Ankhen Saagar jaisi thi,
Bas Unhe dekh Dil de bathi thi,
Unki Ankhon key Lense jo gir gaye,
Woh to Meri Maa ke gale lag gaye. Hai!!,
Unki Hassi thi Kitnee pyari,
Jaise Moti hi beekher diye the,
Raaz jaanaa to ho gaya tha dil bhaari,
Saari Punji jo dentist ko de diye the. Hai!!,
Unki chal,dhal kya jabardast thi,
Dekh unhe dil mey hoti masti thi,
Magar Unki Awaaz Sun haal bura tha,
Aisa lagaa Engine mey Kachra bhara tha.



😆

good wishes..
n keep laughing
😆

sri:-)

Hi Sri,
ehhehe yup i treid this one..and glad that it made u smile and laugh.. weird one na..😆😆😉 .. i have attempted humour in writeups many occasion but not much in poems.. but all this words encorauge me to write more of these ... i will share some more weird peoms. and i hope u smile more .. i want u all to smiel more with my poems...
this poem is a bit silly but soemwhere true... we expect somethign else and we get to know somewthign else..many tiems i do have seen men havign great physique but when they open their mouth the oive the language the grammar makes us feel he is only worked on his body but not on his brain... 😉
Sri u too keep laughin smiling... tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Khushi Ka Pal


Aaj Ka Din Sach mey bahut pyara hai,
Mere Sapno mey bhargaya rang sara hai,

Apni Awaaz mey gaane ko mann karta hai,
Sang apne sab ko nachane ko ji karta hai,

Miloo door Tak hassi sunaee deti hai,
Ek ajeeb si masti dikhaee deti hai,

Aasmaan-Bhoomi Mano jaise sath Jhool rahey ho,
Dil ke Maano Ek Ek taar Khul rahey ho,

Har Taraff Juhi Ki Khushboo Mehak rahi hai,
Kuch Anchui Gudguddi, kasak si ho rahi hai,

Khushi Paakar Drishya kuch Aisa Hai,
Mayur ne Manoo baadal dekh liye jaisa hai,

Khushi Ka karan bhi batlati hoon,
Ander ke Aanand ko aap sang Banti hoon,

Unhone Mujhe Apna sapse Acha dost maan liya hai,
Mujhsey Apney pyaar ka Ijhahaar kuch iskader kiya hai,

"Jaanta hoon Tum Mujhse pyaar karti ho,
Mera Jawaab bhi to tum sunana chahati ho,

Tumhe Sharm aa rahi hai,to pehal mujhe hi karne do,
Mere Dil mey tumhari Khaas jagah ka bayaan karne do,

Apne Aapse jyada Main tumse Pyaar karta hoon,
Apne Is Rishte Ko sabse Khubsoorat maanta hoon".


...........Bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey bhoomika
great poem again
just loved it
it was so sweet n lovely u put out emotions of a girl after her proposal very nicely..its just so sweet..
loved these lines..
Aaj Ka Din Sach mey bahut pyara hai,
Mere Sapno mey bhargaya rang sara hai,👏
Apni Awaaz mey gaane ko mann karta hai,
Sang apne sab ko nachane ko ji karta hai,👏
Miloo door Tak hassi sunaee deti hai,
Ek ajeeb si masti dikhaee deti hai,👏

Apne Aapse jyada Main tumse Pyaar karta hoon,
Apne Is Rishte Ko sabse Khubsoorat maanta hoon".😃😃
sri:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Bhoomi... Tum toh mujhe apne poems ke saath marvaaogi yaar.. Khushi ka pal was just awesome but the best line I loved was apne iss rishte ko main khoobsurat manta hoon...I think mein bhi hum donon ke iss rishte ko khoobsurat maanti hoon....
And in the previous poem Hai... this was a comedy one.. showed the child in you... the best line i loved was" Engine ka saara kachra bhara tha" and "apni saari punji Dentist ko jo diya tha"...
Chal teri bhi aas poori kar dete hain... autograph nahin chahiye tujhse.... ek achchi se dosti dede....
tumhari har kavita mein hain sachchayi
jo dil ko har baar choo jaati hai
hai mere dil ki geharai se yehi aarzoo
ki tum hamesha yunhi likhti raho
aur ham sab ko aise khushiyaa batti raho...
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Posted: 15 years ago
diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aap kya likhte ho...

itz awesome yar👏 .. first time maine ye poem read ki n i m speechless...

very veryyyyy heart touching poems... aapne to shabdo mein jaan daal di..

keep it up.... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow di!

this poem was just outstanding......

and u used my name too 😃

wow!

this is the best thing i can have......

and this poem is simply so sweet..............

how she explains her happiness is simply amazing.........

u used ur name too.......

this poem showed confession...........

so beautifully........

wow!

this is simply mind blowing...........

aap har baar itni achi poem kaise likhti ho?

i am simply loss at words.......

har baar main sochti hoon ki kya naya kahoon?

aur har baar khud ko repeat karna padta hai............



wow di!

this poem shows what a girl feels when someone whom she loves also loves her.........

simply brilliant.........

loved it a lot.........

do write more.............

great!


love,
hugs and kisses,
and all the happiness ur way,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey bhoomika
great poem again
just loved it
it was so sweet n lovely u put out emotions of a girl after her proposal very nicely..its just so sweet..
loved these lines..
Aaj Ka Din Sach mey bahut pyara hai,
Mere Sapno mey bhargaya rang sara hai,👏
Apni Awaaz mey gaane ko mann karta hai,
Sang apne sab ko nachane ko ji karta hai,👏
Miloo door Tak hassi sunaee deti hai,
Ek ajeeb si masti dikhaee deti hai,👏

Apne Aapse jyada Main tumse Pyaar karta hoon,
Apne Is Rishte Ko sabse Khubsoorat maanta hoon".😃😃
sri:-)

Hi Sri,
I had just posted and saw u reservign ur post.. wow!! u read it garama garam as it was taken out from the pan 😆... i had not even fisnihed sending my Pms to all😆.. Yes this is a very special poem for me.. dont get me wrogn i wasnt proposed😆😳.. but it was written in a situation all different and this poem has a very very special place in my heart.. when i see comments from u all where u felt the meoiton and enjoyed so much loved reading it.. it makes me feel so proud of me trygin my hand at writign this one😃
Glad that u loved most of the lines... hmm did u blush with it? hope all get such happy moments in their life throguh out not proposal but just the happiness.. i wish the same for u ...😃 thanks for mcommenting..
luv u tc
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi bhoomi
i just read your first poem

just read and it touched my heart very truely you write the thoughts llike how life give us different shades
i love this poem even i write poem but not like that
i love it bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

Hey Bhoomi... Tum toh mujhe apne poems ke saath marvaaogi yaar.. Khushi ka pal was just awesome but the best line I loved was apne iss rishte ko main khoobsurat manta hoon...I think mein bhi hum donon ke iss rishte ko khoobsurat maanti hoon....

And in the previous poem Hai... this was a comedy one.. showed the child in you... the best line i loved was" Engine ka saara kachra bhara tha" and "apni saari punji Dentist ko jo diya tha"...
Chal teri bhi aas poori kar dete hain... autograph nahin chahiye tujhse.... ek achchi se dosti dede....
tumhari har kavita mein hain sachchayi
jo dil ko har baar choo jaati hai
hai mere dil ki geharai se yehi aarzoo
ki tum hamesha yunhi likhti raho
aur ham sab ko aise khushiyaa batti raho...

HI Divya,
dost to hum hai hi na... and i am glad u liked reading these poems and enjoyed ur time thats what i wanted... so u r right urs n my relationship is also Khubsurat thanks for giving me space and encouragign my work so much with so much warmth.. awww a poem for me... lovely.. Hamesha likhti rahu.. so swet.. i hope i do continue writing and hope it makes many smile and enjoy and spread some postive vibes around.. luv u for makign me feel so special with ur poetry for me.. Meri kavita mey sacchaii hai ..hmm thats a great compliment i hope to contiue this journey with u all for much longer time... 😃
Not an autograph but certainly as i told u a letter for u ....
Likhna chahun ek chitthi tumhare Naam,
Priy 'Divya' sey shuruwat karu yeh Paigaam,
Divya Tum ney meri kavitaoon ko sarhaya hai,
Meri Kavitaoo ko Dil sey chaha hai ,
Tumhara Shukriya jo Meri kavitoo ko sachaa samjha,
Apna yeh Apaar sneh meri orr jo tumney Bheja,
Main koshish karungi yunhi likhti rahu,
Tum hamesha muskurati raho main bas itna chahu....
tc dear
Bhoomi

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